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~When They Collide~ (AY, TR, SV FF)-Prt76Updt. (Page 34)

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 10:01am | IP Logged
 @ Eliza :  hey !! the part was really good .... I especially loved this portion :
 " Ashi looked back at yuvi who stared at her. She felt Goosebumps as kabeer said- no man would. She remembered the nite when the cop had caught her, and when she cried to ride all the way back to mauriya.. yuvi did sit behind her. That never meant she was stronger than him, or she was any level higher thn him.. it just clearly meant how much he respected her wishes and desires, how much he loved to see her happy..'' ... this clearly shows how much they both understand each other TongueTongue
kabeer ke chakkar mein bechara sid phas gaya LOLLOL bechare ke jaan ko problem ho gaya tha ... the sany-kabeer fight was really cute Tongue 
yeh saya ka saya ashi ka peecha kab chorega ..Angry  make the horror track really interesting ... it will be interesting to read Tongue

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 10:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BUBLAI

 @ Eliza :  hey !! the part was really good .... I especially loved this portion :
 " Ashi looked back at yuvi who stared at her. She felt Goosebumps as kabeer said- no man would. She remembered the nite when the cop had caught her, and when she cried to ride all the way back to mauriya.. yuvi did sit behind her. That never meant she was stronger than him, or she was any level higher thn him.. it just clearly meant how much he respected her wishes and desires, how much he loved to see her happy..'' ... this clearly shows how much they both understand each other TongueTongue
kabeer ke chakkar mein bechara sid phas gaya LOLLOL bechare ke jaan ko problem ho gaya tha ... the sany-kabeer fight was really cute Tongue 
yeh saya ka saya ashi ka peecha kab chorega ..Angry  make the horror track really interesting ... it will be interesting to read Tongue

thanks arpu.. ikr. kabeer is making ashi think bout uv unkowingly.. and he is another duffer, he will keep saying such things and ashi will keep looking at uvEmbarrassed remembering the old days...
yeh saya ka hi toh maya hai.. saya mite even let ay get closer to each other
:D
but she is the bad one.. dangerous and very scary.. buut we have yuvi who is her personal bodyguardLOL
isnt the horror track interesting rite now?Ouch ill try to make it more fun for uTongue
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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 10:28am | IP Logged
u guys no what maine wtc ki itni notification dekhi so i ws like yayyyyyyyyyyyy
new part
bt whn looked here den mera yeh reaction thaBroken Heart

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 11:14am | IP Logged
@ Akanksha : the part was written superbly ... each and every detail has been concentrated on very minutely ... loved the way Ashi and yuvi both were concerned about each other's safety ... Ashi at that point of tym also was busy snapping at yuvi LOL
''Yuvi, tumhaara dimaag chuttiyon pe gaya hai kya!?'' Ashi shut her eyes and grunted. ''You will fall off! Stay where you are.''

''Shut up wacko!'' Yuvi answered back, and turned to Ranveer and Tia. ''Guys, get me something strong like a rope, quick.''

''In 2 minutes, Yuvi had the rope. He tied it around his waist, and handed the opposite end to Tia and Ranveer. ''Tie this to a tree.'' He looked back at the cliff. ''Ashi, hold on. I am coming!''

''Hold on karne ka alaawa mere paas koi option bhi nahi hai! Psycho!'' Ashi snapped.

''Wacko .. '' Yuvi shook his head as he started climbing down the cliff slowly. He kept a foot on a rock which fell off.

''Duh uh, tumne marne ka bahut shauk hai ? Dhyaan se chalo!''

''Main tumhaari hi jaan bachaane ki koshish kar raha hoon, wacko!'' He held out a hand. ''Haath do!''

''Duh uh, agar maine tumhein abhi apna haath diya na, toh main khud bhaggu ke paas pahunch jaaungi!'' She again tried to push herself forward, but couldn't.''

just loved loved loved this part ... it was so AY-ish Day Dreaming
thanks for keeping it that way Tongue now i'm waiting to see tia's plans ...Wink

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 11:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by elizaa

Originally posted by BUBLAI

 @ Eliza :  hey !! the part was really good .... I especially loved this portion :
 " Ashi looked back at yuvi who stared at her. She felt Goosebumps as kabeer said- no man would. She remembered the nite when the cop had caught her, and when she cried to ride all the way back to mauriya.. yuvi did sit behind her. That never meant she was stronger than him, or she was any level higher thn him.. it just clearly meant how much he respected her wishes and desires, how much he loved to see her happy..'' ... this clearly shows how much they both understand each other TongueTongue
kabeer ke chakkar mein bechara sid phas gaya LOLLOL bechare ke jaan ko problem ho gaya tha ... the sany-kabeer fight was really cute Tongue 
yeh saya ka saya ashi ka peecha kab chorega ..Angry  make the horror track really interesting ... it will be interesting to read Tongue

thanks arpu.. ikr. kabeer is making ashi think bout uv unkowingly.. and he is another duffer, he will keep saying such things and ashi will keep looking at uvEmbarrassed remembering the old days...
yeh saya ka hi toh maya hai.. saya mite even let ay get closer to each other
:D
but she is the bad one.. dangerous and very scary.. buut we have yuvi who is her personal bodyguardLOL
isnt the horror track interesting rite now?Ouch ill try to make it more fun for uTongue

no no ... i don't mean that ... definitely it's interesting right now ... but aur zyada scary hota toh mujhe accha lagta ... but you are free to go that way you planned it Tongue

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Posted: 01 April 2011 at 6:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanjna4

u guys no what maine wtc ki itni notification dekhi so i ws like yayyyyyyyyyyyy
new part
bt whn looked here den mera yeh reaction thaBroken Heart

dil ke armaan aansuon mein beh gaye






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Posted: 03 April 2011 at 2:21am | IP Logged
so many days & no new parts??????Angry
wat hapend guys???
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Posted: 03 April 2011 at 2:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 00123trisha

so many days & no new parts??????Angry
wat hapend guys???


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