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CRIMES OF PASSION part 23 page 144 - Page 33

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Posted: 13 years ago
am totally floored .... haye!
 
cant get enuff of your FF ...
 
thanks a ton babes ....
 
love
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update...loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh yaar that was reli awsum.i jst cant stop myself frm reading it again n again.
Breakfast scene was hillarous.
Bahubali maan to joru ka gulam ban gaya hehe.
Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fantastic , amazing geet make maan joru ka gulaam so sweet..

Durga come back home so sweet and maan is such sa sweet in some matters this will make geet think ab him she is now strugling about her past and sudden change with her present ..i hope she will manage to get over from this and give time to her this new relation ..maan should give her some time...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved this part
Go Geet!
con't soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update, poor maan couldn't romace with his wife geet but i hope geet falls in love soon with maan and maan also falls in love with her and both may share their feelings foe each other, want to see more romance between maan and geet, plssssssssssssssssssss conitnue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet geet geet geet........................

loved it

and yes she is a mirchi........πŸ˜‰
Edited by maanmania - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Haiiiiiiiiiii what an update...MIRCHI is the right word for GeetπŸ˜† Nice find...

Am surprised at Maan - he is a bahubali and so childlike in certain things...I guess the saying is right - every human being has a child inside.... Thinking himself as "joru ka ghulam" was ultimate πŸ‘ 

Maan forgetting feeding bottles and expecting Geet to feed Durga was unimaginable...you have a great sense of humor πŸ˜†

Really, the earth takes 24hours to rotate - and your world can change in seconds....loved Geet's recollecting her life's changes over last few days...your writing makes things so real...as if its happening right infront of me...i can even imagine Maan's house πŸ˜Š

Loved how they reacted to each other .... Maan's concern and Geet's needs...very nice ending indeed..

Looking forward to more...😊
Edited by mystique_girl - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
great part..........................
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Posted: 13 years ago
Brilliant part. loved it.
 aww geet is really intelligent,
 she moved things on her way.
maan is caring  also.
poor maan jaru ka gulam baan gaya.
 his gray nature have rally some strong reason.
precap is interesting.
update soon.