Haiiiiiiiiiii what an update...MIRCHI is the right word for Geetπ Nice find...
Am surprised at Maan - he is a bahubali and so childlike in certain things...I guess the saying is right - every human being has a child inside.... Thinking himself as "joru ka ghulam" was ultimate π
Maan forgetting feeding bottles and expecting Geet to feed Durga was unimaginable...you have a great sense of humor π
Really, the earth takes 24hours to rotate - and your world can change in seconds....loved Geet's recollecting her life's changes over last few days...your writing makes things so real...as if its happening right infront of me...i can even imagine Maan's house π
Loved how they reacted to each other .... Maan's concern and Geet's needs...very nice ending indeed..
Looking forward to more...π
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