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~When They Collide~ (AY, TR, SV FF)-Prt76Updt. (Page 125)

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 9:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BUBLAI

Originally posted by purpleoliza

Originally posted by BUBLAI

wow !!! lizzie ... This is just awesomeee ...
every bit of it was written fabulously ...ClapClap
loved both Ashi-yuvi and kabeer-sany ... both can give a tough competition to each other WinkWink
ashi-yuvi was just rockingWink and that poor girl with non-skin friendly colours will be worth watching ..LOL  just loved them ... it was simply hawttt Wink
kabeer-sany was just outstanding ...Embarrassed
totally enjoyed this update ... and thanks a ton for a long part ... muaahhh Tongue
Oh ho
Thanks for all those lovely words dear!
And end tak i didnt knw wht ashi wld have done to the girl who wld be all over her man
Hhehe
Fir ye idea aaya
She and her pranks
U remmeber misha coloring t's hair greenn??
Lol
Trishus going next or u?
Jo bhi ho, jaldi kroo

Yaa ofcourse i remember that LOLLOL
trishu is going next Tongue
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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 12:16am | IP Logged
trishu! u havent updated yet?Ouch
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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 6:59am | IP Logged
 no update yet Unhappy
update chahea soon plzzz
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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 9:49am | IP Logged
sorry guys for late updtingTongue
 
Part-98
 
Ashi's mobile rang and yuvi made an angry face hearing her ph. is ringing "damn it, yeh kambaqt phone beech mein kyu aa raha hai?"

Ashi picked it n it was sonia calling "oh just wait it's mumma"

"sona, where are you?"

"aaah! m with………

"sweetie don't shy say na yuvi k sath ho" sonia toned 

"oh please mumma why will I shy? After all am not timbo okay" ashi yelled

"Ohkay okay, don't get hipper"

"ohho mumma jaldi bolo kya kaam hai" she yelled again

Yuvi was smiling looks like he was enjoying ashi's anger

"actually tia ranveer aur main mall mein aaye hai wedding dresses k liye so I thought tum aur yuvi bhi aa jate toh……..

"what??? shopping n me are you serious?" ashi astonished

"yah m serious after all tum dulhan ki sister ho so you should also look fabulous in the wedding"

"hello shadi tia ki hai meri nahi concentrate on HER wedding dress not mine and……..

Yuvi interrupted "hello sonia unty we are coming and don't worry about ashi main usse bhi le aaunga"

Ashi put her hands on her own waist with full on attitude

"okay then see you guys at the mall" sonia cut the call

"Duh uh who the hell are you…….agar main nahi jana chahti toh tum mujhe kaise le jaaoge?"

"oh come on ashi don't be so bore"

"BORE???? Oh that means you are bore with me"

"No sweetheart I mean agar hum sabke sath time spend nahi karenge toh sab humein hi bore samjhenge na?"

"well tumhe koi bhi bore samajh sakta hai as you are getting old"

"WHAT?? main aur old"

Ashi laughed loudly "yah time nikal k kabhi mirror me khud ko dekhna pata chal jayega"

"Ashi stop joking we are getting late"

"YAH YAH YAH we are getting late challo timbo tia k liye pink pastry select karne"

 

At the mall, the seller was showing so many wedding dresses but none of them were suiting Tia. Then Ranveer offered her a green one "Tia, try this nature green it's just like you, PURE"

Tia pulled herself from him making faces "eeewww……GREEN Tia hates green"

"but Tia it's nature colour" he replied

"Tia knows that but NATURE means trees and don't you know trees me kitne insects hote hai agar Tia k skin ko kuch ho gaya toh?"

"lekin Tia……….

Tia cutting "and top of that trees me birds k nests bhi hai so birds ne Tia pe down kar diya toh???"

"Tia listen, hum sirf colour ki baat kar rahe hai trees ki nahi agar apko pasand nahi hai so you can choose other one, idhar udhar ki baatein mat banaiye" he was looking disappointed and Tia saw that. Ranveer went to another direction. Tia was also looking upset for hurting him. Then Sonia came to her "what happened darling?" putting her hand on Tia's hair

"mumma, Ranveer ko yeh green wala pasand hai but Tia ko nahi aura b vo upset ho gaya hai only bcoz of Tia" she cried out

"so you should wear this dress at least for once" Sonia suggested

"Tia guesses you are right Tia abbhi yeh dress try karegi, I'll be back" she took that one and turned back to the changing room.

 

Other hand, Sumit was there too along with them but he was out of the mall bocz of some office work on his mobile. He was trying to call one of his office employ but it was showing low balance. He couldn't understand but after a while he thought about Sonia might she is the reason. He angrily entered in the shop where Sonia was choosing her own cloths. He stood besides her "SONIA tum………

Before he could say any word "yeh kaisa lag raha hai?" she turned at him with a off white top. "Sonia mere mobile me balance low kaise hua?" asked angrily

"what?? Your mob you should know how come I know?"

"I don't know how but tum hi ho sakti ho"

Sonia smiled "actually kal mere ph se call nahi jaa raha tha so maine tumhara ph use kar liya but balance khatam ho gaya"

"WHAT??? are you mad tum bata toh sakti thi"

"tum hi itne busy rahete ho maine tumhe disturb nahi kiya"

"DISTURB???"

"oh Makhija don't be so rude………..

"pappa, Tia kaisi lag rahi hai?" suddenly Tia entered

"sweetie, you are looking fabulous" Sonia commented

"excuse me, usne mujhse pucha" Sumit yelled

"oh pahlease aap dono start mat ho jana….pahele se hi vo camel Tia se upset hai"

"Why??" Sumit asked

"tum chodo Bawejha jake apna ph recharge karvaao, btw, Tia maine Ashi aur Yuvi ko bula liya hai"

Tia shocked "WHAT?? Yuvi thik hai but Ashi why?"

"dress select karne me help karne k liye"

"pahlease, Ashi toh fati jeans and top suggest karegi and Tia ko toh fati jeans suit bhi nahi karti"

 

In a taxi, Ashi requested him to go in a taxi but Yuvi was uncomfortable especially bcoz of the driver. He was irritating Yuvi.

"ASHI, tumhe taxi ki kya zarurat pad gayi? Hum car se bhi toh jaa sakte the nah"

"Duh uh, psycho car me toh hum roz travel kartein hai so I thought humein taxi se jana chahiye"

"Yup! Main toh ek idiot hoon jo tumhe mana nahi kar sakta" patted his own back head

"Right"

"What?"

"vo idiot wali baat, that's right"

"You…..

Driver interrupting "WANNA BE MY CHAMMAK CHALLO OO OOH"

"excuse me driver, can you please shut up?" he was so irritated

"KYAAA???" driver asked

"I said shut up" he yelled, ashi was giggling

"saheb, mujhko English nahi aati hindi me bolo, KYAAA???"

"maine kaha choop raho"

"kaiku sahab? Yeh gana toh mast hai na aapko bhi maidam k liye gana chahiye" giving a stupid smile

"WHAT?" Yuvi yelled

"Yuvi darling, uss bechare ko kyu dant rahe ho? thik hi toh kaha uske"

After 2 seconds silence "Yuvi gaao na" Ashi whispered

Yuvi jumped "WHAAT???"

"han sahab gaao na ab toh maidam bhi bol rahi hai"

"tum toh sirf drive pe concentrate karo"

"CONCE kyaaa???"

"Oh god" Yuvi looking up 

After few mins driver stopped the car "kya hua?" Ashi asked

"vo maidam aap dono ko thoda chipak k baithna padega?"

"chipak k means what? tum kya humein gum se chipkane wale ho?" Ashi replied

"vo doosre passengers ayenge"

"so cool" Yuvi quickly replied back "come sweet heart chipak k baithte hai" something was going on in his mind ashi could sense that, he was smiling strangely. 3 people entered in the back seat and Ashi Yuvi was sitting in place of one person, so close. Other's were pushing them. They could feel eachother's heartbeat and enjoying eachother's touch, looking in eachother's eyes, lost.

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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 10:49am | IP Logged
wow  trish
u finally updated!
it was such a cute update.. bas kuch cheez samaj ni aayiWink- itna bada business tycoon and prepaid fone? billing ni afford kar payaLOL 
and cab mein ashi yuvi ke, doosre log kaise baithne lage? bus thi kya? (i still loved the ideaEmbarrassed)
tia ka reasoning for not using a green color was hilariousWink
in alll i liked it!

next appy jaa rhi hai na!Big smile

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Posted: 08 January 2012 at 1:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by purpleoliza

wow  trish
u finally updated!
it was such a cute update.. bas kuch cheez samaj ni aayiWink- itna bada business tycoon and prepaid fone? billing ni afford kar payaLOL 
and cab mein ashi yuvi ke, doosre log kaise baithne lage? bus thi kya? (i still loved the ideaEmbarrassed)
tia ka reasoning for not using a green color was hilariousWink
in alll i liked it!

next appy jaa rhi hai na!Big smile
fone wala part just scene creat karne k liye likh diya thaLOL 
btw, thanxSmile
appy will go next

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Posted: 09 January 2012 at 12:56am | IP Logged
trishu ... the part was really awesome ... 
just loveeeddd it dear ... Big smile
AY was fab in this part ... the taxi sequence was hilarious ... but yeh taxi shuttle thi kya jo dusre passengers bhi baith rahe hain ????
Tia's green dress and insects LOLLOL  wah kya logic lagai hai madam ne LOLLOL dats why Tia ahuja hona koi aisi waisi baat nahi hain LOLLOL
the phone convo was cute and sumeet-soniya was hilarious LOL

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Posted: 09 January 2012 at 12:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by _trish_

Originally posted by purpleoliza

wow  trish
u finally updated!
it was such a cute update.. bas kuch cheez samaj ni aayiWink- itna bada business tycoon and prepaid fone? billing ni afford kar payaLOL 
and cab mein ashi yuvi ke, doosre log kaise baithne lage? bus thi kya? (i still loved the ideaEmbarrassed)
tia ka reasoning for not using a green color was hilariousWink
in alll i liked it!

next appy jaa rhi hai na!Big smile
fone wala part just scene creat karne k liye likh diya thaLOL 
btw, thanxSmile
appy will go next
main toh next jaane wali hoon but i am not free before 18th ... so if any of you want to go next you can , I can go after that ... or else after 18th Ouch

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