Kriya on Holi (a short story ) Part 3 on pg 13 - Page 13

Ooooooo miiiiii goshhhh!!!! 😲 Lol this was the most romantic updateee. 😳 .. It wassss cuutteeee..... Juz luved it.... Great no actually fenomonal job writing itt. 👏 ... Haayyeeee im still lost in them 😳   Once again good job 😊

Originally posted by: RoKa PraNeev

SURBHIIIIIIIII...EE KA KIYA TUMNE...MUJHE BEHOSH KAR DIYA?omgg sachhiiii 😲SURBHI EM STILL UNDER D EFFECT OF UR STORY N HOW CAN U DO DIS...?END IT SO SOON?HOW CNAN U DO DIS SURBHI.aww nechu what shall i do .i really have no idea how to continue it ..EM SOOOO IN LOVE WID UR FF.myy pleasureee 😳..OMG I JUST LUBB DIS BHAANG WAALI PRAATIGYA...SO CUTE CHUBBY N BUBBLY...N D WAY SHE TALKS...ESP D BACCHA WAALI BAAT...AWWWW I JUST LUBBD IT...ESP WEN SHE ASKED 'HAMRA BACHAA KAB AYEGA'.yeahh even i lubbed that csne and amost everyone did .thankss.N I JUST LUBD IT WEN KRISHU SAID 'KAASH TUM YE TAB KEHTI JAB TUM APNI HOSH MEIN HOTI ' N ALSO 'AYYE BABU HUMARA BACHA BAHUT JALDI AAYEGA'...HOW I WISH DAT IT HAPPENS SOON IN DA SERIAL..omgg yeahh yeah kriya's childd .WHY CANT UU CONTINUE DIS SURBJIII?PLS CONTINUE NNAA!PLSSSSS MERI BAAT MAANO SURBHI!ohh okk i'll sureelyy sureelyy thinkk about it and as soonn as i get a new idea i'll continue this storyy 😃 

Originally posted by: zash_LubUKriYa

Surbzz,
kaa bey?u blushing?na na na. u knoww how much i was blushingg while writingg itt .it was the first time i wrote an intimate scne that too of krishnaaa ..... 😳 😳.😳..my chheeks were dark redd.it ws me hu ws blushing as though fel into a kumkum box.awwwwww  .kaa baat hai!omg!!sooo roman tic n intense!!thanksss hamein maar dala. ahhh now i can say that my story was romanticc ..u blushed naa .....😳 😉.thankss aziii

Edited by surbhisachwani - 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rockin_gal

Ooooooo miiiiii goshhhh!!!! 😲 Lol this was the most romantic updateee. 😳 ..thankssIt wassss cuutteeee..... Juz luved it..glad u loved itt 😛.. Great no actually fenomonal job writing itt. 👏 .aw thank u so muchh .. Haayyeeee im still lost in them 😳  kriyaa kriyaa 😳 Once again good job 😊

Originally posted by: prettymeena44

it is awesome and nice mainly that funniest part humara bacha ha everyone loved that part ...thankss keep it up good work thanx for beautiful storythanksss

Originally posted by: piyarapiyari

wow shurbhi amazing sorry for the late reply bt wa busy well it was awsome romantic funny innocent and sexy u cross all the limits of beehodapan haha ......😳😉 wah bhai wah kya baat hai hahaha just kidding bt u make all of us also very beehoda pehle se thi r ho gae enjoying reading ur updatesaww and i loved making u ..lol ..but yeahh krishna arhaan have made me behooda ... u r having a very good writing skill thankss so more sis i love all the scenes bt the most was hmara bacha kab ae ga wounderful sis aww yeahh that scne was a classic 😳mindblowing carry on thanks for ur lovely ff love it and love kriya more hope cv,s take any idea from our writersaww that wil be a treat to watychbt behhooda apna dimagh chalate hai par kya kare un ki waja se hi kriya mile so love ityeahh thats rightt 😳

OMG.....did i ever tell u how much i lov u n ur post!!

Originally posted by: coolfattin

OMG.....did i ever tell u how much i lov u n ur post!!aww reallyyy ..thankss for lovingg it so muchh ...love u tooo 

 

LOVE IT * 100000thanksss ...thatssss a bigg complimenttt 

 

Plzz update fast...my patience for Kriya romance seems to be fading away!!aww yeahh for now the story has ended but veryy soon i'll come with a new idea and continue this storyy surellyyy ......

 

Thnkzz!!myy pleasureee 😃

Originally posted by: surbhisachwani

Thnkz..

wow its vry nice gud imagination😛