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CRIMES OF PASSION part 23 page 144 (Page 59)

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 3:00am | IP Logged
thanks for the update...

what did maan say to move on..oh god how can he say that
waiting for the next update

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 3:03am | IP Logged
Finally Geet fell for this bahubali jungleeTongue.....aye haaye.....so nice an update.....liked it when she did all the things a wife would do like doing up his room and taking care of his clothes.....and also missing him so much.....and that bahubali....he's confused about this new Geet and his feelings for her so much that he's scared to go to his own houseLOL....well oonth pahad ke neeche aaya hai after all....and yeah I think I can guess what's the unexpected that happened but yeah I would like to confirm it through your next update firstWinkLOL.....so please update soon.....Big smile
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loved it..........i liked geet's self talk.........it was awesome 
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ClapClapClapAmazing , Mind blowing Update ..Geet gaye kaam se Bahubali maan ne ussko out kar diya LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLBut maan bechara fight kar raha hai apne hi dil se i am sure geet going to help him to find all his questions ...... i love to see carrying g geet bec maan suffers a lot and now he need good care and love .Thank you for pm dear ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
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wow..superb update.....
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What a shock to Maan's system it is to have a loving and caring Geet aroundLOL
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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 3:36am | IP Logged

sorry for coming late

I was busy all and have come here only to read few updates from you
 
she said softly….Maan uttho….emmm sone do na Ma please….Geet felt a lump in her throat…..she softly kissed his forhead
Maan feared losing again…he knew if he lost this time he'd be lost forever….
 
OH! how much he missed being Loved
 
 Maan haunted her the entire day….his saying 'Kaunsa wood' whenever she said Robinhood….his slurping…his sleeping 'khule mu'….the thin line of Sattoo on his lip…..damn she missed him….
 
OH! its only been few hours and you already miss himWink
 
Maan chal daar mat just go to kya hua if she's more intelligent just go kuch nehi hoga…
 
Avdesh got it right he was afraid of this new found happiness
 
 Maan stood shocked and then mustered courage to say mujhe bhook nehi hai…..by now he knew if he wanted to skip dinner Geet would come and feed him…Geet sensed his mischief and smiled….

   She came back with the food and started feeding him….there was silence as usual…until he spoke….Geet I am sorry……

beautifully potrayed
 
 I am sorry  if you want to move on................(something unexpected will happen after thisROFL)
 
will wait for the unexpected
 
you write beautifully you seem that you have doen a psycology course in human behaviour

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