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~When They Collide~ (AY, TR, SV FF)-Prt76Updt. (Page 47)

BUBLAI Goldie
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Posted: 26 April 2011 at 11:47am | IP Logged
OMG !!!! eliza ... 5 parts back 2 back at one go Shocked I am still in shock ... really can't believe what I am seeing LOLLOL and woh bhi 5 totally rocking parts ClapClap well done dear ... will give a proper comment on all the parts later ... managed to read all the new updates ... Tongue waiting for what happens in the cable car ...Smile

@sanju : your part was really cute and all the cute fights ... i am really loving kabeer and sany these days ... and shell-sid was superb ... bechari humari maate !!!LOL

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Posted: 26 April 2011 at 2:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanjna4

part-25
lizz
woww
awesome flashback
i know it ws lil saddy and i dont like saddy things but d way kabeer pacifies her was d best and i like d way kabeer handled misha

and vrinds getting j...wooo
awesome dat to from shells
double wooo
and my siddy blushing and hun
and lizz tmrw i will update as i cn giv1 hr so plz when u read dis pm me d plot and it shud be realted to sid and shellWink

aww.. finally u read all of them!! and ek ek karke rep kiya!!
lol!!
main bhi aise hi reply karoongi!!
ok.. thanks btw.. i can see tht u loved itEmbarrassed
kabeer can always handle misha.. erm... ashiLOL
vrinda and sid and shells part was left for u.. i didnt knw hw to handle them.. u do justice with them. after AY, sid and vrinda r my fav couple!!Embarrassed
and at times, before uv, i love sid more...at times* like in ur updateLOL
and u can cont the way u want.. ur part, ur plot, ur idea!! :D

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Posted: 26 April 2011 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanjna4

part-26 by lizz
omg omg omg
dis update killed me specially dat flashback
kya update hai re
dis cant get more better i loved it like anything
bubblegun kiss and dat  POP remind me of my childhood dat how i used to tease my mom and it had passion in d update and lizz besharam tune cake ka satyanaas krva diya bt whatever i liked it to d core

thanks again!!Hug
flashback!it was so funny to imagine both of them doing thisLOL and meine cake ka satyanash ni kiya.. yeh ashi and yuvi ne kiya!!
u remmeber ashi had taken a recipie from ranveers mom, coz she cldnt cook and wld ask her maid to do so?LOL
wht do u expect.. yahaan, woh kar payegi?LOL

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Posted: 26 April 2011 at 2:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanjna4

part-27
oh god u r mad lizz
how can u write so baeutifully
kabeer and sany awesome and i love when she dugs foks into thigh i was actually imagining this
awesome and shells(i want to write a part badly) is awesome as she knows whom to strike for a plan but timbo is lil dumbo kinda so maybe plan will not work lets see
awesome update

am mad!! ikLOL
and i write so beautifully coz such beautiful writers read my stuff... i cant write rubbish for them naEmbarrassed
sany poked him with the fork!! i loved wrting tht part!! bada mazza aaya!!
and timbo is nt dumb!! she is tia ahujha!!! she cannot be dumb!! lol!!
her plan will work!!
full on!!
:D

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Posted: 26 April 2011 at 2:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanjna4

also read other parts bt m so sleepy dat i cn comment write now
besharam lizz bache pr taras khaROFL okay whatevr if u insist
tum ek part mein hi nahi likh sakti thi,,,,,,, 29 part ws tooo short
by as usual  u were awesome
and u i guess i cn write next part well cz here we will hav official (seriously official) bhootni and now i will scare uv upto death like anything
and sid shell bhi toh likhna hai
and jo maine unke story sochi hai usko action mein laane ka right tym ab aa gya hai

arey.. i stopped on 28.. fir doosre din hands mein khujli hui, and i strted again.. and then got bored.. and was like enuf!!
:P
and am waiting for some one----- to write the saya yuvi ashi track!!
it can be fun to read if uv is scared to deathLOL
and tumne toh unka mast track banaya hai!! sid and shells ke... plz aur update karo!!

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Posted: 26 April 2011 at 2:49pm | IP Logged
oh lord!!! PART 30!! sanaaa!!!Hug
it was totally a surprise!! loved readin it!! :D
u knw, i was so dying in the hosp to ocme back home and read it!!! and then i read and res tht part...
ab fir read kar ke am commenting!!
:D
sid and shells!! ur forte!! :D u dont knw wht an awesome writer u r when it comes to comedy.. doosre mein bhi mast ho, but in comedy and oneliners, ur awesome!!
the way shells takes his caseROFLROFL
buddha?? seriously??ROFLROFLROFL
and then shells ki  jawaani??? shels usko maar hi daalegi!!ROFL
and am loving the unicorn talk... am so glad tht i got it here.. oh.. remember the humtum thingy tht we wer going to put here.. i guess we shld strt it... the whole articles and all.. remmeber? plz.. i think its high time we strt.. love ur idea.. here.. this one was the best.. the humtum waala!!
and then out of nower he calls her the unbelievable combo of shi and tia ROFLROFL and then he thinks he can get away with tht? sana, from wer do u get such ideas?ROFLROFL
and then sany and kabeer.. teasing her coz he thinks she is married,,, lol.. and then flirting bhi ni chodta..
and then poor vrinda.. thinking kahaan fas gyiROFLROFLROFL

par itna chota update kyun?Angry mujhe aur chiyyeCry
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Posted: 26 April 2011 at 3:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by BUBLAI

OMG !!!! eliza ... 5 parts back 2 back at one go Shocked I am still in shock ... really can't believe what I am seeing LOLLOL and woh bhi 5 totally rocking parts ClapClap well done dear ... will give a proper comment on all the parts later ... managed to read all the new updates ... Tongue waiting for what happens in the cable car ...Smile

@sanju : your part was really cute and all the cute fights ... i am really loving kabeer and sany these days ... and shell-sid was superb ... bechari humari maate !!!LOL

lol.. PITAAA!! hw r u???
long tim!!
and its hight time u strt updating too!!!
and thnaks coz u like them!! ill be waiting for ur reviews! :P
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Posted: 26 April 2011 at 7:46pm | IP Logged

Part 31

Things were not as they seemed. The car stopping in the middle with only ashi by his side, the idea was so exciting for him. This was the time where.. she would have to answer all his questions, moreover, she better did, coz she would have no other option.

He looked below and smirked. They were on some thousand feet height. In the middle of the ropeway, and all alone. If it was some other time, with some other person, he would have surely freaked out, but he didn't need to, he was with the one whom he had always loved. His world was with him, so why would he bother to even think about it even once and get upset.

"LO! Atak gaye" he sighed.

There was an announcement that the ropeway has some mechanical problem. Ice had been formed inside the machine, due to which the cars stopped. There were four cars in all, quite far away, and yuvi could see only one.

"wacko.. tum thodi der ke liye baat karna band nahi kar sakti thi.. poor cable car. Woh bhi tumse darr gaya.. dekho. Ab move bhi nahi kar raha." He looked at her.

Ashi's face was going pale all over again, dilating pupils and shredding skin from her lips. She looked uneasy.

"kya hua wacko? Darr lag raha hai?" he smirked.

She didn't reply.. every minute there were some changes seen in her, he had been talking to her throughout, but she was numb, no expressions and looking at something carefully. Now yuvi wanted to start the grilling session. He wanted to ask her things, to clear out the misunderstandings. He wanted to know the reason why she left him, and he knew this was the best time.

Ashi's POV

I feel like I am dying, like a darkness is ripping my lips, a slow beating reaching for the core of my heart. My eyes twitch occasionally.. slowly closing, and then re opening.. tired and ready to rest.. I can feel yuvi sitting besides be, telling me something, calling me.. but I cant hear him. My cheeks feel like they r hanging over a heat wave, roasting harmfully but yet freezing like being buried in the antartic ocean. I can feel somthing moist go down my throat. Much different then saliva, more like poison.there is this pain in my chest, like drums banging loudly inside my skin, the echoing silence shredding at my flesh from inside, causing to look pale from outside. My hips feel compressed, and my lungs flaming. I cant breathe, I cannot shout, and I just cant scream. My legs have selfishly given away under the weight of my body. Yuvi. All I care for right now is you yuvi, I almost killed you the last time. Plz don't touch me, I don't want to hurt u further. I know what is happening to me, I cannot help it, and you would never believe me. But I don't want to hurt you. Please don't touch me. Don't wake the ghost who has possessed me. She is sleeping. I can feel something inside me.. I can feel her wanting revenge. Yuvi, don't wake her..

Third person's POV.

He called her once. Twice. Thrice. She didn't reply. Her pale face worried him a bit.

"ASHI!" he shook her.

As soon as he did this, ashi lost control over herself. She started opening her manual lock and tried breaking free. This scared yuvi, coz once she did that, she could open the glass door any moment, and could fall down.

He caught her, but her force was too much for him to handle. He couldn't understand the strength she threw.

She was acting psyched, and he couldn't control her. Her grip was too tight and her hands were all over his collar..

"ENOUGH!" he yelled, "enough of your jokes ashi.. your next move, and ill burn you alive"

That reminded him of the fire ashi spoke about, but before he had to do anything, ashi sat still again, without moving, looking ahead and eyes closed.

Time seemed to pass by really slow, it had been an hour which seemed to be a year. He wondered when ashi would stop acting like a kid and  would stop her pranks, and when would the machine be fixed so that they could get up and move around. Asking her about anything at the moment wasnt of any use. She was just quite.. 'so unlike her' he thought..

He looked back at the lighter and smirked..

'fire!'

"looks like some ram gopal verma's phook 3.." he looked at her and choked as he saw her nose bleeding.

"shit!" he yelled

"ASHI! ASHI!!" he couldn't understand anything, she refused to move and looked pale. The only thing that made sense to her was the lighter. He lit it in front of her, and shook her as she collapsed on his shoulder.

Ashi's POV

I wanted to stay alive badly, but some distant part wanted me to die. I had no clue what was happening to me, I tried to keep my eyes open but some strange force closed them tight. My sight was stolen. My hearing was stolen. My tongue felt numb. My smell was stolen.

It was a real blackout, taking me away from reality. My existence. My eyes opened slowly, but everything seemed different. There was no cold, but I felt some warmth. I was almost lying on yuvi, who held me tight. He didn't know what happened, but I did. I edged backwards, my hands ruffling through my hair and my mind ticking like a clock.

Everything seemed calm now, and I didn't hurt him. I never could actually. he was unaware of all this. i had to tell him as I knew what had happened to me.. something paranormal.

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