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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 2:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanjna4

finally we got to knw who is doin what
and ashi is lawyerShocked
she do alws do most unexpected things
bt i like lawyers 
dey are alws tactful

and others are doin all those stuff ehich was expected frm them
so in dis part no story move jst we got to knw dat hw dere life has move ahead
and most importantly, hw cn i 4get sid he is doin nothingLOL

and what abt dat creep sanayaOuch
lmao.. sid is surely doing something.. lol
ashu will telll us wht he is doing..
creepy nahi hai sanaya.. she is nice.. just tht she hates ashi, i i guess she has whole rites to hate herLOL
ashi and lawyer.. idk, me and ashu wer discussing wht wht can she be.. end mein lawyer nikla and we both wer okay with it.. sanu, u wanna go next after ashu?Smile
plz.. nw to the story willl move fast, we have so many writers
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by _Akanksha_

Res. That was quick. LOL

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Aww, I like this part. Embarrassed TiaRa are cute, how can I not like something that has Karan Wahi in it!? LOL Tia believes that AY are meant to be, aww. We could use that, BUT, I want AY to come together on their own terms, without any help from the outside. Big smile

Ahaa, Sheetal. Ye idea tumhein kahaan se aaya!? LOL A mixture of Tia and Ashi .. Bechaari Vrinda! She has to put up with her everyday. LOL Mast the vo dono! :D

I'll go next.. soon. Smile


yeah, tia always believed tht ay are just meant to be.. even in remix. u stopped watching season2, tujhe kaise pata hogaLOL
karan!!! did u see his dance on womens day?Embarrassed
ay will always come together on theri own terms.. fight their feelings and come back to each other.. in pots no1 helped them, they just didnt need any1 there.. and even in remix, in both their patchups, they themselves came together.... toh yahaan bhi wahi hoga...
sheetal.. now u understood y i wanted her name..LOL ashia put her in mauriya, and she used to spend her weekends with them, as vrinde wasnt in town... tab toh banegi hi na, at ki tarhaLOL

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by elizaa

Originally posted by sanjna4

finally we got to knw who is doin what
and ashi is lawyerShocked
she do alws do most unexpected things
bt i like lawyers 
dey are alws tactful

and others are doin all those stuff ehich was expected frm them
so in dis part no story move jst we got to knw dat hw dere life has move ahead
and most importantly, hw cn i 4get sid he is doin nothingLOL

and what abt dat creep sanayaOuch
lmao.. sid is surely doing something.. lol
ashu will telll us wht he is doing..
creepy nahi hai sanaya.. she is nice.. just tht she hates ashi, i i guess she has whole rites to hate herLOL
ashi and lawyer.. idk, me and ashu wer discussing wht wht can she be.. end mein lawyer nikla and we both wer okay with it.. sanu, u wanna go next after ashu?Smile
plz.. nw to the story willl move fast, we have so many writers
:D

i knw ashi is unpredictable jst lyk me
lol
and ya story is nw goin to move very fast as we hav so many writers and who are mad abt it

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 4:18pm | IP Logged
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! I understand sanaya's behavior now! Yuvi and Sanaya never had any communication about Ashi! hmmm okie! I guess that makes sense...but did sanaya never try asking yuvi about ashi?

Neways whatever...the track sounds exciting...sanaya seeing the nothing can end bonding between Ashi-Yuvi!!BlushingDay Dreaming
And good job guys...for not knowing what happened between AY! LOLLOL If u guys need feedback/suggestions on the ideas, lemme know! TongueEmbarrassed

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 5:02pm | IP Logged
Part 4

''Sid, tum poore paagal ho. How can you not know ki mera suitcase kaun sa hai?''

''I'm sorry, Yuvi.'' Sid scratched his head. ''Vo main apni unicorn wali dreams mein itna busy tha ki main tumhaare suitcase ko tag karna hi bhool gaya.'' 

''Sid, tumhaara kuch nahi ho sakta.'' Yuvi sighed angrily. ''Ab mujhe yahaan ke manager se baat karni padegi. Tum aisa karo, tum Sanaya ko leke hotel pahuncho..and dekho agar koi aaya hai ya nahi.''

In the past 3 years, ever since he received that phone call from Ashi, he had only remained in touch with Tia. Ranveer didn't want to talk to him, for some reason, and Tia never told him anything more. Everytime he talked about him, she would conveniently change the topic.  And he seriously didn't get it, Ashi was the one who broke up with him, what was his fault in it?

''Yuvi, sweetie, I will wait for you.'' Sanaya smiled, and picked up her handbag. 

They approached a guy behind the desk. ''Hello, how can I help you?''

''Hello, I am Yuvraj Dev. Mera luggage kahin misplace ho gaya hai.''

''Hmm.'' He called a guy picking up some suitcases from the opposite side. ''Idhar aao.''

''Jee sar.''

''Inhein luggage room mein le jaao, jitne bhi unattended luggages hain, sabhi check karwao.''

''Okay, but sir.'' He turned to Yuvi. ''Thoda time lag jaayega.''

''Kyon, kya problem hai?''

''Actually, sir, aise hum kisi ko bhi uthaake koi luggage nahi de sakte, there are so many people who claim that unhone apna luggage misplace kar diya, and then they go and steal any random suitcase, isliye ab hum identity check karke hi suitcase dete hain. Fingerprints check and all.''

''Fingerprints check? Excuse me, mujhe sirf apna luggage chahiye, that's it.''

''Hum aise kisi ko bhi koi luggage lene nahi de sakte, please understand. Hum aapke fingerprints us suitcase ke fingerprints ke saath match karenge, and only then can we give you your luggage.''

''But .''

''I'm sorry, sir. Rules are rules. Aapko line mein lagna padega.''

''How long will it take?'' Yuvi shook his head, and looked at the line. It was HUGE. ''Shit. Don't tell me vo sab apne fingerprints check karvaane ke liye khade hain.''

''I'm sorry, sir.'' The man shrugged. 

''Hell, this will take ages.'' Yuvi pressed his forehead. ''Sanaya, tum jaao. Yahaan mujhe abhi 2-3 ghante lagenge.''

''Fine.'' Sanaya sighed. ''I will see you in the hotel, yeah?'' She kissed him on the cheek and left.

''Bye, Sanu.'' 

--

Ashi picked up her luggage. Just then, her phone rang. 

''Hello, Kabir.''

''Ashi, tum theek se pahunch gayi na?''

''Haan, Kabir, main theek hoon. Tum Delhi pahunch gaye?''

''Haan, bas apne dad ka wait kar raha hoon. He's picking me up from the airport. Vaise, Ashi, are you sure ki tum vahaan akele..I mean, agar main tumhaare saath hota, toh I'd feel better.''

''Kabir, I can take care of myself, don't worry. Aur jahaan tak ..'' She paused. ''Jahaan tak Yuvi ki baat hai, I can handle him. And vaise bhi, you're coming back in 2 days.''

''I know you can handle him, meri wild sherni you are! Main toh us Yuvi ke liye worried hoon.. bechaara, kya haal karogi tum uska.'' He chuckled.

''Kabir, I'm not gonna do anything. I have decided..I'll try and be as indifferent towards him as possible. I'm just gonna pretend like, he doesn't even exist for me, anymore. And vaise bhi, mera naam Anvesha Banerjee Ray hai, main kisi sissy ki tarah rone nahi wali. I have to move on.''

''Well, that jerk doesn't know what he's lost.''

Ashi's expressions changed, while she managed a wary smile. ''Kabir, I'm getting a cab, I'll call you back when I reach the hotel, okay?''

''Okay, sherni. Bbie.''

''Bye.'' She hung up, as she reached for the cab. ''Elite hotel.''

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PS - Just to clear some stuff up, 1. Ranveer and Yuvi haven't spoken ever since AY broke up. The reason will be disclosed later, but it's only Tia who has faith in him. 2. Kabir and Ashi had a connecting flight, Kabir went to Delhi, he will come back to Ladakh in 2 days.'' 3. Well, yeah, keep wondering who and what Sanaya is. :P


Edited by _Akanksha_ - 17 March 2011 at 5:20pm

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 5:12pm | IP Logged
aww, he calls he wild sherni?Embarrassed

edited aage..LOL


Edited by elizaa - 18 March 2011 at 8:50am

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 5:01am | IP Logged
and finally im here..im in WTC..whooopppppppp whoopppppppppppppppp..
*dances*
part 1
 
i loved d turmoil ashi is goin through...its exactly the yamini phase..somehow dis is what it reminds me of!
d way shes dying to see yuvi..to touvh him..to fill herself wid his presence..but there is a major block dat is restraining her..
 
so tiara get engaged?? r they married???
as for kabir..kya yaar fir kabir..hes one guy i dnt like! even in fiction..all in all fantastic openingBig smile

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 5:17am | IP Logged

"What an amazing dream it was, I was riding on a while unicorn, all the way to ladakh.. and guess what, tum dono ne mujhe wahaan pohochne se pehle utha diya!" he looked at them as they picked up their bags and moved ahead.

"and what about the awesome brakes sid?" asked sanaya.

"duh! His horn.. Unicorn pe jaata toh flight ke wajah se ear blockage ki problem nahi hoti"

"and what about your mind blockage sid?" yuvi kept his arm around sid's shoulder

"udao mera mazaak, aur udao. Its not your fault. You do not know that this legendary creature represents freedom and open-mindedness with power and strength mixed with….."

i have no idea why dis unicorn is in d story.not only did u include dis lizzie..u actually did unicorn ki tareef as well ROFL
awww so both of them are apprehensive abt facing each oder...
did something happen...omg i cant wait..and sanaya..Big smile im sure ye uss kabir ke opp hai..huh..okay..kabir i cant stand u.offically..
lizzie baby great part!!

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