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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 4:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BUBLAI

@trisha -- you have become an expert in cat language ... LOL wah wah !!! wah wah !!! LOLLOL

@lizzie : itne mein nahi chalega ... lol ...LOL now sing the full song ...LOL I will give an update , a long one for sure ... in 3 days Tongue till then you or trishu can update LOL

cry cryCryCry or baat karne ka chance nahi milaROFL

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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 10:30am | IP Logged
Part-59 
 

Ashi went back to bedroom stood beside window. Thinking how to go back to their hotel

"agar main uss psycho pe depend rahi toh puri life mujhe iss forest me bitana padega, mujhe hi kuch sochna hoga"

Suddenly saw a black dotted in white body mini truck in the garaj. She thought if she requests the lady to take the truck in rent so they can move to the hotel easily. She rushes to the lady but the lady was in dreams, sleeping tightly on sofa.

"Untie, i need to talk to you" ashi said but she was not listening to ashi. Then ashi sat on her knees n again said "UNTIE, are listening at me?" but the lady was sleeping like hell n dreaming that she is dancing with the old hot heros n saying "one two cha cha cha...

"yeh untie dreams mey kiske sath cha cha cha kar rahi hai? UNTIE WEAK UP" ashi was shaking her but she was still on "mera naam chun chun chu………….

"WHAT??"

Yuvi heard that "untie, yeh besura audio player bajana badh kijiye or koi achha sa song lagaiye" he shouts from kitchen. Ashi went to kitchen "you psycho, yeh koi audio player nahi baj raha tha vo untie dreams me kisike sath dance kar rahi hai I guess"

"what???? Main yaha khana paka paka ke pak raha hoon and vo waha dance kar rahi hai?? How mean she is"

"forget her, I have a plan to go back hotel" ashi said

"tell me fast" yuvi replied

"okay, I saw a truck in garaj n I think yeh untie ka hai……. Yuvi stopped her in middle "I can't believe ke untie truck chalati hai"

"who cares listen, hum vo truck le jayenge toh hotel jaldi pohochenge, we need to steal the truck" ashi explained

"you mean chori?" Yuvi shocked

"no way baby, hum toh yeh khelne ke liye lenge(made a face) of course chori karenge varna I'm sure untie hume kisi tarha rok legi so we should move now"

"but khana……..

"sorry, mujhe food poisoning nahi chahiye" ashi snapped n left kitchen

 

At hotel, Sany & Kabir was still thinking how to go out. Other hand, Shell was too upset and angry; she was walking one side to other sp restlessly. Tia came there n saw her like that.

"Sheetal, tum haya se waha kyu ghoom rahi ho? tumhe chakkar aajayega or tum faint ho jaaogi or birthday ke din fainted its not so cool, don't you think?"

"so what can I do? Ashi di n Yuvi bhaiya pata nahi kaha hai n it's my birthday and I am not happy at all"

"pahlease Shell, vo dono thik honge ek doosre ke sath jo hai" she giggled

Shell also smiled. Sany was listening at them silently. She thought if anything happen between them then it will be so tough to keep Ashi-Yuvi away. She went to kabir.

"aaj sheetal ka birthday hai so hum bahar jaa sakte hai" sany said

"bahar what you mean?"

"I mean to say hum dono bahana bana sakte hai ke hum sheetal ke liye kuch lene jaa rahe hai"

"hmm….. good idea but will say this"

"fine you darpok" she went to tia n took her in a side "tia, mujhe or kabir ko sheetal ke liye kuch lene jana hai so we are going oit han"

"oh owaaao, sure go n jab kuch logi tia call karna actually agar shell ko pasand nahi aya toh uska mood or bhi spoil ho jayega"

"yah, I'll call" she left

 

In garaj, Ashi Yuvi was successful to stealing the keys of truck.

"give me the keys" yuvi ordered

"why? Main chalaungi" ashi snapped

"bilkul nahi, last time tumhari maherbani se hum iss khusat untie ke ghar me fas gaye the but not this time, truck main chalaunga" yuvi replied n sat on driver seat. Ashi sat on front seat.

Through 15 minutes they were driving. At last they success to find out the road. There were too much fog so they couldn't see the way so clearly.

"hey bhaggu, pahele hi kya kam trouble me the jo yeh fog dal dia raste me"

"don't worry hum hotel pohoch jaayenge" yuvi replied

"tum sath ho issi liye toh worry kar rahi hoon" She mumbled

Suddenly she saw a dear who was crossing road "DEAR"

Yuvi didn't saw that dear "jaisa tum kaho HONEY" Yuvi replied with a smile

"no you stupid look a dear" she symbolized the dear. Yuvi was loosing his control from the truck because the dear was so close n he was unable to push the brake. Somehow the truck stooped in a side. Both of them took a deep breath n ashi started shouting on Yuvi.

"you psycho, looser, idiot, ullu ke patthe I told you dear n you was saying honey, main kya joke kar rahi thi?"

"mujhe kya pata ke vo ek real dear tha, I thought tum aise hi bol rahi ho"

"shut up, because of you hum dono khaai mey gir jate" ashi yelled

"lekin gire toh nahi na so calm down" yuvi yelled

They bend to look out n the truck was like going to fall from a high mountain, on something the truck was balancing itself but they couldn't see what was that, they were too worried.

"see, hum khaai ke upar latak rahe hai, jabse yaha ayi hoon pata nahi kitni hanging party's attend karchuki hoon " ashi yelled

"okay, kuch nahi hoga just relax" yuvi said

"how to relax?? Dekh sakte ho kitna deep hai?"

"I can try" Yuvi went out his head from the window but even he could see anything the truck again start dancing.

Ashi screamed "AISE NAHIII, thik se dekho bina hume giraye"

"sorry main apni spring wali gardan ghar pe bhool aya hoon"

"blow the horn, maybe koi hume sunle or help kar de"

Yuvi blown the horn but the horn was not normal horn, it was a cow sounded horn like BWWW Bwww

"what the hell is this??? Aise toh sirf cows and ox humari help karne ayenge" ashi yelled

"now what??" yuvi replied

There was a window between the back part of truck.

"lets go from here" yuvi suggested

"okay, me first" ashi said

"why? My idea so me first"

"kabhi suna nahi kya? ladies first"

"lady my foot……….okay lets toss the coin"

They tossed a coin & Yuvi won it , ashi got angry "whatever, mainhi pahele jaaungi" she entered in back side through the window but suddenly her belt blocked with something n she trapped in it.

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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 10:49am | IP Logged
trishuuu
tum ne toh mujhe maar hi daala hasa hasa ke!ROFLROFLROFLROFL

pet mein kitna dard horaha hai pata hai!
milo tum mujhe kabhi! pakad pakad ke peetoongiROFLROFLROFL
dear honey??ROFLROFLROFLROFL
trishu, aise mad ideas aatey kahaan se hai tumko?ROFLROFLROFL i was like off my bed, almost gir gyi thiROFL
and then gaadi chori karna and aunty ka gaana gaanaROFLROFL poore update mein has has kar mar gyiROFL
and ye kya? ashi ke kitne hanging parties karwaayi ho?ROFLROFL bechaare dono!
and itne boore time pe u finished?
 Angry
trishu! plz i really plead! aur ek part likho naa! full on ur style!
ur just awesome at comic timings! kab shuru hua and kab khatam, poora laughter ride thi!ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL and i so hate it ki khatam ho gyi :(
plz plz plz aage bhi likho naa1 trishu! pahleaseeEmbarrassed

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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 11:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by elizaa

trishuuu
tum ne toh mujhe maar hi daala hasa hasa ke!ROFLROFLROFLROFL

pet mein kitna dard horaha hai pata hai!
milo tum mujhe kabhi! pakad pakad ke peetoongiROFLROFLROFL
dear honey??ROFLROFLROFLROFL
trishu, aise mad ideas aatey kahaan se hai tumko?ROFLROFLROFL i was like off my bed, almost gir gyi thiROFL
and then gaadi chori karna and aunty ka gaana gaanaROFLROFL poore update mein has has kar mar gyiROFL
and ye kya? ashi ke kitne hanging parties karwaayi ho?ROFLROFL bechaare dono!
and itne boore time pe u finished?
 Angry
trishu! plz i really plead! aur ek part likho naa! full on ur style!
ur just awesome at comic timings! kab shuru hua and kab khatam, poora laughter ride thi!ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL and i so hate it ki khatam ho gyi :(
plz plz plz aage bhi likho naa1 trishu! pahleaseeEmbarrassed
tumhari hasi dekhke mera pet fat raha haiROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL thanx for laughing on my updtROFLROFLtum bhi mujhe peetna chahti ho???Shocked oh gosh sab mujhe hi kyu peetna chahte haiTongueTongue
thanx again n i'll go d next for sure

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Posted: 09 August 2011 at 9:41am | IP Logged

Part-60 

 
 
Ashi trapped with her belt. Yuvi was waiting for his turn "Ashi, sow gayi ho kya?"

"duh uh meri belt atak gayi hai, I can't move help me out yuvi"

"tum ek bhi kaam thik se nahi kar sakti" yuvi yelled

"oh mr. perfect don't forget k tumhari wajay se hum yaha latak rahe hai now help me" ashi replied

"what can I do? kuch pakad lo or khudko khicho"

"yaha toh sirf ek robber ki fish hai…………………oh no yeh robber ki nahi hai YAAK" she  threw the fish. Then Yuvi tried to came out from the side window, it was too risky to go out like that but he was able to do this. He entered in the back part of truck.

"Ashi, hold me tight I'll pull you" yuvi said

Both of them held each other tightly, Yuvi was pulling her with his whole power but it was not working. They tried so hard and at last Ashi's belt got reveal from the small window n they quickly jumped from the truck to ground. They were waiting to hear the truck's sound when it will blast but there was no sound.

"truck ke girne ki awaz nahi ayi??" ashi asked

"maybe kahi atak gayi hogi" yuvi replied

They stood up and again went to the truck n got shocked "yup you are right, truck atak gayi hai or vo bhi zamin par" ashi said

"wha kya pahari hai, 2 fits" yuvi laughed. That was not a mountain; it was just a 2 fits high ground beside the road. Both of them laughed like hell. They were laughing on themselves.  Again they sat in truck but this time the truck was not in good condition, it was not starting at all "I think hume chalna padega" yuvi said. They went out from truck n start walking.

 

Other side, sany and kabir came out from hotel & went to the top of the mountain where they left Ashi-Yuvi. They were asking people for them but couldn't find any clue. At last they caught the taxi driver. Asked for ashi yuvi n the driver told that he dropped them front of forest. Sany and kabir went to the forest.

"lets go and find them" sany was going to entered in forest but kabir pulled her hand "don't, hum agar andha gaye toh nikal nahi payenge"

"so what? Un dono ko akela chhod de?" sany yelled

"no, I mean we should go with anyone who knows the place"

"oh but koi dikh nahi raha hai yaha" They were looking around for somebody but no one was there.

 

On road, Ashi Yuvi was walking through 30 minutes. Ashi was too tired of walking, she stopped at a spot and bend her knees "yuvi, I can't walk anymore, mujhe uthaao"

Yuvi turned to her "WHAT? Are you mad main tumhe uthaunga? I love my back n don't want to brake it"

"ek ladki trouble me hai or tum apne back ke bareme soch rahe ho??" ashi got angry

"yes, main tumhe nahi utha sakta aab khadi ho jaao n start walking, hotel jana hai ke nahi?" again start walking. Ashi made a angry baby face n again stood up n start walking.

 

 
P.S- sorry for short part but i have no idea for next so pleeej don't mind.Smile

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Posted: 09 August 2011 at 11:12am | IP Logged
oh god! trishu!
hw many more times shld i tell u tht i loveee u! like soo soo much!
:D
it was an fantastic part!!
mad amzing fantastic partt!
and i will surely hit u wen i meet u!
like ever ever! kitna hassaaati ho! and am sooo glad tht u updated again! i so look forward to read ur parts! :D
and again my laughter riot strted!ROFLROFLROFLROFL
rubber ki nahi! real fish!ROFLROFL bechaari ke saath kya kya karti ho trishu! ufff!
ROFLROFLROFLROFL
and then 2 ft se truck gir gyi?ROFLROFLROFL
faaltu mein ghabraa gaye dono! and free mein yuvi ne *chaance pe daance* bhi maaraROFLROFL
and then window se ghoosa! as if apne jaan pe khel ke ashi ko bachaaya!ROFLROFL bewakoof!!!
kabeer and sany toh ashi-yuvi ko dhoondne nikal gye hai! kya pata, khud hi ghoom ho jaayenge! unki bhi story jo strt karni hai!


and ab appy ka likhne ki baari hai!!
yayyy!!
turu ru ruuu ruuu!
:D
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Posted: 09 August 2011 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Hey !!! Trishu ... kya updates di yaar !!! I was laughing like hell reading the updates ... ROFL
Aunty iss umar mein bhi old sexy heroes ke saath dance kar rahi hai LOLLOL
yuvi's dialogues were so funny in this scene ROFL It was a completely laughter riot ... deer --- honey LOLROFL
the next part was just out -of-the-world ROFLROFLROFLROFL  2 feet ka himalayas se bechare dono darr gaye  ROFLROFLROFLROFLitni mehnat ki thi LOL
Awesome updates dear ...
next I am going ... tomorrow or day after that Tongue

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Posted: 09 August 2011 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
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