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CRIMES OF PASSION part 23 page 144 (Page 62)

mamatha. Senior Member

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 2:40am | IP Logged
loved it.......................

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mystique_girl Goldie

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 2:45am | IP Logged
You keep the finality hanging by a threadLOL

Anyways, a grand it how you portray their feelings so simply...

Maan and Durga seem to be of the same age LOL Loved Maan's innocence....they seem to compliment each other so well...

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SIYAHI Senior Member

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 2:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sindu555

Originally posted by holyangel

Originally posted by DILIBADAAT

Originally posted by 7thHeaven

it was lovely . . . i really like the song actually more than the song i like the singer . . . ok . . . Maan wants geet to feed him, is he a kid that he needs to be fed but dont we love kids especially if they so cutely wait for being fed . . . maan is a sweety pie and a moron, why moron well he thought of going to the bar . . . precap . . . no comments as i have no idea whatsoever u planning to do . .. is she gonna try woo himErmm .. .  i like wooingEmbarrassed . ..  since u r rolfing in the precap i get a feeling she will try seduce him but will sheBlushing .. .  BTW what is sattooLOL is it a hard drink or something like tea or whateverLOL

ARRE YAAR TUM LOG TO BARE ANGREZ HO......... ROFLSATTOO is a meal of parched grain in different parts of our country like Bihar, UP and Punjab,Bengal. It is inexpensive but very nutritive meal consisting of flour of roasted Barley, jaggery and is very popular among the working class of India and is believed to be good for the tropical climate.....and One confession I have never tasted SattooEmbarrassed 

i have tasted it... its blunt... so blunt that u can even vomit... yuukk...but yess very nutritious ... 
n very useful for constipated patients ... LOL
i've tasted it  too,.. my daadi used to have it  ... it doesnt taste that bad .... especially if its cold .. its bearable ...


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preethia IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 2:56am | IP Logged
amazing part.................
i think maan is not confused abt his feeling but he is confused y geet has changed her attitude towards him...........well most of the ppl in his life have hated him so he expects the same from geet..
but when she is showering her love, affection, care and concern on him he is dead worried that he might lose it again and he is fearing of losing her...........i dont feel that he is insecure of her being intelligent than him.............
now i really wanna know wats gonna happen next..........
r u updating the next part today or r u going to update pinjar...............

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zaara2212 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 3:00am | IP Logged
thanks for the update...

what did maan say to move on..oh god how can he say that
waiting for the next update
cyum321 IF-Dazzler

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esha143 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 3:03am | IP Logged
Finally Geet fell for this bahubali jungleeTongue.....aye nice an update.....liked it when she did all the things a wife would do like doing up his room and taking care of his clothes.....and also missing him so much.....and that bahubali....he's confused about this new Geet and his feelings for her so much that he's scared to go to his own houseLOL....well oonth pahad ke neeche aaya hai after all....and yeah I think I can guess what's the unexpected that happened but yeah I would like to confirm it through your next update please update soon.....Big smile
samaira39 Senior Member

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 3:03am | IP Logged
loved it..........i liked geet's self was awesome 

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