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CRIMES OF PASSION part 23 page 144 (Page 92)

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 9:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mystique_girl

Yahoooooooooo..La la la la la la....This update was for me Big smile Woooooooow great Clap Sorry for being late to comment..I just read it and I was like Shocked Thank you sooooooo much for trying to write differently just for me!! 

I loved it. Its a pity there is just a "LIKE" button, if I would have had my way, I would have given it a "SUPER LIKE" LOL 

Maan kidnapping Geet was the ultimate plot. The precap had me tensed but you just turned it around...and thanks for a detailed version of "mischief". You have done justice to their characters even in the most romantic scene...it was super hot...I wish I can drop this idea in my husband's ear...ROFL

Can't imagine "Bahubali" Maan getting scared because of injection to his daughter...it was toooooo cute....Loved how each of them play the dominant parts in their relationship just where it is needed...I am falling more and more in love with this Maan of yours ...please share him with meLOL

Thanks again !! Love you Star




I AM NOT GIVING AN INCH OF BAHUBALI MAAN TO ANYBODY...YOU CAN HAVE MY PINJAR MAAN OR RUHANIYAT MAAN OR EVEN GURMEET BUT BAHUBALI IS MINE...I AM EVEN READY TO FIGHT A DUAL FOR HIMROFL

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 9:57am | IP Logged
Omg its a sizzling hot part

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 10:04am | IP Logged
fantastic update
cont soon

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 10:47am | IP Logged

Part - 13 : Wow !!! Loved the curt  interaction btwn Maneet & the family Cool

Part - 14 : The conference sequence was SUPERB Thumbs Up . Kudos to Geet for the slap Clap

Part - 15 : Blushing      Blushing       Blushing         Blushing       Blushing        Blushing       Blushing       Blushing

All 3 parts were EXCELLENT ; Very good story flow Star   Star

I loved it ...  Heart
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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 11:02am | IP Logged
thanx darlingWink
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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 11:03am | IP Logged
Love is in air.
Romantic and Hot!!!
wonderful part............loved it!!!
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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Superb part... loved it
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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 11:23am | IP Logged
So he kidnapped her again..... only this time she slapped him.....

so this becomes the 13th slap.....hahahaha.....

lovely update....
cont soon....

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