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CRIMES OF PASSION part 23 page 144 (Page 56)

Janakivallav IF-Addictz

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 1:35am | IP Logged
Brilliant part. loved it.
both fall for each other but geet realized it and maan is still fighting with his feelings.
he feels his mother wake him up when geet went to wake him up.
it's so emotional.
 maan is so kid, loved it.
Geet is working on her way.  she is taking all thing on her way.
loved it. she is changing maan's wardrobe , redecorate the room.
only geet can changed him and placed his full of love.
he is insecure and can understand his pain. he needs lots of love, affection to over his insecurity.
only geet can do it.
precap is interesting.
update soon.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 16 March 2011 at 1:47am

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maansee IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 1:36am | IP Logged


read the whole part 1 -10 in one go.. loved this ff as the other  onr pinzer......................  loved your writting skil....................... very soon they will be together dil se...................................... hats off to u for writing such ffs................

Edited by maansee - 16 March 2011 at 2:28am

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--Zehnaseeb-- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 1:36am | IP Logged
Nice update. So Love is in the air.Wink
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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 1:39am | IP Logged
god. what has geet made out of angry lion??? now this is not fair, he makes her fall in love and hen release her. lets c if his heart would give the same command as his fake tongue did??
would his thirsty eyes move to seek serenity from elsewhere when she is not around?

desperately waiting for ur soon lovely update.
Audiwalia IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 1:41am | IP Logged
Dat was cute she is willing to give dis marriage a chance but maan is such idiot gadha nd not forget
Sabmeratu. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 1:43am | IP Logged
wonderful part
Yayy Geet has fallen in luv wiv Maan but Maan is still confused about his feelings
Woaah geet has becum reely bold
Awww so sweet of geet feeding Maan
Precap sounds shocking---hope he doesn't tlk about divorce
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
zoha25 Goldie

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 1:44am | IP Logged
oye oye cant wait now for unexpectng thng ;)
SIYAHI Senior Member

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 1:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 7thHeaven

it was lovely . . . i really like the song actually more than the song i like the singer . . . ok . . . Maan wants geet to feed him, is he a kid that he needs to be fed but dont we love kids especially if they so cutely wait for being fed . . . maan is a sweety pie and a moron, why moron well he thought of going to the bar . . . precap . . . no comments as i have no idea whatsoever u planning to do . .. is she gonna try woo himErmm .. .  i like wooingEmbarrassed . ..  since u r rolfing in the precap i get a feeling she will try seduce him but will sheBlushing .. .  BTW what is sattooLOL is it a hard drink or something like tea or whateverLOL

ARRE YAAR TUM LOG TO BARE ANGREZ HO......... ROFLSATTOO is a meal of parched grain in different parts of our country like Bihar, UP and Punjab,Bengal. It is inexpensive but very nutritive meal consisting of flour of roasted Barley, jaggery and is very popular among the working class of India and is believed to be good for the tropical climate.....and One confession I have never tasted SattooEmbarrassed 

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