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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
PART 14

''Duh, Ashi, jaldi karo.'' Tia called out loudly.

''Aa rahi hoon, aa rahi hoon!'' Ashi groaned and closed the door behind her.

''Ashi!'' Tia shouted. ''Ye tumne kya pehna hai !!?''

Ashi looked down at herself, and raised an eyebrow. ''Duh uh. Jeans?''

''Jeans! Hum log itne saalon ke baad night out pe jaa rahe hain..and you're wearing JEANS? Tia ne tumse ye expect nahi kiya tha.. vaise, you know what?, Tia ne tumse YAHI expect kiya tha.''

''Timbet, calm down, okay? It's a CAMPFIRE. And campfire mein log skirts and shorts daalke nahi jaate..I suppose you'd know that?'' Ashi snorted and looked down at Tia's short dress.

''Tia ko hamesha stylish dikhna hota hai, you know? Tia Ahuja hona koi aisi vaisi baat nahi hai.''

Sanaya hurried up the stairs. ''Guys, chalein, we are getting late. And campfire jungle ke paas hai, it's a 30 minute ride.''

Ashi and Tia followed them down the stairs, where Ranveer, Yuvi, Sid, Vrinda and Sheetal were groaning impatiently.

''High time!'' Sid complained.

''Sorry, vo actually, timbet mere kapdon ke baare mein complain karne lag gayi thi.'' Ashi shrugged.

Tia rolled her eyes. ''Tia complain nahi kar rahi thi, Tia bas itna keh rahi thi …ki tum hamesha se punk thi, aur hamesha punk hi rahogi.''

Sheetal chimed in. ''Sid bhaiyya, aapko kuch nahi pata. Ladkiyaan takes ages to get dressed just coz of you guys, and tum log hi complain karne lag jaate ho. Hypocrites.''

''Sheetal!'' Vrinda yelled.

Sheetal gave her a what-did-I-do look.

''Sheetal, tum na.. chup raho.'' Sid crossed his arms against his shoulder. ''Mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni.''

''Mujhe bhi aapse koi baat nahi karni!'' Sheetal humphed.

Ashi's eyes met Yuvi, and Sanaya noticed it.

I'm sorry Yuvi, but I can't let her break your heart once again. It has taken you 3 years and you're still not over her, I can't let her increase the damage.

''Chalein, sweetheart?'' Sanaya linked her arms with Yuvi.

''Uh .. huh?''Yuvi snapped out of his eyelock session. ''What?''

''Maine kaha..chalein. Humein der ho rahi hai!'' Sanaya kissed him on the cheek.

''Sanaya .. what the-''

''Are you guys .. together?'' Sheetal asked.

''Aisa kuch bhi na-''

''Yes, Sheetal.'' Sanaya smiled. ''He is my boyfriend.''

''Oh.'' Tia gave a disappointed frown. ''Why didn't you guys tell us?''

''I thought you'd figure it out.'' Sanaya shrugged. ''Yuvi won't bring a random stranger to the reunion.''

''Ek minute, guys, hold on.'' Sid raised a hand and looked at Yuvi. ''Dude, tumne mujhe kuch bataya bhi nahi ? Ye kab hua, kaise hua? I mean, main toh tumhaare saath hi tha..and mujhe bhi pata nahi chala!?''

''Siddd.'' Sheetal motioned for him to play along. ''Kyon mazaak kar rahe ho? Tumhein sab pata tha!'' She looked at others. ''Ab chalein?''

''Yuvi .. '' Ranveer looked at him, and he ran a hand through his hair.

''Ranveer, dude, trust me, maine tumse koi jhoot nahi bola.''

''Vo sab chodo .. let's go.'' Ranveer looked away, and forced a smile. ''Let's not ruin our vacations. Ashi .. ashi ?''

Always knew that when we said goodbye, it wouldn't last forever.

Always knew that I'd run into you, and we'd get back together.

Now you're here, just like I imagined.

But never once did it cross my mind, that you could move on.

Ashi stood there, frozen. She knew it was coming, she knew Sanaya and Yuvi might be together, but she didn't think..she didn't know..she didn't expect him to be.. dating..someone else.

You've found someone, it breaks my heart.

'Coz you're so in love.

She looked down to their hands interlinked.

''Ashi?''

''Huh .. haan.'' She looked at Ranveer. ''Chalo!''

Once they reached the car, Yuvi opened the door, and Sanaya got in with him on the front seats. Yuvi bit his lip, and looked back at Ashi as she climbed in the back of the car. He stared at her throughout the car trip from the mirror, while she couldn't look away, either. Sanaya snapped her fingers in front of his face. ''Kya hua? Kahaan kho gaye?"

''Huh .. nahi, kuch nahi.'' He forced a smile, and concentrated on driving.

I wish that I made my touch made you smile just like that,

And I wish that I had you the way she has.

And I still remember the love I left behind.

I wish I was her, and you were mine. 

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 2:06pm | IP Logged
lmao ashuuuuuHug two two updatesEmbarrassed
and ur back on duty-- ashia par!!
lol, ashi, tia ne tumse yeh expect nahi kiya tha... erm no.. tia ne tumse yahi expect kiya thaWink
Clap so loved the strt.
and sheeta l is back on her duty too.. sid ko pareshaan karo missionROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
and sany finally told evey1 tht they r dating..
ab aayega asli maza *evil laughter*
and duffer sid, saare kiye karaaye par paani ferne bilkool tayyarROFLROFL
and the other half was so emotional..
i cld feel everything...
sanayas concern for yuvi, ranveers concern for ashi, ashislove and hatred for yuvi and yuvis pain..
so many mixed feelings developing here..
the way u described it, i could so picture the whole thing n front of my eyes...
and ive strted feeling nostalgic now.. i so cannot see her in pain, and the worst is tht i knw tht its all a misunderstanding, and ashi so doesnt.. i have it in my hands to clear it rite now, but i cannot... they will have to find themselves again in this mess.. and will have to find each other in this mess..
ill go read the other art now..
lovely update sweetie, as expected, it was just brilliant.. every word u play with, falls in place.. (i guess by mistake :P)


Edited by elizaa - 24 March 2011 at 2:46pm

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PART 15

''Erm ..'' Kabir reached the hotel lobby. ''Aap bata sakte hain ki Anvesha, Tia, Ranveer, Vrinda naam ke log kis kamre mein hain?''

''I'm sorry, sir.'' The receptionist looked up at him. ''I can't tell you information about our guests.''

''Dekhiye, I'm their friend, I was supposed to join them tomorrow, but I thought I'll give them a surprise today.'' He flashed a grin. ''Do one thing, can you call Anvesha for me? And tell her that Kabir is here.''

''Sir, vo abhi kamre mein nahi hain .. aaj Ladakh mein bahut badi campfire hain, almost hotel ke sabhi guests vahaan gaye hain.''

''Oh.. kahaan hai ye campfire?''

''Jungle ke paas.'' She scribbled the directions down and handed it to him. ''Have fun, sir.''

''Thank you.'' He smiled. ''Erm, kya aap ye bags mere kamre mein rakhwa sakti hain? Kabir Khanna.''  

''Oh, sir, aapka kamra toh booked hai. Room number 147. With Yuvraj Dev.''

''Yuvraj Dev.'' He repeated the words with visible coldness. After nodding his thanks to the receptionist, he reached his room, opened the door, and opened a cupboard to flung the clothes inside. But it was already full with clothes, Yuvi's clothes. Before he could close the cupboard, though, he noticed a picture on the top shelf. He picked it up, and turned it around slowly.

''Yuvi abhi bhi Ashi ki photo leke ghoom raha hai?" He snorted as he saw Ashi and Yuvi's pic together, from when they were dating. ''What a jerk.  Uska dil todne ke baad bhi he's roaming around with her pics.'' He threw the pic back, opened another cupboard, grabbed a pair of shirt, sweater and jeans and threw the rest of the clothes in. ''Time to go.'' He smiled to himself.

--

The campfire was crowded. There were kids, teenagers and adults huddled around the campfire. Sanaya sat next to Yuvi, and smiled.

''Sanaya, ye sab kya hai?''

''Yuvi, don't think I'm blind, okay? You were staring at her again. Ye kab tak chalega, Yuvi? She dumped you three years ago. You have to move on. I won't let you make a fool of yourself in front of everyone.''

''But, Sanaya .. ''

''No buts, Yuvi. I'm your best friend, right? Mere liye, please.''

''Okay.'' He groaned. ''It's just that I have some memories associated with fake dates.'' He muttered to himself, and couldn't help but smile.

Sanaya noticed his smile, and reached out a hand. ''Will you dance with me?''

I used to be right beside you,

Oh no, I'm not even kept inside your heart.

I put our love upon a shelf, but now it's gone.

Coz you belong to someone else.

Ashi looked at Yuvi and Sanaya sitting together, talking.

''Chalein, Ashi?''

''Erm, Ranveer, let's sit here. Opposite them. They seem to be talking. Mujhe nahi lagta humein unhein disturb karna chahiye.'' The truth was, she couldn't stand to look at them together. It made her heart ache.

Yuvi looked at Sanaya, at her hand reached out, and her words rang in his ear.

She is the one who dumped me.

I have to move on.

He took the hand, and smiled as she led him to the corner where a lot of couples were dancing.

The way that you hold her, I wish it was me.

There's no place on earth that I'd rather be.

Cuz I still remember the love I left behind.

I wish I was her, and you were mine.

Ashi couldn't look at them anymore. She got up, and before anyone could ask where she was going, she headed for the opposite way ..somewhere far from this place.

''You want a drink?'' Sanaya asked.

''Erm, sure.''

''Wait a minute.''

She was coming back with two soft drinks in her hand, when she bumped into someone.

''Oh .. shit.'' She felt herself losing her balance, and two strong masculine arms grabbing her waist.

''I'm so sorry! Are you alright?''

''Alright? Main tumhein alright dikhti hoon !?'' She looked up. ''Shit, my dress! You- Mr.- are going to pay for this.''

''Kabir. Kabir Khanna. And, it was an accident. I think tumhein dekhke chalna chahiye.''

''Oh, shut up. Now, what, do you expect me to roam around like this for the whole evening?'' She pointed at her dress. Suddenly, a smile twitched her lips as she took the remaining glass and threw it on his shirt. ''Aha, fair square.''

His mouth was left hanging open as he realized what she did. He blinked twice, and when he looked up, she was gone.

''Bitch.'' He muttered. ''Okay, ab ye Ashi kahaan hain?''



Edited by _Akanksha_ - 24 March 2011 at 2:06pm

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lizzz i won........m frst
k now cumin to update
anky u r perfect in makin story goin wid song
it makes d reading more interesting
and moreover as usual ur emotion expression were superb
and  what a entry of kabeer
and now i want both sany and kabeer to gall in love soon
dey r amazing
i loved dem here
and aftr kabeer is here now its uv turn to get jealous
and uv and kabeer r goin to fight as dey r in one room???

woahhhhhhhhhh
i got two parts to read
yayyyyyyyyyyyyy


Edited by sanjna4 - 24 March 2011 at 2:44pm

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 2:08pm | IP Logged
aah, finally, my kabeeru is hereEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
awwwww..... and he sees ashis pic in yuvis cupboard?Embarrassed and he is sorta upset with uv?Cry this hurst so much, but i so love reading it...
we need to get a few more sad angles, fun ke liye we have amazing actors/characters hereLOL
@ the campfire, my heart just came out wen i read tht yuvi doesnt want the fake dating thing to happen coz he remembers some old things connected to fake dates...
awwwwwwwEmbarrassed
and again, am nt a drama queen.. uve writeen it so well.. mein kya karoon... u knw hw hyper i get wen i get to read your posts, and hw much do i have to keep bothering u, ki, likho likhoLOL
nvm, yuvi is just too adorable...
ashu- u fix in songs at the rite places, makes it feel real.. i guess i shld also try out this once.. but the thing is tht i knw ill mess up
:P
and ahahhah, lmao..... sany kabeer meet was perfect!!
and sanu is going nextWink


Edited by elizaa - 24 March 2011 at 2:56pm

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 2:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by elizaa

lmao ashuuuuuHug two two updatesEmbarrassed
and ur back on duty-- ashia par!!
lol, ashi, tia ne tumse yeh expect nahi kiya tha... erm no.. tia ne tumse yahi expect kiya thaWink
Clap so loved the strt.
and sheeta l is back on her duty too.. sid ko pareshaan karo missionROFL
and sany finally told evey1 tht they r dating..
ab aayega asli maza *evil laughter*
and duffer sid, saare kiye karaaye par paani ferne bilkool tayyarROFLROFL
and the other half was so emotional..
i cld feel everything...
sanayas concern for yuvi, ranveers concern for ashi, ashislove and hatred for yuvi and yuvis pain..
so many mixed feelings developing here..
the way u described it, i could so picture the whole thing n front of my eyes...
and ive strted feeling nostalgic now.. i so cannot see her in pain, and the worst is tht i knw tht its all a misunderstanding, and ashi so doesnt.. i have it in my hands to clear it rite now, but i cannot... they will have to find themselves again in this mess.. and will have to find each other in this mess..
ill go read the other art now..
lovely update sweetie, as expected, it was just brilliant.. every word u play with, falls in place.. (i guess by mistake :P)

LOL .. I'm sorry, I LOVE AshiA ! I can't help it. :P Aha, I know you said that I should let Sanu handle Sid-Sheetal-Vrinda track, but IM SORRY, I LOVE 'EM. :D

Lmao .. I choked on my water when I wrote that! I mean, it's so like Sid himself to ruin everything. LOL Oye, you ain't breaking the misunderstanding just yet. Angry :P Hehe, thank you. Hug My part comes out good when I'm REALLY in the mood..and I was in the mood tonight. :P YOU MAKE ME FEEL LIKE IM LIVING A TEENAGE DREAM .. Ooh, wait, I got carried away. LOL I love that song. :P




 

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Originally posted by sanjna4

lizzz i won........m frst
k now cumin to update
anky u r perfect in makin story goin wid song
it makes d reading more interesting
and moreover as usual ur emotion expression were superb
and  what a entry of kabeer
and now i want both sany and kabeer to gall in love soon
dey r amazing
i loved dem here
and aftr kabeer is here now its uv turn to get jealous
and uv and kabeer r goin to fight as dey r in one room???

woahhhhhhhhhh
i got two parts to read
yayyyyyyyyyyyyy

Congratulations. :P LOL

Thank you! Hug Y'know different things inspire you to write..for me, it's songs! I have to find a song which perfectly defines what the character is going through, or it'll turn out crap, trust me. =)

Nah, they won't have a fight..but, yeah, they ain't too fond of each other. And Sanu and Kabir will fall for each other.. in due time. Embarrassed

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by _Akanksha_

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LOL .. I'm sorry, I LOVE AshiA ! I can't help it. :P Aha, I know you said that I should let Sanu handle Sid-Sheetal-Vrinda track, but IM SORRY, I LOVE 'EM. :D

Lmao .. I choked on my water when I wrote that! I mean, it's so like Sid himself to ruin everything. LOL Oye, you ain't breaking the misunderstanding just yet. Angry :P Hehe, thank you. Hug My part comes out good when I'm REALLY in the mood..and I was in the mood tonight. :P YOU MAKE ME FEEL LIKE IM LIVING A TEENAGE DREAM .. Ooh, wait, I got carried away. LOL I love that song. :P

ikr 
ashia r awesome together..
u knw later we will have a few parts of girls v/s boys too... plz plz plz.
i wnt clear the misunderstang.. you will.. i dnt like the rona dhona and all.. wen all this will happen ill be making ranveer tia or kabeer sany romanceEmbarrassed
and i forgot to tell u bout a track we had discussed bout... illl tell u and sanu on ym..
:D

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