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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 5:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by elizaa

Originally posted by _Akanksha_

Liz .. aaaah, itna lamba essayyyy ! Yes, you're right .. KUCH ZYAADA HI LAMBA HO GAYAAA.. :P But mujhe bhi ab reply karna padega .. no other way around! Unhappy

Missing RCC? Heck, yeah! I am! Ouch Koi bhi show perfect nahi hota .. I used to think that Remix would be, but it simply ain't .. you know that the main essence has gone in season 2, right? Har show season 1 mein bestt lagta hai .. season 2 mein it feels like a drag, and if you're able to STILL love wtc like you loved pots .. then, yeah, it IS amazing! Big smile

I knoww .. That's one of the reasons why The Pact is one of my favourite fanfictions ever..she has handled the whole 'meeting after a long gap' so beautifully .. she makes it so relatable, the pain, the hesitation, the confusion, the sorting out the differences etc etc .. seriously, liz, you should read that. Tumhein bhi inspiration milegi ..but it's long.. like, heck yeah, she had to start a new book too! :P

Dekho .. that's the main point .. in fanfictions like these, the girl or the guy usually ends up alone, with no one there with him/her..but in this story, Ashi has a lot of people .. she has Tia, Ranveer, Kabir, Sonia, Sumeet..but it simply isn't the same without him .. and the same goes for Yuvi ..he will have his own band, Sanaya, Sid .. but it won't be the same without her.. 'coz she is her inspiration, they go along, you know? Embarrassed 

I love Ashi-Tia, Ashi-Ranveer, Ashi-Sumeet! We'll do the best we can with TRAY in here...no screenspace issues.. this is OUR ADDA! Approve

Ahaaa, himym! I love you for telling me that show ...I am loving it! Ted, Robin, Barney, Natalie, Lily, Marshall! ROFLROFL Let's change the topic.. this is supposed to be a REMIX forum, not a HIMYM one .. yet. :P

Psycho and wacko on each other's throats..that'd be soon ..I can't keep them away from each other for too long, you know? That won't be AYish at all! :D



am clearly told nt to reply this by ashu
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lmao.. wasnt raj named ashu in the links u gave me?

Yep, his name was Ashu in KGGK. :P

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 8:19pm | IP Logged
weve been waiting for dab since 2 long days..
tomrrws wed, so ill give u a part tomrrw..
god am so excted..
and am missing rcc
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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 9:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _Akanksha_

Part 1

She closed her eyes as she let her head rest against the window pane. It was cold and hard against her cheeks, but she didn't feel any of it.

Her head was reeling with emotions, so much so that she didn't know what she was feeling, what she should be feeling.

A small part of her mind was pleasantly surprised, as if this was what it had been waiting for all these 5 years.

But another part of her mind felt hard, it felt empty. It felt as if someone had just delivered a cold blow to her stomach. She was used to feeling this way, to the emptiness. It felt like being trapped in a vacuum, where you are completely alone, you have no one to be with, no one to talk to, no one to confide in.

Except the fact that she didn't need everyone, she needed him. She needed to feel his presence, she needed to feel his warm arms surround her, she needed to feel his heartbeats when she kept her face on his chest, she needed to feel his lips around hers, she needed his words of support when she occasionally broke down, she needed someone to fight with, someone she could be her crazy self with, she needed her psycho.

She needed him so much, and she was going to meet him. She was going to see him, again, after 3 years. She allowed the thought to ease the emptiness a little bit, she slowly moved her head back to lean in the seat. 

She closed her eyes. The memories flashed in her mind as if she was skimming through a book. They felt so close, so real. Those were the times when she had really been happy, genuinely happy. Before meeting him, she was happy, yes. And after she met him, she felt like she belonged somewhere. And when they parted ways, she hadn't felt that sense of belonging, the feeling that someone cares, ever since.

Sure enough, she had Tia. Tia Ahuja. Her sister.

She smiled. How much she had hated Tia in the beginning ..no wait, she didn't hate her. Hate was a strong emotion. She had to admit, she was fond of Tia since the beginning. She had really begun to like her when they joined hands against Jasmine. Good ol' times.

And Ranveer. Thakur. He was a dear friend. Tia was so lucky to have him. She remembered how she and Tia used to tease Ranveer and him, bringing in random guys to act like close friends. She remembered the disturbed frown on their face, on his face.

She had Sonia and Sumeet, who loved her so much.

But, she needed him. She needed the only guy who could send shivers down her spine by his one touch, she needed the only guy she wasn't afraid to cry in front of, she needed the only guy who loved her.

Or, who, she thought, loved her.

She felt the cold blow again as the memories of that day flashed in front of her. Her hands clenched themselves into fists as the determined and the grim look in her eyes were replaced by visible pain, hurt, betrayal and suffering.

She wasn't ready for this, she won't ever, never be ready to face him again.

But she had to, for Tia and Ranveer and Sid and Vrinda's sake, for Remix's sake.

*Flashback*

'''Tia can't believe ki this is our last night in Maurya. Ye 3 saal kaise beet gaye, pata hi nahi chala .. ''

''I know, Tia.'' Ranveer sighed. ''Humne apni zindagi ka best time Maurya mein bitaaya hai .. aur ab-''

''Aur ab zindagi nahi rukne wali, Ranveer. We are all friends, guys. Hum milte rahenge, har pal saath rahenge. And what about Remix? Hum usse bhi toh nahi chod sakte..'' Yuvi insisted.

''Psycho, kisne kaha ki hum Remix ko jaane denge? Hum Remix ko kabhi nahi todenge..''

''But, Ashi, hum kaise manage karenge? Me and Tia are moving to New York, mujhe vahaan se ek bahut achi job ka offer aaya hai.'' Ranveer said. ''And Yuvi bhi toh London jaa raha hai, to study in this famous university for people who are interested in music.''

Ashi looked away, Yuvi squeezed her hand. ''Wacko, don't worry, it's just a 5 years course. And uske baad, we will be together.''

''I know, psycho.'' Ashi kissed him on the cheek.

''But, agar sab alag alag jagah pe honge, toh Remix- ?''

''Oh fo Thakur, Remix ko kuch nahi hoga..'' Ashi grinned. ''Yuvi is leaving for 5 years, tum dono bhi jaa rahe ho .. toh, let's do one thing. Theek 5 years baad, let's meet up. All of us. Chahe hum jahaan bhi ho, jaise bhi hon, we will be together for a good month in 5 years. Same month, October. And place.. ''

''Goa?'' Tia offered.

''Nah. I am not too fond of beaches.'' Ashi shrugged. ''How about Ladakh?''

''Ladakh, but it's too cold out there.'' Ranveer protested.

''Toh? Simple solution ' get a sweater, Thakur. Ladakh is cool, imagine, vo thandi thandi snow-covered mountains, trekking, skiing, it will be so much fun! Besides, I've always wanted to go to Ladakh.''

Yuvi noticed the glow on Ashi's face. ''Ladakh it is, then.'' He looked at Ranveer and Tia.

''Tia agrees, Tia likes snow. I'm in for Ladakh.''

''Me too.'' Sid chimed in. ''Ladakhhh!''

Ashi looked at Vrinda. ''Maate?''

''Yeah, count me in.'' Vrinda smiled. Ashi knew she was upset, Sid was going to London with Yuvi, and Vrinda was going to Chennai. She knew that making this pact will be a good idea for all of them.

''And me?'' Kabir pouted. ''I am your manager, guys.''

Ashi snorted. ''Ofcourse, Kabir, you're in, too. Ranveer-''

''Camel, haan bolo na.. fast!''

''Fine. Hum bhi aayenge, Ladakh, after 5 years.''

Ashi held her hand forward. ''Remix rocks.''

They kept their hand on hers one by one. ''Remix rocks.''

*Flashback ends*

Why did she ever make this pact? She couldn't see him, she didn't want to see him. And he will be there. He will be close enough to touch, and she'll have to face him despite the fact that he took away everything she had to give, and she couldn't help it, she couldn't.

''Ashi .. ''

Yeah, he'd been there for her, too. All this while, when Tia and Ranveer had got engaged and moved to New York, and Vrinda had gone to Chennai to live with her sister, he was the only one that was there for her.

''I'm fine, Kabir.''

''Ab mujhse toh jhoot mat bolo, Ashi.'' Kabir smiled warily. ''I know you better than anyone else, and I can tell when you're lying.''

''I know.'' Ashi looked away. ''I just' ''

''You're scared, I know.'' Ashi turned around sharply, and he threw his hands back, and smiled. ''Don't gimme that 'ooh im too strong to be broken' defence. I know you, Ashi. He broke your heart, and you've been dying inside all these years. And now, you have to face him, be there with him for a month, I can't even imagine what it's like .. '' His voice trailed off as he noticed the faraway look in her eyes. ''But, you know, I'm there for you, right? Anytime you wanna leave, we will be on a plane like this, back to Mumbai.''

''Thanks, Kabir. For everything.'' Ashi rested her head on his shoulder, and he ran a hand through her hair.

''You don't have to thank me, Ashi. I'm your best friend, remember? And friendship mein no sorry, no thank you.''

Ashi closed her eyes as the plane started to land. Here she was, finally, in Ladakh.

--

PS - The whole 'pact' idea is inspired by one of my friend's MJHT FF 'The Pact'. The story goes along the lines of Gunjan-Samrat in that story, and I give full credit to TheWandmaker. Smile

akhi awsome starting
specialy Ashi's feelingsDay Dreaming
Kabir is so sweet.....................i felt a sister brother feeling b/w them
u guys keep updating....................i'll join u after some time..............i need more time 4 finish the previous
so keep updatingBig smile

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 11:17am | IP Logged
Thank you, Trish! Hug  You keep on updating The Way I Loved You, and join us whenever you want..Just gimme that update everyday! :P

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 4:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _Akanksha_

Thank you, Trish! Hug  You keep on updating The Way I Loved You, and join us whenever you want..Just gimme that update everyday! :P
everyday is not possibleCry
but i'll tryBig smile

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by 00123trisha

Originally posted by _Akanksha_

Thank you, Trish! Hug  You keep on updating The Way I Loved You, and join us whenever you want..Just gimme that update everyday! :P
everyday is not possibleCry
but i'll tryBig smile
 
2 days ho gaye... ab toh rehem karke update de do. Cry

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 8:53am | IP Logged
OMG !!! Akanksha ... I am just speechless after reading this .. I know there's no rona-dhona in this part , but the way you expressed ashi's feelings brought tears to my eyes ... this is so beautiful .. you write so well that i always wish it never comes to an end .... each and every word in this part was special and it will always be close to my heart .... loved it a lottttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt ... this update has very close resemblance to my life .. but the difference was that the person never returned
( atleast not yet )

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BUBLAI

OMG !!! Akanksha ... I am just speechless after reading this .. I know there's no rona-dhona in this part , but the way you expressed ashi's feelings brought tears to my eyes ... this is so beautiful .. you write so well that i always wish it never comes to an end .... each and every word in this part was special and it will always be close to my heart .... loved it a lottttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt ... this update has very close resemblance to my life .. but the difference was that the person never returned

( atleast not yet )

Thank you, Appy! Hug Rona dhona and Ashi do not go along .. and if they do, she needs her psycho to comfort her. I won't stretch the parts on as senti though .. AY need to be their wacky crazy self..but yes, there would be a gap of comfort level in the beginning. Aww, I'm so sorry .. I hope this FF doesn't depress you much, you know? 

Liz.. UPDATE. TODAY. Angry

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