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~When They Collide~ (AY, TR, SV FF)-Prt76Updt. (Page 36)

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Posted: 03 April 2011 at 9:16am | IP Logged
finally u gave an updt lizz
dia to dia itna achhaHug
next sana right?

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Posted: 03 April 2011 at 9:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _Akanksha_

liz, liz, liz, liz, liz .. why didn't you tell me you updated? :O atleast send me a PM! you know i don't check this place daily, don't you? :P

ash ash ashhhh!!
lol.. i thot id tell u wen i come ol.. but u already read itLOL

awesome update. :D yeah, okay, i need to brush up my vocabulary before updating, right? well, wrong. hmph, this is what you get for not telling me about your update. Angry tumhaari vajah se sanu stole my first space. Cry

yeah.. plz.. new words this time..lmao
lol.. awwie u too let her steal my frist place.. and i deserve tht.. ive been a part of ur IL as am ur personal helper naEmbarrassed

i loved the first paragraph, i've re-read it, like, 4 times now. ashi. LOL instead of being grateful to uv for saving her life, she's angry at him for not listening to her when he could have died..and lmao, i'm a superwoman. ROFL  the highlight of the para was sanaya, though. you make me like her, now. :D

lol.. u knw i didnt knw hw to strt.. tht made me wai for so long.. then i wrote duniyan bhar ki bakwaas from ashi's pov.. tht only did make sense to me at tht point of timeLOL
lol.. ashi always thinks she is a superwoman... hai na... toh dall diya.. dunya bhar ka ashi character sketch of the original ashi is in this ashi.. thnks to all the brains involvedLOL i wanted to like sany.. so yeah

wax doll/car/hands.. omg, liz, tumhein ye idea kahaan se aaya!? when i scrolled down to see how big the part was, i saw the picture of the hands, n i'm just like.. okay W*F? LOL but when i read whole of it, that is, the whole flashback, aw, it was so cute. see, even when they're supposed to be fighting, you fulfill your sadistic romance pleasure by putting flashbacks. :P

bola na experience helps alwaysEmbarrassed
the wax thing was one thing i adored after this part was done..
oh btw, u knw.. i was in this whole lovey dovey mood,, so u knw... i wanted a romanic cheesy partEmbarrassed a CHEESY one.. i wantedEmbarrassed
 so i got itLOL
kiss, lmao. reminds me of the kiss rule. LOL it was so cute. i loved the hand picture. :D haha, bulky hands. ROFL you bring out the wacko and psycho awesomely! LOL haha, yuvi. kabeer ke lectures se bach raha hai. LOL lmao.. he acts as if uv doesnt have a brain of his own..wait, that's what she said. aww, this line was adorable. Embarrassed

haan.. kiss, lol.. not the kiss rule.. but yeah.. i told u bout wht my mood was like.. lo.
ehehe.. ty.. bulky hads.. poor uv.. u knw this reminded me of a ay ff.. i cld have put tht scene here, wer ashi goes like u insult each and every part of my body.. and thn do this..
but then i didnt knw which ff tht was.. so i cldnt give the credit na.
anyway.. this wasnt tht bad itself.. rightLOL.. 
and thnk u yaar.. u r the only one tht notice all the wackynees i put, and then bring it up.. thnaks haanEmbarrassed

continue soooooon...ooh, okay, you're writing right now. :D :D .. waiting waiting. 
thnk u again, and ill strt now!!Embarrassed


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Posted: 03 April 2011 at 9:31am | IP Logged
no next lizz den me
bt u will get dese 2 updates till tmrw only

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Posted: 03 April 2011 at 9:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 00123trisha

finally u gave an updt lizz
dia to dia itna achhaHug
next sana right?

thanks trish.. and m giving the next part too. then its sanaEmbarrassed

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Posted: 03 April 2011 at 9:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanjna4

no next lizz den me
bt u will get dese 2 updates till tmrw only

lmao haan sana.. unres karoooo...
and ill give it in an hr or two maybe
:D

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Posted: 03 April 2011 at 10:38am | IP Logged
lizzzzzzzzzzzz
amazing update in this finally u showed dere love
and yeh wax wala idea aaya kahan se'
m in love wid ur falasbacks
superb ypdate
and plz update next par soon
and i love pshycho and wacko
and ashi ko ab tak smjh kyun nahi aa raha ki uv ne usse kyun bachaaya

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Posted: 03 April 2011 at 10:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanjna4

lizzzzzzzzzzzz
amazing update in this finally u showed dere love
and yeh wax wala idea aaya kahan se'
m in love wid ur falasbacks
superb ypdate
and plz update next par soon
and i love pshycho and wacko
and ashi ko ab tak smjh kyun nahi aa raha ki uv ne usse kyun bachaaya

thnaks sana.. am glad ur enjoyiing my flashbacksLOL i so cannot be in the sad mode for a long time..
wax waala idea was experience.. happend to my elder sisEmbarrassed wen she was in skool.. now married had has 2 kids with him. we always look uo to her love storyEmbarrassed
psycho wacko i love to put :D
ashi knows that he saved her coz he loves her. in the back of her mind she does, but u knw, defense mechanisms, regretion.  she will not accept the fact coz he has hurt her once, and she has gotten out of it with loads of difficulty. so she doesnt trust him with her heart again..

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Posted: 03 April 2011 at 11:20am | IP Logged

part 22

He looked at her as she stared back at the grave. She drew imaginary designs on the grave with her fore finger. Yuvi could see her face turning white and raw. Her eyes had already turned upside down and her hair left loose, all knotted.  Yuvi felt like she knew- he was following her. He was so sure this girl was upto something.

"wacko.. pata nahi kya prove karna chahti hai.. disaster that she is!" he said to himself

He cursed her till he could see her nose bleeding, she had gone all pale with the skin on her face shredding. The site of her being this way, scared him, he quicky went up to her and shook her.

As he tried to move her, he felt her body g stiffer. In no time, her hand was around his neck, trying to choke him..strangle him... or rather kill him

"wacko!! Chodo!! Kya kar rahi ho!"

Suddenly she had gone all manly, the girl who would easily melt in his arms and who could not save herself from being kissed by him, showed some extra skill this time. Her pressure around his neck was increasing, and she started speaking in some manly unknown voice.

Her voice seemed to be killing him more then her strangling him. He couldn't see anything now.. he quickly removed a lighter from his pocket and lit it..

"ashi chodo.. warna chatka de doonga" he grunted, as she fell loose, down in his arms.

"wacko!" he looked at her as he wiped the blood of her face.  Her face was back to the pink and peach zone, the skin shredding had stopped and it looked like milk and cream to him in the moon light.

 "wacko!!" he shook her.

He looked around and found that the place was not at all safe for them, he picked her and walked towards some light, the place where the bonfire was held last night.

Ashi slowly opened her eyes and saw herself in some familiar arms.

She tightened her fist and gave a tight blow across his jaws.

"OUCHH!" he dropped her.

"PSYCHO!! Mujhe kahaan kidnap karke le jaa rahe ho?" she grunted

"shut up wacko.. mujhe kya pagal kutte ne kaata hai jo mein tumko kidnap karoonga?" he pressed his jaws

"nahi! Kaise kaat ta? Dogs dogs ko nahi kaat te!" she yelled

"wacko! Tum yahaan khud se aayi, and I followed you, you seemed to be in a very bad state. You wer sitting on some grave, nose bleeding, skin shredding, manly voice. Eew! What has gotten into you?"

Ashi knew what he was speaking about. She knew saya had got her here, but she even knew, yuvi would never believe her. Why would he.. he always thought she was a drama queen.

"what rubbish! Your saying all this coz I caught u red handed, YOU. WER. KIDNAPPING. ME! YOU RAPIST!!" she snorted.

"r-r-rapist? Listen wacko.. I knw this was all of your drama.. all coz you wanted me to give you attention. And now that you have got all the possible attention from me, shall we leave?"

"huh!! Attention from you? Dream on!" she gritted her teeth, "DOG!"

"BITCH!" he continued and looked away.

They stayed like that for a few minutes till yuvi try to break the silence, "chalein?"

"chalo!" she raised her hand.

"lagta hai tumne apne mom se kaafi cheezein inherit ki hai.. tum acchi actress ban sakti ho!"

"par tumne apne dad se nahi ki.. kyunke unke paas hai hi nahi"

"Kya?"

"duh- uh brains yuvi" she looked at him as he lowered his gaze.

She bit her tongue as she remembered that mr dev was no more, and she was there for him then, when all he needed was her. She remembered how she had promised him that whatever it is, she would always be there for him. She sighed and kept a hand on his shoulder.

"yuvi"

"ashi" he looked at her, "chalo.. rasta pata hai na?" He said dryly

Ashi - "nahi toh. Tum mujhe kidnap karke laye ho.. how would I knw?"

Yuvi- "wacko! Meine tumhein kidnap nahi kiya. Tum mujhe yahaan le aayi"

Ashi- "loser, mein kya tumhein yahaan kheech ke laayi thi?"

Yuvi- "nahi, tumko mein follow karte karte aaya!"

Ashi (screaming)- "tum mujhe follow kyun kar rahe the?"

Yuvi- "kyun ki.. kyunki tum ek wacko ho.. ghum jaati.. and fir koi cliff se kood padti toh? Accha chalo, tell me which way do we go?"

Ashi (pointing towards some light)- "this!"

Yuvi (pointing in the exact opposite direction)- "this"

They fought for a while deciding which one was right, wen ashi came back to her previous topic, asking yuvi y he had to follow her, yuvi having no words, agreed to her to the way she wanted to go and followed her, rubbing his temples.

finally they reached the mainroad as ashi rubbed her knees.. "ab?" she asked him.

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