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Posted: 14 July 2011 at 9:38am | IP Logged
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Posted: 15 July 2011 at 11:32am | IP Logged
part 48 :

Ashi fainted in Yuvi's arms ... he hugged her tight ...

Yuvi : '' Ashi , please open your eyes ... see now it's all over ''... he was shaking Ashi but to no avail ...
he hurriedly lied her down and went to get water ... after searching for it for sometime , he finally managed to bring it for her in an earthenware he found near a small inlet .

after sprinkling the entire water on her eyes , finally she regained her consciousness..

Yuvi : '' Thank God ... you opened your eyes ... otherwise i would have to bring water from that dirty inlet once again .. its not that hygenis you see.. ''

Ashi : '' duh-ha , psycho ... the moment i opened my eyes you started cribbing ... isse it would have been better if i pretended to still remain unconscious aur tumse free ka seva karwati ''

Yuvi : '' oh ! oh ! toh madam ko muft ka treatment chahiye ...??? okk ... then lets do one thing ... lets get back to our hotel ... wahan your sis will definitely take good care of your health ''

ashi started making faces ...

Ashi : '' hymph !!! there's no need for that ... pata chala treatment ke saath free manicure and pedicure bhi kardi ''

Yuvi was laughing like hell seeing the way she was giving a sulking expression ...

ashi : '' abb yaheen rehna hai kya ... lets go back ... mujhe yahan iss saya ke jala hua soul ke samne khare rehke iss ash ko admire nahi karna ''

Yuvi : '' hmm ... i totally agree ... kahin phirse tumhari andar aa jati hai toh ???? afterall she loves you soo much ''

Ashi stormed off from there and started walking straight without even noticing where was she going ... yuvi was blindly following her thinking that she might be knowing the way seeing how confidently she was walking ... it seems she knows the entire contour of this place ...

after walking for 30 minutes like that ... yuvi ,realizing that they are getting deeper into the forest asked ashi

Yuvi : '' ashi ... how much did you get in geography when we were in school ? ''

Ashi : '' why ?? I used to hate that subject ,,, so no question of remembering the marks ... ''

Yuvi : '' I suddenly thought so too ...because it seems instead of going out from here we are getting more deep inside ''

Ashi : '' and you are telling me this now ... come on yuvi !!! how could you trust my geographical skills ??? that's ridiculous !!! ''

Yuvi : ' ' oh !! toh abb galti is mine .. ?? ''

Ashi : '' oh !! no no !!! william shakespeare ki !!! afterall this is the beautiful forest of arden ... so ... orlando , tell me ... what's your next move ???''

Yuvi : '' I know sweetheart that tumhare saath abhi abhi bahut kuch hua ... par ab saya ke jagah shakespeare and orlando bhi tumhe saata rahe hai kya ???''

Ashi : '' oh !! just shut up !! and think of something ''

Yuvi : '' idea !!! let's walk back ..''

Ashi : '' okay !! try karke dekhte hai ... nikaal paate hai ki nahi ? ''
They both started walking back ... both were silent ...

Ashi was thinking : '' kya aisa kuch nahi ho sakta ke beech ke yeh 7 years gayab ho jaye and everything gets back to what it was ... '' ashi was recalling that day at the restaurant
... she wished that this piece of memory gets somehow deleted from her mind ... she just wish this walk with yuvi never ends and even if it does they should be together after this ... everything was soo beautiful ...her somehow imperfect life suddenly seemed perfect ... so what , if it was for her psycho ?? only hers ... the mere sense of belonging made her heart skip ... all the cries seemed much heavier compared to the laughter she shared with him after what he did to her ... was her perfect love story somewhere went wrong only because of her ... was she never worthy of her psycho ???
the complete wacko-psycho love-station suddenly lacked its music ... why all this happened to her ... ??? why that day ever came in her life ?? was she at the wrong place at the wrong moment ?? was it just her mind taking control ?? why didn't she let her heart decide it at that time ??? was it sooo easy for her to just call off the relationship ??? was it sooo difficult for her to just forget the matter and forgive yuvi ???? why she couldn't face him ??? she was not at fault at that time ... then why did she ran away ???
she remembered the way yuvi asked for her forgiveness after the bet incident in school ... he was literally begging for it ... why was it not so then after we broke off ??? why didn't he even tried to clear up things ??? was he truly disloyal to me ??? i loved him sooo much that my heart is still getting ripped from inside ... and he is just walking ahead of me ... we are ... sorry 'were' meant to walk by each other's side but why then it is not so today ... i saw concern for me in his eyes ... he still cares for me ... i hope ... But somewhere there is still a thin wall through which we are still unable to see each other clearly ...
Ashi's eyes were welling up threatning to give up anytime ... but is she in a position to break down infront of him ... am i that vulnerable ??? Yes , I am ,,, especially when it comes to him ... but am I ready to face it ??? Ashi's indecisiveness is clearly evident in her face ...she has too many questions but doesn't know if she will ever manage to get the answers ...

Yuvi was treading on , lost in his own world ...thinking about his conversation with ashi before the saya episode ..

Yuvi : '' why didn't she ever tell me that she saw me with that stupid chick at the restaurant ?? she hid it inside herself for so long ... why she always thinks that sharing is not at all a good idea ...she only wants to take all the pains to herself without letting out one bit of it ... she is so adamant ... I was heart-broken seeing her and kabeer together ... why is all this so confusing ??? ''




Edited by BUBLAI - 15 July 2011 at 11:47am

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Posted: 15 July 2011 at 11:44am | IP Logged
omgg appy!!
s o sooo much in this one part!
thier love thier fights their misunderstandings their broken trust their feelings! u showed them so ery well appy!
william shkspr cracked me up!! lmao yuvi is like- unka bhoot toh ni  chad gya!
lol
and then ashi's feeling!
yuvi was wrong then! he did betray her. unwantingly maybe.. but he knew wht he was doing!
he was at fault, but ashi doesnt deserve al this pain! yuvi too can see, hw much he is upset and asking for forgiveness..
loved this part!
next ill go! surely 2 parts like i promised1
and yeah! ashi didnt see yuvi at the airport, she saw him kissing this random girl in his restaurant! lol.. 

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Posted: 15 July 2011 at 11:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by elizaa

omgg appy!!
s o sooo much in this one part!
thier love thier fights their misunderstandings their broken trust their feelings! u showed them so ery well appy!
william shkspr cracked me up!! lmao yuvi is like- unka bhoot toh ni  chad gya!
lol
and then ashi's feeling!
yuvi was wrong then! he did betray her. unwantingly maybe.. but he knew wht he was doing!
he was at fault, but ashi doesnt deserve al this pain! yuvi too can see, hw much he is upset and asking for forgiveness..
loved this part!
next ill go! surely 2 parts like i promised1
and yeah! ashi didnt see yuvi at the airport, she saw him kissing this random girl in his restaurant! lol.. 

I am glad that you liked it ... thanks for such sweet comments ..
now 2 parts ... yippee !! i am waiting for it ..
shakespeare bas aise hi aa gayaLOL
thanks for reminding ... I changed 'airport' to ' restaurant'Tongue
kabhi kabhi bhool jaati hoon LOL


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Posted: 16 July 2011 at 3:43am | IP Logged
OMG OMG apps, firstly i just want to give u a big hugHug  wat an updt full of romance,feelings,fights,misunderstandings WOW, shakespeare wala bit was so funnyLOL n your dialogues are superb  *claps*... loved the way u expressed ashi's feeling
luv uHug
@lizz-waiting waiting...jaldi karna meri chhappar faruLOL

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Posted: 16 July 2011 at 9:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 00123trisha

OMG OMG apps, firstly i just want to give u a big hugHug  wat an updt full of romance,feelings,fights,misunderstandings WOW, shakespeare wala bit was so funnyLOL n your dialogues are superb  *claps*... loved the way u expressed ashi's feeling
luv uHug
@lizz-waiting waiting...jaldi karna meri chhappar faruLOL

Hug ( I hug u back )
thank you sooo much trishu Tongue ... you liked my dialougues ??? love you for this -- I don't usually like my own dialogues ..somehow i feel i can't express it in a proper manner ... lizzie made me write this in just 30 mins and that too instantly without any ideas ... par madam khud gayab hai ..
@. lizzie -- when are u updating ... ??? i am waiting for your 2 parts ... mere time pe abhi and aaj ... and wat abt u ??? u better update soon ...AngryLOL

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~~Part 49~~


It had been a while since they had been walking. Trying to find out the way back to their hotel, though both of them clearly knew.. they.were.lost.

Yuvi- "I should have never followed you.. how can anyone trust you with directions?"

Ashi (popping in some berries she had found on their way)- "salman! Your right.. for the first time.. par fir bhi tum tubelight hi rahe na.. baat itni der baad samaj aayi.. sheesh!"

Yuvi- "shut up wacko! Pata nahi vrinda hamara kya haal kareygi.. its sheetal's birthday"

Ashi- "damn.. maate ka chodo.. pata nahi sheetal kya kaeygi.. that half timbo, its difficult to handle her, coz she very well knows,  how to get back onto me.."

They tried walking faster, though they didn't know which route to follow. Thw road was slippery due to the hard formed ice. The faster you walk, there was a higher risk of falling. Yuvi had been holding ashi's hand as they walked and muttered curses to each other..

Ashi (snapping of his hands)- "psycho, hum koi kindergarten ke bacche nahi hai jo hath pakad pakad ke chal rhe hai"

Yuvi (gritting his teeth)- "us bhoot ka tumpe bada asar hua hai lagta hai, waise his dimag kharab hai, am holding your hand taki tum gir na jaao, aur bacha kucha sar bhi nahi foot jaaye"

Ashi- "yuvi.. itna garam mat ho.. melt ho jaaoge, toh flood aa jayega!"

Yuvi -(walking ahead)- "why don't you let go this ultra cool attitude of yours?"

Ashi- "thanks yuvi.. but if I every need a psychiatrist, you'd be the first one ill consult!!" (looks at him) "OUCH!"

He had been walking so fast that he slipped off and fell all over a big hard rock.

Ashi (rolling her eyes)- "and he was holding my hand to prevent me from falling! DUH UH! YUVRAJ DEVV!!"

 

Back to the hotel.

Sheetal was quite upset with yuvi and ashi. How could they do this to her. Specially ashi. She always knew yuvi was a dufus. As he had dumped the best girl he could ever get. But ashi.. she had been with her ever since she had come to mauriya. She was like her guide to mauriya's prank life. Her other soul sister.

Vrinda was useless according to sheetal.

Sheetal (grunting)- "where the hell are both of them.. am cutting y cake whether they come or no"

Kabeer- "yeah I guess you should cut the cake"

Vrinda- "kahaan reh gaye dono.. hope they are fine"

Ranveer (high fives to kabeer)- "dono ek saath hai, how can they be fine??"

Tia (annoyed)- "shut up both of you. Dono ek saath hai, tia is sure they are fine."

Sanaya had been patiently listening to the conversation. She was so annoyed at the fact that every little conversation they had, lead to ashi and yuvi being together.

What was all this about.. why did everyone think that they were meant to be together. And what was so good about ashi. No doubt she was a nice person, but did she really deserve her brother after she left him stranded in the middle of.. NOTHING.

She whispers something into kabeer's ears, that he is completely shocked.

Sid- "sheetal, for the last time, take this.. its your birthday gift.. and that's all I have for you.. you don't want this, you don't get anything.."

Sheetal (jumping from her seat to get some drinks)- "duh uh siddy bhai.. am no kid.. you can have this from my side instead"

Sid had never felt so low. Someone actually refused to have a look at his gifts. How he felt like strangling the kid. He quietly picked up the packet and walked towards the roof.

"her bad.. she missed having a look at the best comics ever" he smirked

Vrinda had been staring at him since a long time. She quickly followed him to where he went.

Tia- "oh tia's god! Itne issues.. how will tia handle all this.. Tia's head is spinning!"

Ranveer- "apne head ko bolo, stop spinning"

Tia- "tum apni nose mere maamle mien kyun ghusaate ho"

Ranveer- "coz hum rajpootonko besahara logon ki madat karni pasand hai"

And it went on, till tia decided to go to sheetal and have some drinks with her.

On the other hand Kabeer was shocked to what sany said.

Kabeer- "what?? Have you gone mad?"

Sany- "ashi and yuvi are together, and I don't want him to be hurt again.  I have to keep ashi away from yuvi, and ill do everything for that. And for all this I need your help"

Kabeer was quite hysterical when he had to reply to that. He knew that ashi was still in love with yuvi, but he alo knew that they both shouldn't be together. Yuvi was not good enough for her, and as her friend, he had to decide this one thing for her. He took a step forward and whispered into her ears, "I am in for this. We will do anything to keep them away from each other, and for the start, we will have to go and find them where they are."

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Posted: 17 July 2011 at 8:08am | IP Logged
@trishu appy! shaanti, one more prt coming up in a while.. likha nahi abhi tak, rukho thoda, maaro mat :P

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