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Posted: 04 April 2011 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by elizaa

Originally posted by 00123trisha

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it's true
mujhe v mere frnds ko hasana bohot achha lagta h..........skool frnds k sath v aisa hi karti hoon specialy jub vo tifin khatey hROFL
ahahahaha!!!
woh toh humko maaloom hai.. tum tumhare updates se hum sabko kitna hassati ho.. hamara pet dukh jaata hai.. waise woh jab tiffin khate hai tab kyun hassati ho? woh log kuch funny khate hai kya?LOL
as useal kisi baat pe discution chal raho hoti hai or tav apna moo kholti hoonLOL..lol
ek din hum sab yuhi batey kar rahe the or meri ek frnd water pee rahi thi suddenly maine kuch aisa kaha k us k moo se pani nikal k uske side wali girl pe jakey giraROFLROFL or fir shuru hui un dono k beech world wid3LOL

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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 1:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BUBLAI


Hug ab sab kuch itna nice nice likhogi toh aise comments toh sehna hi padega na LOLLOL
I can understand ... tumhari cousin ki love life kaafi rocking hai Tongue

lol thanks..
and haan rocking toh hai, but pata nahi kuch churaane layak hai aur bhiLOL

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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 1:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 00123trisha

as useal kisi baat pe discution chal raho hoti hai or tav apna moo kholti hoonLOL..lol
ek din hum sab yuhi batey kar rahe the or meri ek frnd water pee rahi thi suddenly maine kuch aisa kaha k us k moo se pani nikal k uske side wali girl pe jakey giraROFL or fir shuru hui un dono k beech world wid3LOL

ahahhahahaha!!!!ROFL bacchu, tum bhi na... bada ulta seedha kaam karti hoLOL
world war 3 rukhi kaise? tum nahi piti?LOL
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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 6:39am | IP Logged

part-23

Uv- kya ab

Ashi- d-uh uv mujhe kya pta hoga main kya astrologer hun

Uv- shutup wacko ab kya karna hai.

Ashi-mujhe shuru se hi pta tha kit um dumbo ho magar itne bade wale dumbo ho yeh nahi pta tha. Offcourse lift maangni hai.

Uv- nahi main kisise lift nahi maangoonga aajtak yurajdev ne kisi se lift nahi maangi.

Ashi- charabalgarh ke raja anahi ho tum (den uv stares at her).  Okay whatever  u stay here I can go alone to hotel.

Den ashi tries to stop 3 cars bt of ni use. And uv sees her stopping d car and smiling while standing with the support of tree and waiting for ashi to come to him and asking for his help. But ashi out of arrogance sits  down in d middle of road. Uv gets tensed and walks towards her.

Uv= psycho tumhaari psychopanti kum nahi hui balki badh gae hai. Get up from here.

Ashi- main jo marzi karu tumhe kya.

B4 uv can say anything a truck stops dere.  Ashi gets up and walk towards the driver.

Ashi-(smilea) kya humein lift mil sakti hai

Den truck driver sees ashi from head to toe and uv notices this and clenches his fists.

Driver- kyun nahi humein bhi aapki company mil jaegi.

Then ashu turns to uv.

Ashi- are u cuming?

Uv- ashi hum is truck mein nahi jaa sakte

Ashi- d-uh  come out of ur dream land ab humein yahaan  pr ramgarh ke rath ya shahi sawari mahi milne wali

Den uv says nothing and stands dere arrogantly.

Ashi- k whatever I don't care u stay here am goin.

Den uv sees ashi goin and driver looking at her dirty looks. He sees dat ashi is nt even looking back at him and he knows how arrogant she is he immediately runs

Uv- wait pycho am also cuming

Ashi- finally thulthulgarh ke fake maharaja ko mujhe dekhkr kuch brains mil gae.

Den both of dem sits in d truck where ashi sits in d middle of driver and uv.

Driver- mamdamji kaham ta jaana hai.

Ashi- bs aap jumein 10 km aage chod dijiye aage hum khud chale jayenge.

Driver- aap kahen toh hum aapko hotel tak chod dete hai

Uv- aapko sunayi diya kya humein bs aap 10 km aage chod dijiye

Ashi- uv tum kya kr rahe ho

Driver- yeh thode kum dimag wale lagte hai

Den  uv clenches his fists.

Den while driving driver looking instead of road is watching ashi

Uv- bhaiya aage dekhkr chalao

Driver- ab tu humko chalana seekhayega hum 5 saal se driver hai is truck ke. Poore ladakh mein hum jaisa driver kahin nahi milega.

Ashi- uv unko apna kaam karne do tum apne  non-existing brains ka use mat karo

Driver is still watching her and to save ashi frm dirty looks of driver uv pulls out his jacket and

Uv- ashi tumhein thand lag rahi hai tum yeh jacket lelo

Ashi- tumse kisne kaha ki mujhe thand lag rahi hai. And vaise bhi maine tumse jacket lekr tumhaari gf se joote nahi khaane.

Uv- ashi plz lelo meri baat mano tumhein thand lag rahi hai

Ashi- meri paas khud ki jacket hai. And tum mein itni tameez kab se aa gae jab maine caf mein tumse jacket maangi thi tab toh tumne di nahi thi.

Den uv shuts his mouth and driver starts singing while looking at ashi "bheege hoth tere pyaasa dil mera………."

Uv- kya aap apne gaan abandh kr sakte hai aisa lag raha hai koi besura taanpura bja raha hai

Ashi- shut up uv itna acha toh gaa rahe hai. Aap iski baton pr dhyaan mat didjiye aap gaiyye.

Den driver sings and uv gets irritated

Uv- ashi mujhe vomiting aa rahi hai mujhe middle mein aana hai

Ashi- dumbo ke shehzada jab vomiting aati hai toh middle mein nahi window k paas baithte hai and tum already vahin baithe ho.

Uv- ashi mujhe lagta hai meri tabiyat kharaab ho rahi hai mujhe abhi is truck se uttarna hai.

Ashi- uv don't worry we will take u to hospital

Uv- nahi ashi mujhe pta hai truck se uttarte hi meri tabiyat theek ho jaegi

Ashi- bhaiya plz stop d truck

Den dtiver drops dem dere and uv keeps doin acting till d driver goes from dere and when d driver goes. Uv gets up

Uv- now m fine lets go

Ashi- yuvraaj dev m not goin to leave u were acting(den she bangs on at him)

Den uv controls her and she gets back into senses and both of dem starts walking without saying anything without saying anything

Ashi- uv I cant walk more

Uv- ashi stop throwing tantrums

Ashi- shutup wacko ek toh tumhaari vajah se mujhe chalana padh raha hai, maine toh lift bhi maangi thi bt tumhaara dimag to jhunum ki sair kr raha hai

Uv says nothing and without looking at her he keeps on walking after few minutes he fibds that ashi is not walking with him and he is walking alone. Den uv gets tensed and starts rumming at back. After 5 mins of fast running he finds ashi sitting on road.

Uv: tum pagal ho kya.  Ha main bhi kya puch raha hum hr pagal nahi hi kehta hai. Tum itni weak kab se ho gae.

Ashi: shutup u wacko mere legs mein chot lag gae hai.. if u can see…. Ha main bhi akkal ke andhe ko dekhne k liye keh rahi hun.

Uv- ab

Ashi- mujhe kya pta

Den uv sees her legs which misplaced dere muscles. Den he takes her into his arms and starts walking. While walking ashi keeps looking at him without closing her eyes.

After few mins walkin he drops her on the road

Ashi: I knw u r out of ur mind and nw u r out of ur senses also.

Uv- shutup psycho I cant walk  3 kms more while holdin u… see what is dere

Den ashi looks at bike dere  where uv was pointing

Ashi- woahooooooo……….. finally meri company mein u stole my super-fast brains

Uv- ya ur imaginary brains

Den uv takes out a swiss knife which ws once gifted to him by ashi and strts breaking d lock of bike. Aftr 5 mins work he gets successful in it and strts d bike and den he makes d ashi sits on bike comfortabily den he strts driving d bike.

 

p.s- I missed my sid and shell while writing this part and I know I can't do justice to ashi and uv character

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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 8:24am | IP Logged
lovely update ... nice one ... next update soon ...

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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 9:18am | IP Logged
res! sanu, i love you. :D i want a similar part for abhisha. LOL

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sanu .. i hate you. aise ache ache parts tum abhisha ke liye kyon nahi likhti? Cry i'm telling you.. i want a part like that. LOL

ahaha, shuru se hi mast tha. .''The great Yuvraj Dev kabhi lift nahi maangega'' ROFL and the way he was leaning against the tree and smirking at her when she couldn't get a lift, aww! Embarrassed

the whole dirty driver thing reminded me ssooo much of sid-tamanna. LOL ahahah, our cutie siddy widdy when he appeard out of the back seat and the driver jumped. LOL you know, i'd have LOVED to see a yuvi like that, poora dramaking. ROFL OMG.. imagine. ROFL but, then again, the whole ''tumhein thand lag rahi hai!'' ''mujhe thand nahi lag rahi'' kinda made up for it! LOL I mean like..seriously.. ''Meri baat mano TUMHEIN THAND LAG RAHI HAI.'' LOL ! haha, and jab vo nahi chala..acting like he's about to vomit..and he needs to sit in the middle. ROFL and ashi's like. ''tum side pe baithe hue ho already, and tabiyat kharaab ho toh side pe baithte hain.'' LOL hahahaa, yuvi. <3

aww, he picks her up. so TRish ..not that i mind. LOL and then the bike..woopie hoopie. me lovey, me lovey! continue soon. :D or..i will. LOL







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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 11:20am | IP Logged
hey !! sanjana .... the update was really cute ... bechare yuvi ko aur kahan kahan ka king banaoongi ...LOLLOL the names of the places were really funny ROFL Ashi and her creations .... LOL the way yuvi was getting possessive and concerned for Ashi was really sweet and funny at the same time ... loved the entire truck driver wala sequence ... LOLLOL that was really rocking .... enjoyed a lot reading this update TongueTongue

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 11:39am | IP Logged
okay so i read part 5 n 6!! yes dnt hit me...im still stuck on part 6!!
 
sanju: awesomeeeeeeeee loved ur part Big smile
 
@aki: i expected dat dhamaka from u..wen ay both meet! Big smile
 
awesome parts..ill try n read more!

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