Originally posted by: lovetheserialπNiha,
Thanks for this thought provoking writeup with clarity and 'non-nonsence' roundup.
I want to start with the perfect cup of my tea in the morning that has the masala thrown in to sensuate my deep inner elements sweeping my entire mind and body with the fragrance of spices ' what spices ' the ingredients for the story ' love, pleasure, mystical element of the woman, the aggressive nebulous trait s of the man, the unwritten code of immorality and edible sexual intonations that make the story much more weathered and mature and most of all the variety of secular and social forces at work in the modern world that drive human beings to fight, to win, to throw chances to the wind in attaining the ultimate victory to live their lives. This is the GEET HSP I want.
Each character brings completeness but the unborn baby does not have to be a part of the progression of life in this story ' why ?
The baby has been the initiator, Maan the instrument and Geet the ultimate end of the story. Nothing beyond Geet - except exemplary ideals that are abstract and that which Geet as a woman evokes in other women to emulate. Here the baby can be done away with once the process of initiation has been complete, the instrument needs to exist to be the driving force for the ultimate end. The baby has played its part well to give us the best of the struggling Geet in a forlorn and desperate world and often the initiation process gives way and fades into the background to allow the process of groW*H and ongoing deliberations to the end. Maan and Geet have to exist to give that charm and magic that are present in the wind, we can feel it but not see, present in the water, we can again be refreshed and tippled by drips of it but not see it, present in the fire, that devours us but not see it, present in the air, the love that we can experience but not see , present in the ether and space as a song of the lark, that we can hear but not see. Maan and Geet through their evoking every element in us through their acting, needs to be one entity that surpasses the story line and makes us stand in awe of them. So Maan and Geet needs to exist till the end. The initiation complete. It can die.
Point No.1 covered here:
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The idea as I perceive that fans want an immediate MC for an immediate passionate consummation is literally out of ignorance. The persistent natter for an MC is primarily because of an *** doctor who happened to disallow consummation till delivery of baby period. Wisdom far-fetched and a proposal too vague from an intelligent doctor!! Can we blame fans for trying to knock periodically at the judges door for justice in the passion because you yourself Nihu happened to say that all passionate dance sequences were performed with her tummy in bloom! Anyways we all know that if the mother hen does not sit on the eggs with love and warmth, the eggs are sworn to decay and breakage, without a second thought!
Yes Maan Geet and Dev are required for completing the story. The elasticity of diverse parts of the story can be stretched to the extent of allowing us to see the beauty of terrific emotions and sensitivity and deliberations that make for a thrilling love story enhanced to becoming a pulse quickening, brain teasing adventure of sorts.
Nihu, so many interesting twists within the story line can certainly bring the all satisfying, most unexpected tale of Geet forgiving Dev. Yes, it is possible to bring this very human aspect that draws its parallel from the religions that feed our heart and make us humble. Forgiveness for repentence. A bhabi forgiving her bro-in-law for reasons best left to the CVs to explore. But I would never allow Dev to escape the Law of the Land. The constitutional law that draws its strength from punishing the wretched sinner who has committed the crime for which there is no escape. The law that sets us to score on the pages of justice. Justice has to play its scales of balance, then we become enlightened to realize that justice has been served to Geet. Perversion and injustice cannot be tolerated, but human nature is neither rigid nor deprived of humanity, and forgiveness on her part, a tolerance from her heart of Dev is acceptable in my opinion, but the law of justice prevails like the karmic law. A fiction perhaps this story of Geet but the harsh realities and ideals that give hope are to be drawn and cherished by the large community of today's modern youth.
The baby is innocent. The CVs can give it life or end it. The connect to the baby has been at its hilt only in the last few episodes. It also seemed like Geet never was with a full womb. So the absurdity of a baby can be gracefully withdrawn.
Point No.2 covered here:
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A conflict within the DEV GEET MAAN triangle need not be based on a baby. It can be for delivering the future heir to come ' after a consummation with Maan or an unexpected eventful happening with Geet again ! The aspirations to control KC and wealth of the family another point of conflict. Khandan mystery with its fair share of dark pasts. Geets rise to power within KC and conflict of interests in decision making and handling the power struggle within the nexus of the family. Return of the villainous sis-in-law!
Are CVs without further ideas to transport this story to its maximum visible ingenuity? Then what are the creative's ??? Are their ideas with limitations, are they struggling with anguished attempts to break free and can't sow a proper story line with a highly accomplished storyline that is gripping????
Cheers Nihu.
well written and agree to wat niha said in the post
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