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CRIMES OF PASSION part 23 page 144 (Page 47)

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haha nice song,bechare ko ab pata chalega.shadi krke fasgaya yaar acha khasa tha kunwara.haha.

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loved it n ur true girls r labeled even if we do something good

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 5:01am | IP Logged
BTW can we get an another update pls?
I'm full addicted of ur all ffs.
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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 5:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by smj1977

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Haiiiiiiiiiii what an update...MIRCHI is the right word for GeetLOL Nice find...

Am surprised at Maan - he is a bahubali and so childlike in certain things...I guess the saying is right - every human being has a child inside.... Thinking himself as "joru ka ghulam" was ultimate Clap 

Maan forgetting feeding bottles and expecting Geet to feed Durga was unimaginable...you have a great sense of humor LOL

Really, the earth takes 24hours to rotate - and your can change in seconds....loved Geet's recollecting her life's changes over last few days...your writing makes things so real...as if its happening right infront of me...i can even imagine Maan's house Smile

Loved how they reacted to each other .... Maan's concern and Geet's needs...very nice ending indeed..

Looking forward to more...Smile
it was not humorous it happens
Maan is a simple man,
I remember a similar incidence,
we girls have periods its very normal, in some families during those times girls dont do any work a practice quite relevent in India, they say ki woh chuut ki ho gayi hai.
when I was doing my graduation there was a boy very intelligent he was one of the toppers, his siter had come for a visit and was asking about the place where he lived, one obvious qustions was "aunty ji jab kitchen main enter nahin karti to kya tum khana banate ho" for which he replied "are di don't you know it is only that girls of baniya(cast) family who get periods, rest never do"
I was taken aback by the asnwer it was like we girls just rushed out to laugh our heads out and his sister banged her head
so Maan asking her to feed the child is not humorous but shows his innocence and simplicity he is far from logic he takes things as they come
only simple man can agree to his wife on the condition that she will sleep with him and later when she throws him out only leaves getting confused
sorry DILIBAADAT I had to answer it because I was baffeled that anyone can find it humorous
yes the breakfast scene was hillarous
Shruti

Nicely written Shruti...I guess I got the words wrong...I was just trying to say that Paulami's way of depicting this was hilarious..Ofcourse I see the childlike innocence in Maan - its amazing how a rough and tough guy like him can be sooo simple...but that we can see in his mindset and the way he lives. But I definitely agree with you on "only simple man can agree to his wife on the condition that she will sleep with him and later when she throws him out only leaves getting confused"

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Nice update.
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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 5:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mystique_girl

Originally posted by smj1977

Originally posted by mystique_girl

Haiiiiiiiiiii what an update...MIRCHI is the right word for GeetLOL Nice find...

Am surprised at Maan - he is a bahubali and so childlike in certain things...I guess the saying is right - every human being has a child inside.... Thinking himself as "joru ka ghulam" was ultimate Clap 

Maan forgetting feeding bottles and expecting Geet to feed Durga was unimaginable...you have a great sense of humor LOL

Really, the earth takes 24hours to rotate - and your can change in seconds....loved Geet's recollecting her life's changes over last few days...your writing makes things so real...as if its happening right infront of me...i can even imagine Maan's house Smile

Loved how they reacted to each other .... Maan's concern and Geet's needs...very nice ending indeed..

Looking forward to more...Smile
it was not humorous it happens
Maan is a simple man,
I remember a similar incidence,
we girls have periods its very normal, in some families during those times girls dont do any work a practice quite relevent in India, they say ki woh chuut ki ho gayi hai.
when I was doing my graduation there was a boy very intelligent he was one of the toppers, his siter had come for a visit and was asking about the place where he lived, one obvious qustions was "aunty ji jab kitchen main enter nahin karti to kya tum khana banate ho" for which he replied "are di don't you know it is only that girls of baniya(cast) family who get periods, rest never do"
I was taken aback by the asnwer it was like we girls just rushed out to laugh our heads out and his sister banged her head
so Maan asking her to feed the child is not humorous but shows his innocence and simplicity he is far from logic he takes things as they come
only simple man can agree to his wife on the condition that she will sleep with him and later when she throws him out only leaves getting confused
sorry DILIBAADAT I had to answer it because I was baffeled that anyone can find it humorous
yes the breakfast scene was hillarous
Shruti

Nicely written Shruti...I guess I got the words wrong...I was just trying to say that Paulami's way of depicting this was hilarious..Ofcourse I see the childlike innocence in Maan - its amazing how a rough and tough guy like him can be sooo simple...but that we can see in his mindset and the way he lives. But I definitely agree with you on "only simple man can agree to his wife on the condition that she will sleep with him and later when she throws him out only leaves getting confused"
 
hey I was not hurt by what you said, the fact is that this action of Maan is very common especiallly among the lobour class people
only the other day while I was visitng a construction site I was shocked to see a woman carrying load on her head when she just a day before delivered a child, on questioning the couple were surprised that I found it not natural the father looked at me with amazement and the mother said that it is only the higher class woman who need rest after labour humare yaha aisa hi chalta hai madamji


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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 5:12am | IP Logged
Amazin update.

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