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~When They Collide~ (AY, TR, SV FF)-Prt76Updt. (Page 53)

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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by _Akanksha_

RESSS  ! Shocked

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ROFLROFL kabir made sany fall? LOL. ROFLROFL i love these two. ''idiot'' ''tell your husband that!'' ''i am not married.'' ROFL

i had to remember what happened when they came to ladakh..trust me, i forgot EVERYTHING about the hyperthemia thing. ROFL ''what happened to you?'' ''i was bored.'' LOL <- this cracked me up. ROFL idiot and a half, lmao. uv ka single ready to mingle wala attitude. LOL. ''im with someone!'' ''no your not!'' ''i am!'' ''are you?'' ROFL 

ROFL sanu slapped KABIR. omg, he called her his mistress. ROFLROFL And, LOL @ ashi thinking that yuvi and sanu came for a HONEYMOONNN !! ROFL i loved how he kept his cool, though.. bechaare ko gussa aa jaata hai & then he does 'stuff'. ROFL

OMG.. OMG.. OMG..ye brother sister wala angle kahaan se aaya. arnab dobriyal.. LMAO, trish. ROFL aww, aww, i loved sany in the last one. <33 

i'll go next.. don't know what to write!! Cry



idiottt!! kitta time lagaya to unreserve..
i was only and effing only waiting for urs and sanas reaction on this.. and i had to wait for so long.. and tht kamchor sana.. ab tak res nahi hatayaLOL
i too enjoy writing kabeer and sany, ek sher, toh doosra sawa sherLOL
and ashi and yuvi.. will they forget who they are and wht they are?ROFLROFL lmao!1 NEVER!ROFL
and yuvi ke gussa ka stuff!! shit!!
yaad ni raha!1 thank god.. warna woh daal deti and update spoil ho jaataROFLROFLROFL
the brother sis wala angle is coz u dont update.. its a punishment.. next time u do the same, ull wonder kab kabeer and sany ki mandir mein shaadi ho gayiROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL

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Part 34

''You-'' Ashi paused. ''Sanaya..sister.'' Her breath came quickly and her words didn't even make sense. Her brain was a whirlpool. ''I..'' She looked up expecting to meet his eyes but he'd turned around, his back was facing her.

''You know what, Ashi? Forget it, just..''

''I am so-''

''No, don't.'' He sounded really angry. ''Don't apologise. It's my fault. I don't know why I care what you think, I shouldn't, right?'' He turned around, glaring at her. ''I shouldn't, but I do. Just go and think whatever you want to, but she is my sister, and I will always care for her.''

''Yuvi-''

''No, tell me one thing – why do you care? You're with someone else, right? Well, that's what you told me. You shouldn't care what Sanaya is doing in my room at midnight, or why am I talking to her so much. You shouldn't be bothered even if she was my girlfriend. But, you are bothered.''

''Will you let me say somet-?''

''Go on, say whatever you want to.'' He stopped, his eyes fixed on her.

''I wanted to say I am sorry-''

''I actually don't care.'' He hid his face in his hands and sighed in frustration. ''You never trusted me, did you? I mean, I moved to London, and you didn't trust me to remain faithful to you..that's why you broke up with me, right?'' Ashi opened her mouth to say something but he went on. ''-And now when I turn up to our reunion with my sister, you think I'm on a honeymoon with her? What kind of a person do you think I am, Ashi?''

She looked away, her eyes had a faraway look in them. The scene of Yuvi kissing a girl kept replaying itself in her mind. ''Exactly what you think I think about you.'' She faced him. ''You're right. You're not trustworthy, you're not faithful and you're not..'' She paused. ''…The person I once fell in love with.''

He was silent for a minute. ''The Ashi I loved would trust me.''

''The Yuvi I loved would give me reasons to trust him.''

They looked at each other, a lot of questions evident in their eyes, not being able to say anything. Yuvi's phone call broke the silence.

~*~*

''Oh…'' was all Kabir could say. His hand still rested on his cheek, and he was confused. ''Okay, so you're a Dev, Sanaya Dev. I mean, you are that douchebag's-'' He got a glare from Sanaya. ''-I mean, his sister? Oh.''

''Oh? That's all you can say after all that crap you pulled?'' She glared.

''Well.'' He shrugged. ''I really don't know what to say..I am sorry.''

''It's okay.'' She said calmly. ''You didn't know..''

''No, I mean, I am sorry for you.'' Kabir burst into laughter. ''You're that douche's sister!''

''Kabir, I am going to hit you!''

''No, you are not.''

''Yes, I bloody well am!'' She picked up her purse and he ducked, running to the back of the sofa. She stood in the front of it, the sofa between them. ''Kabir, give up already!''

''You're not going to catch me, Sanaya..'' He grinned.

''I will.'' She rested a foot on the couch, and he turned the right way. She set her foot down, and waited until he got back to the middle. She jumped all of a sudden, trying to get him over the couch. She lost her balance and ended up falling on him, pushing him down on the floor behind him, her landing on top of him.

''Ouch!'' Kabir muttered something inaudible.

''Did you just call me a witch?'' Sanaya's mouth fell open in an O, she was still resting on top of him.

''No, but it rhymes with that. Get off me, will you?''

She frowned and got up. ''Kabir.'' Her playful face suddenly became serious. Kabir, who was dusting the dirt off his shirt, asked. ''What's wrong?''

''We should tell Yuvi you know..'' Her sentence trailed off.

Kabir thought for a minute, and nodded. He took his cell phone out and called him. 

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 1:54am | IP Logged
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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 2:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanjna4

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lizz be happy finally m ediing my comment. this will be shock tym 4 ur life but u r not kess den me u also gave me shock by making yuvi and sany bro and sis but m lil angry on uv since when he fears people and is not accepting sany publicallyAngryAngryAngry... doesn't she deserve respect from whole world and now i just wish that kabeer's behaviour towards sany changes and he respects her and  m liking dere fights alot
and specially that dialogue finally u r at ur place ws awesome

And i love sany being yuvi not acceoting her whole heartedly she is calling him angel...

liz awesome update and u knw very well how to bring twists and turns in the story and really it ws big tym shock



finally IDIOT!! finally u commented...
lol!!
thanks btw...Hug
so wanted to see urs and ashu's reaction on thisLOL
i love to give shockers.. and i had to do this coz we all have this lil creeps bout her.. as in we knw she is here for kabeer, but we all will love her ore coz of the suhani samrat angle- ashu calls it thatLOL


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itna chotu...any ways
gud partSmileashi know the truth of uv n sany gud to see that
who will next??


Edited by 00123trisha - 08 May 2011 at 9:02am

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Hey !!! Akshu ... the update was really good .. I just loved the way you used incomplete sentences to show the tumbling feelings inside ClapClap both of their unspoken questions was described beautifully ...TongueTongue loved kabeer - sany too Smile really liked the way you described yuvi's frustration and Ashi's silence ... Tongue although the update was short but the style made it great Wink

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