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CRIMES OF PASSION part 23 page 144 (Page 46)

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 4:04am | IP Logged
superb update...loved it...

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 4:07am | IP Logged
Oh yaar that was reli awsum.i jst cant stop myself frm reading it again n again.
Breakfast scene was hillarous.
Bahubali maan to joru ka gulam ban gaya hehe.
Update soon

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 4:13am | IP Logged
Fantastic , amazing geet make maan joru ka gulaam so sweet..

Durga come back home so sweet and maan is such sa sweet in some matters this will make geet think ab him she is now strugling about her past and sudden change with her present ..i hope she will manage to get over from this and give time to her this new relation ..maan should give her some time...

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 4:13am | IP Logged
loved this part
Go Geet!
con't soon

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 4:16am | IP Logged
Awesome update, poor maan couldn't romace with his wife geet but i hope geet falls in love soon with maan and maan also falls in love with her and both may share their feelings foe each other, want to see more romance between maan and geet, plssssssssssssssssssss conitnue soon.

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 4:21am | IP Logged
geet geet geet geet........................

loved it

and yes she is a mirchi........Wink


Edited by maanmania - 15 March 2011 at 4:23am

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 4:43am | IP Logged
Haiiiiiiiiiii what an update...MIRCHI is the right word for GeetLOL Nice find...

Am surprised at Maan - he is a bahubali and so childlike in certain things...I guess the saying is right - every human being has a child inside.... Thinking himself as "joru ka ghulam" was ultimate Clap 

Maan forgetting feeding bottles and expecting Geet to feed Durga was unimaginable...you have a great sense of humor LOL

Really, the earth takes 24hours to rotate - and your world can change in seconds....loved Geet's recollecting her life's changes over last few days...your writing makes things so real...as if its happening right infront of me...i can even imagine Maan's house Smile

Loved how they reacted to each other .... Maan's concern and Geet's needs...very nice ending indeed..

Looking forward to more...Smile


Edited by mystique_girl - 15 March 2011 at 4:56am

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