~When They Collide~ (AY, TR, SV FF)-Prt76Updt. (Page 87)

Meeko IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 5:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 00123trisha

@part64: nice fight lizz n they locked OMG kya romantic situation haiEmbarrassed n anks told u to write this part like thisShocked vo chhokri hai kidhar???Angry
haan tht manhoos told me to write tht part!
kya romantic situaton hai!
woh chokri lazy ho chuki hai!
bas index update kar rahi haiLOL

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Meeko IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 5:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 00123trisha

@part66: OMG OMG m damn serious lizz tumhare charan kaha haiHug it was like a magical part...really  the part has too much feelings added by you
3 partsss by meeeShocked 
okay, will do it later

thnakyou trishu!!HugHugHugHugHugHug

and yep!
3 parts by you!!
and later nahi jee! jaldiiEmbarrassed

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Meeko IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 5:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BUBLAI

Originally posted by elizaa

oh appy!
can i just strangle u with all my possible types of hugs!?!??!
trust me! there r manny :P
i so knew ud do total justice to the part wher i left!
and u did i more beautifully thn i thot!
am so itching to write!
just cant stop myself!
so u get the next part from me!

mere baad trishu will give us 3 parts!

 Thankyou sooo much HugHugHug
I am really happy that you liked it so much TongueTongue  mujhe strangle karogi toh updates kaun dega??LOLLOL btw , hw many possible types of hugs do you know ???LOL kisi ke upar kabhi try ki ??Evil Smile
i knw like awesome types of hugs!
and haan!
sab logon par hi try kar chuki hoon!LOL
and tumko strangle bhi kiya toh htum zinda rahogi! dont worry! just for new updateesEmbarrassed
Meeko IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 5:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BUBLAI

the ashi-Yuvi confrontation was just the way I wanted it to be ... Tongue hum dono ke soch kitne milte haiLOLTongue
You have written it beautifully Clap
Ashi's reaction the day after was brilliantly done ...
Yuvi is now finally clear about his feelings Tongue
the sonia-yuvi convo was perfect ...Tongue always loved their interactions ...
now lets see what Yuvi plans to do Tongue

thnk yu appy!!
am glad u think so!
i knw.. thinkings do match!
i can never not like urs or trishus parts!
they r just wht I WANT to readEmbarrassed
yuvi is much clear now!
i so loved writing bout soniya yuvi!
hwever sonu is upset with yuvi, she does knw tht hes the one wfor her mamam!
and she will help him out in his distress too!
i really loved writing bout them!
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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 5:46am | IP Logged
Soniya n Yuvi was talking and Sany was listening at them silently. She got tensed to hear them. As much she knows yuvi, he will surely do something to bring back ashi in his life. She quickly went to kabir n told him about all these.

"kabir, I heard yuvi and soniya n unty was saying to bro that he needs to do something to prove his love for ashi"

"like what?"

"I don't know what but I'm sure yuvi will do anything to make ashi happy and we can't let this happened"

"you are right but I don't think ashi will melt front of him easily, she is not that kind of girls"

"whatever, I don't  care she will or not, I just want to make differences between them, I can't see my brother like this"

"me too, he doesn't worth ashi"

"what do you mean?" she yelled at him "my brother is perfect, jo bhi girl yuvi ke sath rahegi she will be the luckiest person in the world if she can understand him, his feelings n ashi will never can do this"

"WAIT, why we two always fight to each other for them, we want the same things na so lets keep them away"

"yah right, lets think how to spoil yuvi's plans"

"hmm, we need to spy on him to know his plans n please stop admiring your brother" he said n left the place.

"YOU TOO" sany shouted.


Other hand, Yuvi was thinking what he can do for ashi to bring her back to him. At the same time Tia entered there. She saw yuvi was looking quite tensed, sitting on a gourd wall of the hotel. She went to him. He didn't notice her coz he was busy to planning. Tia was standing there for 1-2 mins, then she saw yuvi doesn't looking at her she got angry.

"phalease yuvi, tia past 2 mins se yaha khadi hai n you are not looking at tia, how can you do this to tia"

Yuvi was flying between his plans but when tia start shouting at him he came back in the ground and looked at her.

"oh SORRY tia, actually maine tumhe notice nahi kia"

"WHAT?? You didn't notice tia????? You know this is the first time anyone did this to tia" she turned back angrily n made an angry baby face.

"I said sorry tia, by the way tum ranveer ko chhod key aha kya kar rahi ho?

Tia turned to him "oh phalease, don't take his name he always pull my leg, every time, every moment, you tell me tum kaha ud rahe the"

"ud raha tha meaning???"

"tia mean to say, kiske khayalo mey khoe hue the?...let me guess, ASHI????"

Yuvi smirked "think whatever you want but you are right"

Tia was going to sit beside him but before she could sit saw gourd wall was little dirty n she doesn't want her cloths to get dirty, so she moved on.

"Yuvi, lets go in, this place is so dirty n it doesn't suit tia so andhar chalke baat kare?"

"sure" he replied n both went to the lobby n sat in sofas. Yuvi told her about the conversation between soniya n him.

"Tia will help you" gave a big smile

"really tia you will??"

"oh of course, I hate ashi but she is my sister after all n I care about her. I know tumhi uske liye perfect ho, and now let tia think what can you do for her" she started thinking.


Other side, Ashi was sitting in her, she was quite upset. She was trying to forget about last night and all the memories of her with yuvi but every time she failed. She realized that she act like strong front of everyone but she is too weak from heart. Anyone can play with her heart like yuvi and can hurt her. She was blinded in her own mind thinking about herself; at the same time soniya entered in the room n saw ashi was lost in her own world, she called out "MUM MUM"

Ashi turned her face to her "mumma aap yaha kya kar rahi hai?"

"don't be so silly, main aapni mum mum ko dekhne ayi hoon" soniya went to her and sat beside her "tumse milne ke liye permission lena padega kya?"

"okay mumma, for once don't call me mumum, am ashi n 2nd what are you doing here?"

"told you na I'm here for you to see you, I don't need any permission for this"

"duh uh, I mean to say yaha ladak mey"

"I thought tum or tia kissi trouble mey ho with……………

"with what??"

"leave it, you tell me how are you baby?" she turned the topic

"ohho mumma don't call me that, ye sab uss Barbie doll ko bulana not me"

"okay fine, I think you need some rest so I leave han?"

"yah please, I want some time all alone"

Soniya left the room and ashi again got lost with her mind.

Other hand, Sid was finding his buddy yuvi, he wanted to know all the adventure what yuvi had with ashi. Finding finding but couldn't, at last he saw him in lobby sitting with tia, he rush to them.

"hey yuvi. Where were you? I was finding you"

"why?? Look sid I know you what are you going say but I don't want to talk about that right now"

"phalease boys, think"

"think for what?" sid asked

"nothing, tia I know you want to help me but I just don't need it"

"why you don't need tia's help?"

"coz I want do something with my own idea to make her happy n if you will help me then it'll  look fake"


"but yuvi, kisiko pata nahi chalega ke plan kiska tha"

"I know but……. I will feel that I can't do anything my own for her so please leave it on me" he left the lobby.


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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 5:48am | IP Logged
1 updt now n baki 2 baad me now going for padhaiROFL
n thanx lizz for congoLOL

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Meeko IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 6:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 00123trisha

1 updt now n baki 2 baad me now going for padhaiROFL
n thanx lizz for congoLOL
wow trishuu
tht was quick!!!
illread nd replyEmbarrassed
Meeko IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 7:02am | IP Logged
i hatteee you!!
inta amazing part likha and kahaan khatam kar diya??
plz aur ek part likho na:D
sany aur kabeer! uff!
in donoko saath hi kaheen kho jaana chiyye! jab tak ashi yuvi ek saath na ho jaaye!
aur tia yuvis covo was soo real!
loved reading their part!
tia was always lke this! specially for yuvi!
damn adorable the two are!
and madame ko sab se zyaada apne clothes and status ki padi hai! lol!
and then bechaara sid!
us bechaare ko koi kuch kyun nahi bataata
abhi ssaare milke khichdi pakaayenge! ashi toh gyi!
sany kabeer bhi khichdi mien tadka lagaayenge!
trishuuu plzz jaldi update karna! 2 parts bachey hai
fir appy 2 parts likhegi!
ill get to read 4 parts now!
this is ultra amazingLOL

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