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CRIMES OF PASSION part 23 page 144 (Page 67)

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superb update... loved it...
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ooo dear just loved the part that was fab i just came d saw part 10 i was dam excited nd wen after a while u such a sweet heart
updated the next part thank u so much 4 that
well loved both the parts
the choice of song was perfect suited geet perfectly
loved the way how she made him awake becuming a perfect house wife the way she arranged his room evrything she duing 4 him nd the way yet so typical she asked him to come earlierseems all so perfect
lol maan getting naughty with his wifey he kew well she would cum nd make him feed that was so sweet she fulfilled wat he wanted
i expected sumthig exactly wat u wrote i was sure maan would say sumthing
he gets sweeter at times i feel d his sweetness we love bt geet sumtimes dont
as at this time s how many slaps he gt if he wudnt b sweet at this time myt wot b getting this much beatings 4rm his wife bt last nyt me too was thinking abt it
as going by maanz sweetness i tot he would surely ask her to leave nd as she already knew shez in love she will get wild bt wildness to this extent i really expected that was sumthing beyond to wat i tot countless slaps i was like glad she didnt punched him or kicked him bt loved the way
u kno as in the serial nd many ffz i have seen grand confession u kno sumthing like larger than life bt as ur them is simple u really ur confession tooo simple perfect 4 the story characters as maan shown by u will definitely confess his love like this he wont du anything huge
although he loves her he will express it by his emotions feelings small sweet cute acts u kno acts of care as he showed last time i loved wen he asked wat if u bleed again this is love nt by taking her to sum 5 start res. so u kno myt nt by money although 4 him everything of his will b completely hers coz he himslef loose to her the way she rules him he definitely loves his ruling sherni
well love this part dear it was fab far tooo simple i really falled 4 its simplicty loved the way he was trying his best to make her happy nt to let her down as he did last time truly we can call him as a BECHARA kahna phas gaya bt now no1 can help him
well precap seems interesting i feel geet is gona ask him to study further atleast i feel this nd if yes then again c diff. usually wifes study after marriage this would b 1st time that a man will study after marriage
well lets c wat u have further 4 us
im sure u have lots more gr8 parts 4 us
well ans 2 ur q 4mr side will b
i tnk geet has forgiven him by knowinh his past i tn she understood the fact  that he was scared of lossing her so he chose this path to get her nd her pic in his cupboard is i tnk a big proof as she too to the same
i will say she is in love now myt 4 1st she would have fallen 4 attraction physically bt noe knowing him more she is falling for his good side as she said at the breakfast table that he has a GOLDEN HEARTnd maan too realized thatw as sumthing out of the act so i would now call it love nd as he handsum who wont fall 4 him so she too as she is the wifey
no she wont accuse him later y will she if she has forgiven him then she wont nd now as she has accepted the fact of life this was her destiny that way or this way it had to b happen so i dont tnk she will accuse him esp after knowing his dark past she wont
so du update soon next
part will b waiting eagerly
loved the parts
keep writing dear
god bless u

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God has giftd humans wit ability to forget wit time, maan had commitd a crime bt tat was hs way of expressin hs possession n love ove geet b'coz he dnt knw hw to treat women b'coz of hs past i knw it stil not justified bt if geet accept hm than their first encountr wil b thng of past.

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OMG ..... this update was innocence and cuteness personified...
 
Maan is soooo freaking adorable ... mera jaanu bacha chup chaap maar bhi khaa gaya .... Geet is a pakka sherni ... i think she will bring a very pleasant and positive change in his life ...
 
as for you questions... wat Maan did was wrong.., he loved her the moment he saw her and he was so deprived of love for such a loong time he cudnt think of a better way of making her his...
 
theres definitely physical attraction there .. thats perfectly normal i guess between 2 adults ... but i guess Geet is genuinely in love with him .. since she knows the actual side of Maan and the torment he went through.. sO i dont think she'll ever blame him ....
 
the last part where Geet took him in her arms got me totally floored ... i mean how adorable was that ... she exactly knows how to take his pain away how to shower him with love... the way he surrendered himself to her strongly portrayed how much he wants her's possession over him .. protecting him from the torment he's going through ....
 
OK i've wriiten enuff to give you a headache ... LOL
 
THANKS A TON BABES .... A BIG BEAR HUG FOR YOU Hug
 
continue soon
 
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Originally posted by DILIBADAAT

Precap: Agar mein fail ho gaya to? 

is he going to give some exams for completing his education or is it some life test agian
 
There is no justification in what Maan had done it is a heinous crime...
 
I disagree with you here, there is a lot of justification to what Maan did, firstly look at the positive side he did not rape her thenight he took her with him instead insisted marriage though to all it seemed that they might have slept but they did not he did not force him self on her, he could have easily done that;
on the other hand he might have slept with many women but what I see here is that he never forced anyone in, the women came to him by choice;
he forced her on the night on the pretext that she already had lost her morals, which though was wrong and he felt guilty for his act, he washed her wounds and cared for her later
 
Geet is in love but has she really forgiven him?
 
why will she not forgive him he is better then the many people in her life
 
Is Geet in love or is it just physical attraction?
 
it may be physical attraction but in the beginning as on the karva chauth night you wrote on her behalf Geet was in a trance…what was she just about to do? She was sleeping with him? She hated herself for it but then she realized what was wrong if she was enjoying it? She had her own desires her body had its own needs….
you even mentioned in one of the updates that
from the very first day she felt an unknown urge for this rustic man'he reminded her of Othello'.even in Rajji's engagement her gaze had travelled through his body'the day he had kidnapped her, she had seen him in his vest wow he did look hot'.if not for Sujit maybe she would have slept with him'
but know when she knows every thing about him or shall I say most of thethings about his past as there may be more hidden skeletons in his wardrobe, she has accepted him the way he is. it may be because he selflessly surrendered to her manupilations
 
Will Geet accuse him later?
why will she accuse him; he is doing whatevr she is asking for; he washed her wounds after the SR, he cleaned up the mess when she pucked the sattoo, he brought her black coffee, he fed her when she was mourning for Sujit, he took her to the DU, he went with her word that she will sleep with him if he did what was asked for him, he did not force him on her when she threw him out breaking her promise, when she threw his clothes away he did not question him;
what has he done to deserve accusation; he is a complete JORU KA GULAM; the only thing he did was forced her to marry him,
 
 
I am asking all these because I don't have the answers......


Edited by smj1977 - 16 March 2011 at 8:09am

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Originally posted by smj1977

Originally posted by DILIBADAAT

Precap: Agar mein fail ho gaya to? 

is he going to give some exams for completing his education or is it some life test agian
 
There is no justification in what Maan had done it is a heinous crime...
 
I disagree with you here, there is a lot of justification to what Maan did, firstly look at the positive side he did not rape her thenight he took her with him instead insisted marriage though to all it seemed that they might have slept but they did not he did not force him self on her, he could have easily done that;
on the other hand he might have slept with many women but what I see here is that he never forced anyone in, the women came to him by choice;
he forced her on the night on the pretext that she already had lost her morals, which though was wrong and he felt guilty for his act, he washed her wounds and cared for her later
 
Geet is in love but has she really forgiven him?
 
why will she not forgive him he is better then the many people in her life
 
Is Geet in love or is it just physical attraction? Will Geet accuse him later? I am asking all these because I don't have the answers......

well said di........but i love ur 2nd nd 3rd ans

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