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CRIMES OF PASSION part 23 page 144 (Page 67)

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 5:41am | IP Logged

oh god.......how many slaps?????

bechara maan...............didn't even stop her!!!!

love the part................wonderful one!!!!

gr8 update!!!

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 5:43am | IP Logged
Omg Slapping queen and king maar khata raha wow dono pagal eak doosre ke pyar mein .....wow both confess each other wow maan ka aakhri karta bachgaya warna geet gusse mein woh bhi fad deti hahah toooo good awesome , mind blowing thank you for this part and pm...


 There is no justification in what Maan had done it is a heinous crime...Geet is in love but has she really forgiven him? Is Geet in love or is it just physical attraction? Will Geet accuse him later? No i don't think geet should accuse him later bec she know all about him and she is not a kid along with geet herself said she is in love this bahubali so there no back up point for her now...I am asking all these because I don't have the answers......

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 5:43am | IP Logged
hello dear
awesome as usual just loving it
but plz make an effort to update ur FF Pinjar also plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzLOL
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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 5:49am | IP Logged
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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 5:54am | IP Logged
superb update... loved it...
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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 6:00am | IP Logged
ooo dear just loved the part that was fab i just came d saw part 10 i was dam excited nd wen after a while u such a sweet heart
updated the next part thank u so much 4 that
well loved both the parts
the choice of song was perfect suited geet perfectly
loved the way how she made him awake becuming a perfect house wife the way she arranged his room evrything she duing 4 him nd the way yet so typical she asked him to come earlierseems all so perfect
lol maan getting naughty with his wifey he kew well she would cum nd make him feed that was so sweet she fulfilled wat he wanted
i expected sumthig exactly wat u wrote i was sure maan would say sumthing
he gets sweeter at times i feel d his sweetness we love bt geet sumtimes dont
as at this time s how many slaps he gt if he wudnt b sweet at this time myt wot b getting this much beatings 4rm his wife bt last nyt me too was thinking abt it
as going by maanz sweetness i tot he would surely ask her to leave nd as she already knew shez in love she will get wild bt wildness to this extent i really expected that was sumthing beyond to wat i tot countless slaps i was like glad she didnt punched him or kicked him bt loved the way
u kno as in the serial nd many ffz i have seen grand confession u kno sumthing like larger than life bt as ur them is simple u really ur confession tooo simple perfect 4 the story characters as maan shown by u will definitely confess his love like this he wont du anything huge
although he loves her he will express it by his emotions feelings small sweet cute acts u kno acts of care as he showed last time i loved wen he asked wat if u bleed again this is love nt by taking her to sum 5 start res. so u kno myt nt by money although 4 him everything of his will b completely hers coz he himslef loose to her the way she rules him he definitely loves his ruling sherni
well love this part dear it was fab far tooo simple i really falled 4 its simplicty loved the way he was trying his best to make her happy nt to let her down as he did last time truly we can call him as a BECHARA kahna phas gaya bt now no1 can help him
well precap seems interesting i feel geet is gona ask him to study further atleast i feel this nd if yes then again c diff. usually wifes study after marriage this would b 1st time that a man will study after marriage
well lets c wat u have further 4 us
im sure u have lots more gr8 parts 4 us
well ans 2 ur q 4mr side will b
i tnk geet has forgiven him by knowinh his past i tn she understood the fact  that he was scared of lossing her so he chose this path to get her nd her pic in his cupboard is i tnk a big proof as she too to the same
i will say she is in love now myt 4 1st she would have fallen 4 attraction physically bt noe knowing him more she is falling for his good side as she said at the breakfast table that he has a GOLDEN HEARTnd maan too realized thatw as sumthing out of the act so i would now call it love nd as he handsum who wont fall 4 him so she too as she is the wifey
no she wont accuse him later y will she if she has forgiven him then she wont nd now as she has accepted the fact of life this was her destiny that way or this way it had to b happen so i dont tnk she will accuse him esp after knowing his dark past she wont
so du update soon next
part will b waiting eagerly
loved the parts
keep writing dear
god bless u

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 6:04am | IP Logged
God has giftd humans wit ability to forget wit time, maan had commitd a crime bt tat was hs way of expressin hs possession n love ove geet b'coz he dnt knw hw to treat women b'coz of hs past i knw it stil not justified bt if geet accept hm than their first encountr wil b thng of past.

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 6:08am | IP Logged
OMG ..... this update was innocence and cuteness personified...
 
Maan is soooo freaking adorable ... mera jaanu bacha chup chaap maar bhi khaa gaya .... Geet is a pakka sherni ... i think she will bring a very pleasant and positive change in his life ...
 
as for you questions... wat Maan did was wrong.., he loved her the moment he saw her and he was so deprived of love for such a loong time he cudnt think of a better way of making her his...
 
theres definitely physical attraction there .. thats perfectly normal i guess between 2 adults ... but i guess Geet is genuinely in love with him .. since she knows the actual side of Maan and the torment he went through.. sO i dont think she'll ever blame him ....
 
the last part where Geet took him in her arms got me totally floored ... i mean how adorable was that ... she exactly knows how to take his pain away how to shower him with love... the way he surrendered himself to her strongly portrayed how much he wants her's possession over him .. protecting him from the torment he's going through ....
 
OK i've wriiten enuff to give you a headache ... LOL
 
THANKS A TON BABES .... A BIG BEAR HUG FOR YOU Hug
 
continue soon
 
love
Sana

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