Kriya on Holi (a short story ) Part 3 on pg 13 - Page 8

Surbzzz...

Sweets humko itna blush nahi karwao..

itna awesum part tha...

Precap was ☺️

oh shurbhi it,s so nice it,s not important that every time we get hot romantic scenes of them these type of scenes also we want it,s awsome love it love their masti always wants that waiting for next

SO FINALLY MA SURBHI UPDATED...IT WAS VERY NICE DEAR...I LUBD D ROOM PART!IT WAS VERY NICE...I LUBBD IT....SURBZZ GIVE US A ROMANTIC INTIMATE ONE!EM SOOOO EXCITED TO READ D REST YAAR!WID DA BHAANG WAALI PRATZ...OMG EM DYING TO READ D NEXT PART!PLS DNT MAK ME WAIT FOR SO LONG...OLJJJJJJJ!UPDATE SOOOOOOOON!LUBYYYAAA MWAAAAH!UPDATE SOON

Surbzz.....
wah wah!!!!!kaa baat hai!!👏ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
it was sooooooo cute!!!!!i lubd each n every KriYa scene!esp,the photo of sleeping Prats.....wowwwww!!!!!!how sweet our krishna is!!!kaash,aisa hi serial mein hua tho?surely i'll faint!!!
plzzzzz update karbo jaldi!!!waiting for kriya dance......

very nice ..... lzzz continue .....

Originally posted by: swtgrl92

cant wait till next update

this was awesome n cute thanksss ......

i lubbb it 

Cant wait till next update😊 aww ..sure i'll update soonnnnn 😃

Originally posted by: zubi622

wow it was a very nice update thanksss

n thnx for it😊 my pleasureee

Originally posted by: rockin_gal

How can u say it was nt romantic???i was not satisfied with this chapter ..i know i would have done lots better than this ...It was very cute funny and romantic..thankss for appreciatinggI jus luvd how he arranged the special room for her ahhh gosh i wish i hav sum1 like him 😳 hehehe..ahhh ofcourse u'l have onee like him but not him haa ....cux he is mine .....😳.😳😉hahhahaha Well good job and plzzz continue soon 😊sure sure and my ff is too cooming very very soonn 😃

Originally posted by: shumi.

surbi...seriously...u have a great writing skill...wo kya kaha thay hai...chaagaye👏..aww thanks shumii diii .ur flow of writing is very good...romantinc nahi tho kya...waise i am not interested in kriya romance😆....keep it up👍🏼 thanksss

Originally posted by: Amit_Mehra

gud one surbhi luved it,thankss yaar romance kahan gaya? i knoww amit ..infact i didnt like this chapterr .........i just wrote whatever came to my mindd ..but i m surely gonna make up for the third onee