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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 6:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DILIBADAAT

Precap: Agar mein fail ho gaya to? 

is he going to give some exams for completing his education or is it some life test agian
 
There is no justification in what Maan had done it is a heinous crime...
 
I disagree with you here, there is a lot of justification to what Maan did, firstly look at the positive side he did not rape her thenight he took her with him instead insisted marriage though to all it seemed that they might have slept but they did not he did not force him self on her, he could have easily done that;
on the other hand he might have slept with many women but what I see here is that he never forced anyone in, the women came to him by choice;
he forced her on the night on the pretext that she already had lost her morals, which though was wrong and he felt guilty for his act, he washed her wounds and cared for her later
 
Geet is in love but has she really forgiven him?
 
why will she not forgive him he is better then the many people in her life
 
Is Geet in love or is it just physical attraction?
 
it may be physical attraction but in the beginning as on the karva chauth night you wrote on her behalf Geet was in a trance…what was she just about to do? She was sleeping with him? She hated herself for it but then she realized what was wrong if she was enjoying it? She had her own desires her body had its own needs….
you even mentioned in one of the updates that
from the very first day she felt an unknown urge for this rustic man'he reminded her of Othello'.even in Rajji's engagement her gaze had travelled through his body'the day he had kidnapped her, she had seen him in his vest wow he did look hot'.if not for Sujit maybe she would have slept with him'
but know when she knows every thing about him or shall I say most of thethings about his past as there may be more hidden skeletons in his wardrobe, she has accepted him the way he is. it may be because he selflessly surrendered to her manupilations
 
Will Geet accuse him later?
why will she accuse him; he is doing whatevr she is asking for; he washed her wounds after the SR, he cleaned up the mess when she pucked the sattoo, he brought her black coffee, he fed her when she was mourning for Sujit, he took her to the DU, he went with her word that she will sleep with him if he did what was asked for him, he did not force him on her when she threw him out breaking her promise, when she threw his clothes away he did not question him;
what has he done to deserve accusation; he is a complete JORU KA GULAM; the only thing he did was forced her to marry him,
 
 
I am asking all these because I don't have the answers......


Edited by smj1977 - 16 March 2011 at 8:09am

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 6:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by smj1977

Originally posted by DILIBADAAT

Precap: Agar mein fail ho gaya to? 

is he going to give some exams for completing his education or is it some life test agian
 
There is no justification in what Maan had done it is a heinous crime...
 
I disagree with you here, there is a lot of justification to what Maan did, firstly look at the positive side he did not rape her thenight he took her with him instead insisted marriage though to all it seemed that they might have slept but they did not he did not force him self on her, he could have easily done that;
on the other hand he might have slept with many women but what I see here is that he never forced anyone in, the women came to him by choice;
he forced her on the night on the pretext that she already had lost her morals, which though was wrong and he felt guilty for his act, he washed her wounds and cared for her later
 
Geet is in love but has she really forgiven him?
 
why will she not forgive him he is better then the many people in her life
 
Is Geet in love or is it just physical attraction? Will Geet accuse him later? I am asking all these because I don't have the answers......

well said di........but i love ur 2nd nd 3rd ans

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 6:22am | IP Logged
Will Geet accuse him later?
A big No. P
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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 6:24am | IP Logged
nice update....................geet may or may not forgive him but she will not forget that she was raped............................she loves the other face of maan and she also is physically attracted towards maan .........................don't think that she will accuse maan later

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 6:24am | IP Logged
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww terrific update...loved it to the core..!!

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 6:44am | IP Logged
geet masterni bangeyi hai yaar.aur humara maan bacha....bahubali suit nehi karthe ab use.lol.dil to bacha hai ji........................thapad kha kha khe uska khaal gulabi hogaya hoga...........

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 6:52am | IP Logged
heySmile
 loved ur ff
literally read it in one go.....for two reasons.........
1st.......I didn't had a choice as it was amazingly intriguing
2nd......I really wanted to comment on the questions you put in your 11th update
 
the story is marvellous n quite realistic........actually I normally don't like maan in -ve roles but this is quite an adorable characterEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
he is rustic yet caringDay DreamingDay Dreaming.........n what to say of geet.......Wink
I just love her in her sherni modeWinkTongue
beautifully written story n well potrayed emotions.....
when I read the first five parts I felt like stragling geet's family and that dog sujit........n not to forget maan's circus family too..........they were all so mean and self-centered peopleAngryAngryAngryAngry..........
 
now........the 11th part was very beautiful.........just loved itTongue
but I really don't think anyone should justify what maan did to geet.........it was a crime and I severly condemn it..........
though shruti gave a wonderful answer but still I would like to say that maan was not right to judge a women's character based on his past experiences...I agree he had suffered a lot but that in no way justify his act...........it was not that geet ditched him or anything that he manupulated her life the way he did and rape is a severe crime even though he did it out of his insecurities to lose geet.............what he did to geet can be forgiven but cannot be justified ..............and I know I would get a lot of chappals for saying this much against him but still its my personal opinion and I'll stick to it
 
and far as geet's feeling is concerned..........it would be totally absurd to call it a mere physical attraction bcoz attraction is not strong enough to overpower the pain she went through in the initial days of her life and so yes she is truly in love with her ROBBINHOODWinkEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
n I wanted to say one more thing that many people commented that geet's love for maan is bcoz she knows his painful past but that seems quite irrelevent as his past can arouse sympathy but not love and I think geet love him not bcoz of his past but bcoz of the golden heart he possessEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
and there is no way she will accuse him in future bcoz she has immense love for him not matter whatever he is or has done to her......its out of question now
 
so here is my answer...........continue writing.......its amazing ffThumbs Up


Edited by shining_moon - 16 March 2011 at 6:56am

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