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CRIMES OF PASSION part 23 page 144 (Page 44)

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 4:16am | IP Logged
Awesome update, poor maan couldn't romace with his wife geet but i hope geet falls in love soon with maan and maan also falls in love with her and both may share their feelings foe each other, want to see more romance between maan and geet, plssssssssssssssssssss conitnue soon.

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 4:21am | IP Logged
geet geet geet geet........................

loved it

and yes she is a mirchi........Wink


Edited by maanmania - 15 March 2011 at 4:23am

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 4:43am | IP Logged
Haiiiiiiiiiii what an update...MIRCHI is the right word for GeetLOL Nice find...

Am surprised at Maan - he is a bahubali and so childlike in certain things...I guess the saying is right - every human being has a child inside.... Thinking himself as "joru ka ghulam" was ultimate Clap 

Maan forgetting feeding bottles and expecting Geet to feed Durga was unimaginable...you have a great sense of humor LOL

Really, the earth takes 24hours to rotate - and your world can change in seconds....loved Geet's recollecting her life's changes over last few days...your writing makes things so real...as if its happening right infront of me...i can even imagine Maan's house Smile

Loved how they reacted to each other .... Maan's concern and Geet's needs...very nice ending indeed..

Looking forward to more...Smile


Edited by mystique_girl - 15 March 2011 at 4:56am

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 4:44am | IP Logged
great part..........................
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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 4:52am | IP Logged
Brilliant part. loved it.
 aww geet is really intelligent,
 she moved things on her way.
maan is caring  also.
poor maan jaru ka gulam baan gaya.
 his gray nature have rally some strong reason.
precap is interesting.
update soon.

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 4:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mystique_girl

Haiiiiiiiiiii what an update...MIRCHI is the right word for GeetLOL Nice find...

Am surprised at Maan - he is a bahubali and so childlike in certain things...I guess the saying is right - every human being has a child inside.... Thinking himself as "joru ka ghulam" was ultimate Clap 

Maan forgetting feeding bottles and expecting Geet to feed Durga was unimaginable...you have a great sense of humor LOL

Really, the earth takes 24hours to rotate - and your can change in seconds....loved Geet's recollecting her life's changes over last few days...your writing makes things so real...as if its happening right infront of me...i can even imagine Maan's house Smile

Loved how they reacted to each other .... Maan's concern and Geet's needs...very nice ending indeed..

Looking forward to more...Smile
it was not humorous it happens
Maan is a simple man,
I remember a similar incidence,
we girls have periods its very normal, in some families during those times girls dont do any work a practice quite relevent in India, they say ki woh chuut ki ho gayi hai.
when I was doing my graduation there was a boy very intelligent he was one of the toppers, his siter had come for a visit and was asking about the place where he lived, one obvious qustions was "aunty ji jab kitchen main enter nahin karti to kya tum khana banate ho" for which he replied "are di don't you know it is only that girls of baniya(cast) family who get periods, rest never do"
I was taken aback by the asnwer it was like we girls just rushed out to laugh our heads out and his sister banged her head
so Maan asking her to feed the child is not humorous but shows his innocence and simplicity he is far from logic he takes things as they come
only simple man can agree to his wife on the condition that she will sleep with him and later when she throws him out only leaves getting confused
sorry DILIBAADAT I had to answer it because I was baffeled that anyone can find it humorous
yes the breakfast scene was hillarous
Shruti

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 4:58am | IP Logged
haha nice song,bechare ko ab pata chalega.shadi krke fasgaya yaar acha khasa tha kunwara.haha.

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 5:00am | IP Logged
loved it n ur true girls r labeled even if we do something good

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