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Posted: 17 July 2011 at 10:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 00123trisha

@lizz-SHANT??????ROFLyeh word mujhe suit nahi karta my parents always say that m ashantROFL
the updt was superbClapashi ka hand pakda or khud hi gir gaya uvLOL awww feeling bad shell b'day spoil ho gaya AY k liye dono ayenge toh kaccha kha jayegi ROFLn sany-kabir planing to keep AY awayShockedthey will do anything...GOSH
updt soon han n don't use that word for me, vo appy ko suit karegaROFLROFL

ok ashant murgi! thts wht ill cal u now!
de diya doosra part bhi! enjoy.. ab tum likho.
unko jungle mein rehnw do thodi der. lol.
and shelly toh unko pakka kaccha chaba jaayegi!lol..
chalo murgi! jaldi likho, am waiting :P

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Posted: 17 July 2011 at 10:27am | IP Logged
nyc part once againBig smile n see we completed 50 partsDancingsany-kabir was so so cuteEmbarrassed
okay i'll go the next
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Posted: 17 July 2011 at 10:32am | IP Logged
lizzie ... so finally u updated ... phew !! i was thinking ke kahin tumhare update ke liye wait karte karte main buddhi na ho jaoon LOL
both the parts were good ... Ashi-yuvi are just impossible ... kindergarten ????? that bit was really funny ... bechara yuvi khud hi gir gaya ... for sure , shells will now chew AY alive ...LOLROFL
sany and kabeer plotting to keep them away ... Shocked... okay , i like the twist Big smile
bechara kabeer -- tough guy banne ke chakkar mein khud hi maar kha gaya LOL
enjoyed reading both the updates ... Tongue

look , I was shanti ... but if u would not have updated today , tab kuch aur hone ke bhi chances the LOL

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Posted: 17 July 2011 at 11:22am | IP Logged
Part-51 
 
Back to forest

Yuvi was laughing like hell to her n she was little confused. "What was all this?" she asked making an angry face. Yuvi was going to say but even he could they heard a loud sound from the other side of forest.

"what the hell was that?' ashi asked looking worried

"don't you worry wacko, tumhari vo dearest bhootni vapas nahi ayegi, guess koi trees cut kar raha hai" yuvi answered

"I know she'll not come back or agar ayegi so I'm damn sure ki vo tumhe apna shikar banayegi because I heard somewhere that kisi human pe just 1 time hi saya padta hai" ashi said making a funny face.

"HAHAHA……..joke tha?" yuvi asked

"that oh?"

"toh tumhe jokes bolna nahi ata, but seriously that sound was too loud" yuvi replied

"yah that's what I'm saying, we should find out" she starts walking towards the sound but yuvi pulled her to. "WOW WACKO, tum kya koi detective ho jo pata karne jaa rahi ho? Already we are in big trouble, we are lost or tumhe spy giri karne jaa rahi ho" yuvi snapped

"FINE, nahi jaaungi" she yelled. Suddenly the wind starts blowing fast n cold. It seems like a strong storm was coming to that area. They could hear the strong wind blowing sound.

"ashi, mujhe lagta hai storm anew ala hai"

"not again dude, firse tum ice-cream ban jaaoge" ashi replied n yuvi got irritated "look you wacko, I'm not kidding with you, I'm serious" yuvi snapped "hume koi shelter dhoondna hoga varna sirf main hi nahi tumhi vanilla ice-cream banogi"

"kyu psycho  vanilla kyu, I like chocolate"

"because, ice white hai or vanilla usually white hota  hai" yuvi replied

Ashi made a face n both of them left for finding a shelter. They were walking for 15 mins but did not found anything for their safety.

"HEY BHAGGU, yeh konse situation me dal dia iss psycho k sath?" looking up to the dark sky full of black clouds. Suddenly yuvi noticed a light in far. It was looks like a house or something, so he said ashi to go there but ashi did not agreed with him. She felt a strong feeling that something wrong there but yuvi did not listen to her & pulled her towards the house. She was trying to remove herself but yuvi was holding her hand very tightly so she did not succeed. When they came front of the house they got shocked, the door opened itself.

"yeh kaise hua?" ashi asked worriedly

"I guess billi ne khola hoga"Yuvi answered

"yah billi, so mister intelligent let me tell you k world me aaj tak itni smart billi paida nahi hui hai jo door open kar de" ashi replied

"whatever, lets go, maybe hawa se khul gaya hai"

They entered in the house.

 
 
P.S-sorry couldn't write a long updt, i rush to go. that door wala thing was just  wind not bhoot typeLOL

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Posted: 17 July 2011 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
trishuuu!! itna chota??Angry
itni kya jaldi thi?Ouch
ashi yuvi ko finally ghar mila.. yahaan kuch spooky nahi hona chahiye.
lol and ay kabhi nahi sudherenge! love their fights!
awesome update! u have improved so so much! aur bhi likhogi yahaan toh best ho jaaogi! (iska matlab aur bhi likhoLOL)

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Posted: 18 July 2011 at 1:43am | IP Logged
hey !! trishu ... the part was really sweet ...Tongue
their fights will never end LOL billi ne door khola ??? kya imagination hai LOL
enjoyed reading it ...
wish it was a bit long Tongue

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Posted: 18 July 2011 at 11:11am | IP Logged
@lizz- thanx, mom was calling me for dinner n i was still writing so she started scolding me so jana pada n nothing will be spooky m tired of this bhoot pret, this is the one ff which is not about ghostsLOLotherwise all of my ff's are about thatLOL kal pakka will updt
@apps-thank u so muchHug


Edited by 00123trisha - 18 July 2011 at 11:13am

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~Part-52~ 
 
Ashi Yuvi entered in the house. It was not a large house but simply comfortable. They were standing inside the main door. The house was very dark; just two or three candles were giving light. They could not see anything.

"duh uh, ghar toh mill gaya but no bijli" ashi said

"jungle me bijli kaha se ayegi ashi" yuvi replied

Suddenly they felt like someone was coming towards them from in. "Who's there?" they heard a female voice & got shocked. In candle light, they could see a woman went to the corner of the room. They were staring at the woman. In a while, the woman switched on the lights and Ashi Yuvi saw a half age woman was looking at them standing in a corner.  She was looking little angry. Somehow, ashi dare to her and asked, "is this your house?" Hearing ashi's this question her anger was in high level. Then she started shouting at them. "who the hell are you to asking me that?"

Ashi Yuvi got more scared.

"hello psycho, main hi kya bolti rahungi? Tum bhi kuch bolo" ashi murmured to yuvi.

Yuvi was like statue. When ashi shake him then he got back his sense.

"actually, we are lost & don't know the correct way to get back to our hotel and it seems like a strong storm is on way" yuvi said that to the woman

"So what?" the woman asked again

"so we need a shelter for this night and there's no other house except yours" ashi replied.

For few seconds it was very silent, and then the woman asked to them "are you married couple?"

Both of them were shocked & speechless. The woman again repeated, "I said are married? I just accept only married couples"

Ashi Yuvi once looked at each other & once looked at her. They were confused, what to say to the woman? If they say that they are not married then the woman will not accept them in her house & they need a shelter in this storm. Yuvi was thinking if they say yes, so there will be no problem because she does not know the truth. Even ashi could say something yuvi said to the woman "YES". Ashi confusedly looking at him, "what are you saying?" yuvi did not give answer.

"you guys are very young, love marriage?" the woman asked

Ashi was going to say no but Yuvi stopped her and said yes "actually hum dodno honeymoon pe aye the & we are lost in this forest"

"oh great, no problem you can stay here for this night" the woman happily replied to them & took them in a room. There was a sofa, two chairs & one bed. Ashi was forgotten that she need behave like a couple with yuvi.

"just one bed??? Koi or bed nahi hai kya?" ashi said to the woman

The woman shocked, "an other bed? Why? Tumlog shadi shuda ho toh tum dono ko ekhi bed pe sona chahiye"

Yuvi smiled and put his hand on ashi's shoulder "yes baby, aab humari shadi ho gayi hai toh hum ekhi bed pe soyenge na?"

Ashi was angrily looking at him. Then the woman said she will make some food for them and will send in their room n she left. When she left, the room Ashi Yuvi again start fighting. Ashi was so angry on him because he said they are married couple.

"tum apne aap ko kya samajhte ho? or humari sadhi kab hui? How could you yuvi?" ashi yelled

"just shut up wacko, don't you have brains? Agar main ye nahi karta toh vo lady hume rahene nahi deti" yuvi replied strictly

"fine, hum married couple hai that's fine but hum kya ekhi bed pe ratko soyenge? I mean together?"

"look, I'll sleep in sofa tum bed pe so jana, and now stop shouting varna untie ko shak ho jayega"

 

Back to the hotel, everyone was waiting for AY and during waiting; they got sleepy. Tia was sleeping on ranveer's shoulder & ranveer was half sleep. Sany & Kabir was awaked, she was thinking how to keep ashi-yuvi away & kabir was thinking the same. Then kabir went to sany.

"it's too late, we should go out & start finding them" kabir said to her

"but it's 3 am, in this time hum kaha dhundenge? Let's do one thing, kal subha hotehi hum nikal jaayenge" sany replied

"hmm….i think it's fine. By the way tum thak gayi hogi, go and take rest" kabir said gently. Sany smiled & left.

 
 
P.S- hope you guys like the new twistLOL now make some AY night romaceWinkTongue
@lizz- lo updt kar dia aab gussa thook doLOL

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