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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by elizaa

SANUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FINALLY!! itni der mein koi bhi update ke liye nahi rukhi hoon.. subah uthte hi was searching for ur update...
but you!!Angry grrr...
nvm... abhi mil gaya!!!! and u knw as always!! its AWESOME!! AWESOMISHTTTT!!
i was eating and i was stuck in one position.. bechaari ashi.. min bhi dar gayi..
loved the yuvi kabeer ashi track..
ashi pushes uv and runs to kabeer.. lmao... i feel so bad for uv.. but am loving this.. ultra sufi!!
sid and shells wer fun too..
i have one complaint.. u arent showing me more of sid and vrinda as u promised.. i want their track to move a bit faster now!!
:D
and ranveer and kabeer trusting her toh was wht we always wanted!!
mast update
:D

u knw how lazy i am
and sorry 4 late update
thanx alot lizz 4 likin itBig smile
m glad i ws successful in scrring u
and i loved t write jealousy thing
actually once anky told me to go slow with the track
so now i will move fast in dat story

and thanx 4 givin me ur support

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 4:07am | IP Logged

Part 19

It was around one in the afternoon, everyone was getting ready for skiing. Taking their sking bags, they waited for each other outside the hotel. The ride to the skiing point had to be by a bike. There were a number of bikes available.. ashi looked at them and jumped with joy, "guys, ab bolo.. ladakh aane ka plan boora tha? Riding a bike in the snow!! Its going to be fun!!"

"tia Is loving it as well wacko!" replied tia

"and this is seriously some sufi fun!" cried sid

Ashi- "chalo guys lets go!! Kabeer, tum mere saath chalo!" (she smiled)

Kabeer- "sure!"

Ashi (taking the keys in her hand) - "par bike mein chalaaongi!!"

Kabeer (shocked)- "wht? What rubbish?? I wont sit behind you! Am sure no man would!"

Ashi looked back at yuvi who stared at her. She felt Goosebumps as kabeer said- no man would. She remembered the nite when the cop had caught her, and when she cried to ride all the way back to mauriya.. yuvi did sit behind her. That never meant she was stronger than him, or she was any level higher thn him.. it just clearly meant how much he respected her wishes and desires, how much he loved to see her happy..

Kabeer- "seriously.. which guy would? Agar tumhaara boyfriend tumse hadh se zyaada pyaar bhi karta ho, toh who bhi peeche nahi baithega"

Tia (teasingly)- "Kyun.. nahi baithega ashii????? "

Ashi-"kya??"

Tia- "tia means to say ki tumhare peeche koi ladka nahi baitha?"

Ashi- "nahi.." (looks at yuvi) "par aaj bathega na!" (flutters her lashes)

She looked at yuvi as he fake smiled at her. She went to him and pulled him along..

Sid-"kya? Mein?"

Ashi- "kya mein mein kar rahe ho bakri ke tarha.. chalo sid warna tumhein sheetal ke peeche baithna hoga.."

Sid- "chalo!"

Tia (rolls her eyes)- "ranveer.. inki nautanki ho gayi, ab hum chalein?"

Ranveer (nods his head and laughs) –"chalieye tia!"

Sheetal- "ashi di bike chala rahi hai toh mein bhi chalaoongi!!"

Vrinda- "nahi.. you're a minor rite now.."

Sheetal- "aap se pooch kaun raha hai? mein sirf bata rahi hoon!!! Chalo, peeche baitho!"

Vrinda- "thanks.. but no thanks.. mujhe marne ka shauk nahi hai!" (goes to yuvi) "yuvi, can u take me along"

Sheetal- "thank god! Tumhare 70kgs mujhe uthane nahi hoge!! All the best yuvi bhayya!" (hits the accelerator and speeds off)

 Yuvi (laughs)- "sure sweetie, lets go" (looks at kabeer) "kabeer, can u get san along.. pata nahi kahaan reh gayi hai, I guess we all shall leave, u get her along"

Kabeer (disgusted) "sanaya? Alrite"

It had been more thn 10 mins. Kabeer felt like he was waiting for sanaya since forever. He was just to leave her and go, when she came down.. in her white furs. She looked more like a stuffed toy. White polished skin, big bold eyes and pink cheeks. Her jacket suited her as if it was made just for her. He would have liked her if it was his first meet, but he knew what a snob she was.. and he was not in the mood to give-in her snobbish nature.

Sany- "YOU!! Where are the others"

Kabeer- "they've left.. nobody wanted to wait for you"

Sany- "excuse me.. where is yuvi! Sid?"

Kabeer- "left"

Sany- "with ashi?"

Kabeer- (nodded) "yeah.. and if your investigation is over can we leave as well?"

Sany (yawning)- "do I have to go with you?"

Kabeer- "no.. ofcourse not! The prime minister is sending his car to pick you up!"

Sany- "oh.. thank god.. how long will it take?"

Kabeer (holding his head)- "oh… just shut up bimbo..and come along.."

Sany (sitting behind him) – "bimbo?? apni maa ko bolo yeh!!chalo abhi!"

-       -

On the way..

Sid- "ashi.. thoda slow chalao!!"

Ashi- "shut up dufus! Bolo... fast chalao!!!"

Sid- "ashiiii… mein gir jaaonga!"

Ashi- "duh uh!! Toh mujhe tight pakad lo!"

Sid- "paagal ho kya? Tumko tight pakdoon? Yuvi mera murder kar daalega!"

Ashi – "kya?"

Sid- "aur nahi toh kya.. he will kill me.. I don't want to take chances with his love"

Ashi- "oh shut up sid!" (speeds up)

-        -

Tia put her hand on ranveers shoulder and slid a bit closer to him. Her thighs bracketed his.. body pressed against his back, and the other hand holding him on the waist. He pulled out on the road travelling slowly. After a few mins of travel, her hands slid under the front of his jacket. She found the edge of his shirt, and slid her hand under there aswell. He palms smoothed up his chest, the contrast between her warm hands and the cool air send chills down his back.

He eased the bike of the road and pulled of his helmet, it was well of the main road, so no interruptions. She reluctantly removed her helmet, releasing her dark hair. He bent down to tia and kissed her aggressively on her lips.

Tia (breaking the kiss) "camel.. tia thinks we shld tell them."

Ranveer (kissing her back) – "yes tia, we will'

-       -

Vrinda- "god yuvi! Yeh sheetal, tia ashi ke saath reh reh kar bilkul unke jisi ho gayi hai!! Sometimes she is total tia and sometimes fully ashi!"

Yuvi- "yeah!! Dikh raha tha.. waise vrinda.. kabeer aur ashi abhi saath rehte hai kya?"

Vrinda- "haan.. who dono saath hi rehte hai.. kabeer is her neighbor"

Yuvi (relieved)- "oh, mujhe laga they are dating again."

Vrinda- "kyun.. tumko kya farak padhta hai ussey.. and u shld ask ashi about this.. I dnt want to speak on this topic"

Yuvi (teasingly) – "oh, so wht do u want to talk about? Sid??"

Vrinda- "oh shut up yuvi!"

-       -

Kabeer – "girl.. hold me tight, warna tum gir jaogi"

Sany- "id think bout holding tighter, but cant help.. pig!! you stink"

Kabeer (fixes a gear and skids)- "alright"

Sany (holds on to him tightly burying her head in his jacket)- "ouch! God!!"

Kabeer (snorts) –"yes.. ouch!"

-       -

All of them finally reach the sking spot. After parking their bikes, they walk together.

Ashi was busy talking to Sonia as she walked behind.

"A$$$$$$HH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

She quickly hung up on Sonia as she heard her name again.. "vrinde ne medicines diye hai.. I guess am just hallucinating" she told herself..

She walked a bit faster..

"A$$H!!"

And bumped into yuvi. She caught his arm and pressed it hard. Her one touch, and he knew something was bothering ashi. He turned behind and kept a hand on her hand.

"what?"

She looked at his hand and left him,

"nothing"

He turned back, walking away wondering what was wrong with her- "another prank am sure" he was loud enough.

Ashi stood frozen as she felt a hand brushing against her cheeks. It was the same feeling, the same touch she felt last night. Next she feels the hand going to her shoulder. She held her breath as everyone moved ahead. The hand softly tapped her on her shoulder as she lost her balance and tripped. She tripped over a larger stone and fell at the edge of the cliff.

The whole gang heard her fall and ran to look for her. "ASHIIII!!!!"

They called out her name many times but didn't get any response.. yuvi went up to the edge and called out for her violently when he heard her voice in response.

 "YUVI!!!! MEIN YAHAAN HOON!!!"

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 8:21am | IP Logged
lizzz love u 4 thid update
it was best update till date
how can u write so goood
i loved kabeer sany
sid ashi
shell rocked
tia and thakur....... how romantic
and last part ashi calling 4 yuvi

i read  this update 3 times
and i can still read dis again
 and i love uv getting j and 
he is teasing vrind
how cute


and bechaara sid hamesha vahin fansta hai
ladkiyon ki tarah behave kr raha tha


lizzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
lovvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee uuuuuuuuuuuuuu
4 dis update 
m in love wid dis updateHug


Edited by sanjna4 - 28 March 2011 at 8:40am

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 8:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanjna4

lizzz love u 4 thid update
it was best update till date
how can u write so goood
i loved kabeer sany
sid ashi
shell rocked
tia and thakur....... how romantic
and last part ashi calling 4 yuvi

ty ty and thankk you again sana!(! ikr, i was enjoying so much while writing.. bada maza aa raha tha.. the group bits was fun writing..
kabeer sany had to strt, so this was a good way to i guess.
sid ashi toh i lked because of the mention of yuvi in this
:D
shells toh my favvii!!!Embarrassed
tia thakus frst kiss in our ff, if u remmeber!! i so love them being mushy mushy!! :D


i read  this update 3 times
and i can still read dis again
 and i love uv getting j and 
he is teasing vrind
how cute

thanks yaar, even i love jealous yuvi, but the best part was she called out for uv wen she fell down.. ashu is going next.. saya kya kya karegi i dnt know, but one this is there for me to tell you, tht even if yuvi wont trust her, he will be the only one to save her.. hopefully!!
:D
him teasing vrinda is adorable naaaaaEmbarrassed

and bechaara sid hamesha vahin fansta hai
ladkiyon ki tarah behave kr raha tha


lizzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
lovvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee uuuuuuuuuuuuuu
4 dis update 
m in love wid dis updateHug

thnak you shona!!! idk, but i loved writing this part.. u knw wht a big sucker i am for group convos.. even in pkek i ask u and ashu to give me more ove mish/raj*abhi or the whole group!!
the gang fun is always my frst preference
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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 11:14am | IP Logged
Liz, why didn't you tell me you updated? :O Hawwwww !! Angry

Awesome update.. I won't repeat my 'one of the best' updates line again.. or you'd be like, ashu, brush up your vocabulary skills. :P This update had EVERYTHING.. Jealousy, fun, teasing, romance. =D

LMAO .. Kabir didn't sit behind Ashi. Haha, this makes me love my bike ride more. =D I love the way we're connecting both of the stories! Embarrassed

ROFLROFL Ashi pulls Sid along. ''Bakri ki tarah main main kya kar rahe ho .. '' LOLLOL Hhahahaha, I love Siddy!! <3333 

LOLLOL Sheetal rides a bike, too. =D And, LOL, Vrinda has to go with Yuvi! The highlight of this part = Kabir and Sanaya! ROFL They are adorable! Big smile

OMG, This was the highlight - Ashi-Sid! ROFL ''Mujhe tight pakado'' ''Yuvi mujhe maar daalega!'' ROFLROFL I love him even more, now. ;D <33

You stink. Pig. ROFL Lizzzzz, I love Sanu. =D

Yay yay yay yay, she fell off! Okay..I shouldn't be THAT happy, but I can't help it right now. :P I loved the way she held on to Yuvi when she was scared, and he brushed it off as a prank. :P He goes and saves her. Aww ! =D




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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 11:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _Akanksha_

Liz, why didn't you tell me you updated? :O Hawwwww !! Angry

ofcourse i did.. u kept me buzy with ur friend, and thts wen i said.. go go read :P
:P

Awesome update.. I won't repeat my 'one of the best' updates line again.. or you'd be like, ashu, brush up your vocabulary skills. :P This update had EVERYTHING.. Jealousy, fun, teasing, romance. =D
ashu, uknow wht.. i so loved writing this part.. and i knew it wld be fun reading too.. par bohot zyaada bada ho gaya na? and plz u can say its one of the best updates... i like reading thtEmbarrassed

LMAO .. Kabir didn't sit behind Ashi. Haha, this makes me love my bike ride more. =D I love the way we're connecting both of the stories! Embarrassed
hai na hai na?? kabeer didnt sit behind ashi and tia reminded her of yuvi who actually did.. even am loving the way we r connecting both the stories.. the bike ride was so my faviiii!!!


ROFLROFL Ashi pulls Sid along. ''Bakri ki tarah main main kya kar rahe ho .. '' LOLLOL Hhahahaha, I love Siddy!! <3333 
me too loves siddy, bechaara is always the bakra.. and i even loved ashi sid talk on wer he says uv will kill me if i hold u... trust me.. am in love with this part of mine.. idk yLOL

LOLLOL Sheetal rides a bike, too. =D And, LOL, Vrinda has to go with Yuvi! The highlight of this part = Kabir and Sanaya! ROFL They are adorable! Big smile

shells rides a bike.. ashi ki hamshakal.. :P... kabeer and sany got to be together.. :D

OMG, This was the highlight - Ashi-Sid! ROFL ''Mujhe tight pakado'' ''Yuvi mujhe maar daalega!'' ROFLROFL I love him even more, now. ;D <33
lol.. this is wh i just replied.. siddy makes me fall for him more and moreEmbarrassed

You stink. Pig. ROFL Lizzzzz, I love Sanu. =D

me too.. she has the guts to say tth to kabeer..Embarrassed even ashi never had the guts to do thatEmbarrassed

Yay yay yay yay, she fell off! Okay..I shouldn't be THAT happy, but I can't help it right now. :P I loved the way she held on to Yuvi when she was scared, and he brushed it off as a prank. :P He goes and saves her. Aww ! =D

lol.. haan she fell off.. chalo, now its ur turn as u promised... ur going next!!!LOL

and ty btw!!! Hug




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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 2:12pm | IP Logged
Part 20

''Ashi!'' Yuvi called out as he bent down on his knees near the edge of the cliff. ''Ashi, kahaan ho tum?'' 

''Yuvi .. Ouch!'' Ashi answered as she tried her best to pull herself upwards.

Yuvi sighed with relief when he saw her hanging in the air, holding onto a piece of branch that looked like it will fall off any minute now. ''Ashi, hold on, main aa raha hoon .. ''

''Yuvi!'' Sanaya shouted. ''You can't go there!''

''Sanaya, we don't have time to argue.'' Yuvi snapped. 

''Yuvi, tumhaara dimaag chuttiyon pe gaya hai kya!?'' Ashi shut her eyes and grunted. ''You will fall off! Stay where you are.''

''Shut up wacko!'' Yuvi answered back, and turned to Ranveer and Tia. ''Guys, get me something strong like a rope, quick.''

In 2 minutes, Yuvi had the rope. He tied it around his waist, and handed the opposite end to Tia and Ranveer. ''Tie this to a tree.'' He looked back at the cliff. ''Ashi, hold on. I am coming!''

''Hold on karne ka alaawa mere paas koi option bhi nahi hai! Psycho!'' Ashi snapped.

''Wacko .. '' Yuvi shook his head as he started climbing down the cliff slowly. He kept a foot on a rock which fell off.

''Duh uh, tumne marne ka bahut shauk hai ? Dhyaan se chalo!''

''Main tumhaari hi jaan bachaane ki koshish kar raha hoon, wacko!'' He held out a hand. ''Haath do!''

''Duh uh, agar maine tumhein abhi apna haath diya na, toh main khud bhaggu ke paas pahunch jaaungi!'' She again tried to push herself forward, but couldn't.

''Fine, your choice.'' He shrugged.

''Wait, wait, wait.'' Ashi snapped. She looked down once, and regretted it immediately.

''Ashi .. '' Yuvi could sense the discomfort in her, he smiled his most adorable smile. ''Trust me.''

Ashi looked at him, and nodded. She bit her lip, let go of the branch with one hand and clutched his hand tighter. Immediately, she felt the branch falling. She screamed.

''Ashi .. Ashi.'' He clutched her hand tighter. ''Relax, tum theek ho.'' He looked up and shouted. ''Guys, pull me up.'' 

When they reached the top of the cliff, Kabir hugged Ashi. ''Ashi .. tum theek toh ho na? Gosh, you got me so scared!''

''Kabir, I'm fine.'' She smiled and shot a grateful look towards Yuvi, who nodded. 

''Yuvi !!'' Sanaya pulled him in a hug which almost threw him back down the cliff. 

''Sanaya !!'' He grinned back as he broke the hug. 

Sanaya wiped her tears and hit him lightly in the shoulder. ''I hate you! You moron! Agar tumhein kuch ho jaata toh.. ''

''Ashi ke liye main aisi 1000 cliffs se koodne ke liye taiyaar hoon.'' He muttered to himself, which was only heard by one other person - Tia.

''Yuvi, after what she did to you...''

''She could have died, Sanaya.'' He looked away.

Tia had a small smile playing on her lips. She looked at Ranveer, who shook his head.

''Vaise, Ashi, tum giri kaise?''

She opened her mouth to explain, but no voice came out. She didn't know what to say, she felt someone pushing her? Who? Nobody will believe her, they will think that she's lying.. like the last time.

''I..slipped.''

''You slipped?'' Yuvi lost all his patience. ''You could have died, for heaven's sake.''

''It's not my fault!'' Ashi snapped back. ''Duh uh, jaan booch ke slip nahi hui thi main!''

''But couldn't you have been just a LITTLE more careful? Can't you understand that there are people who care for you? And you're the one who keeps pushing them away .. '' He paused as he looked around. Everyone was looking at him. He turned the other way. ''I am going home!''

''I push people away!? I don't think I need someone like YOU to give me lectures like that, psycho!'' She snapped, but he was already walking away. She humphed as she picked up her stuff and started to walk the opposite way. 

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