~When They Collide~ (AY, TR, SV FF)-Prt76Updt. (Page 110)

_SnowFlake_ IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 12:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BUBLAI

hey lizzie ... Will read your part in sometime soon ... busy with studies ... exams are literally banging at the door ... starting from 18th ...
@trishu ... you and your cat language LOLLOLkahan kahan se sikh ke aayi ho ?LOLLOL
Misha will definitely be alive ... Abhay baba apne medications zaroor use karenge...Wink
aab vampire banegi ke nahi pata nahi Confused
i guess pichhle janam me main cat thiROFL n that language is C3 language suggested by another catWink
thank to abhay babaLOL misha is alive she'll be fine soonBig smile

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 9:58am | IP Logged
hey lizzie ... !!!! Finally managed to read your update ...Tongue  My exams are finally over ... phew !!! totally exhausted ...

the update was really good ...
So an AY dance in the next part , right ?Wink
Sany and kabeer were awesome .Tongue..
What code words yaar ?LOL Fishes ??LOLLOL everything seems fishy LOL
Par itna chotku sa part ... Ouch
ab jaldi update karooo TongueTongue will be waiting for it Tongue

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Meeko IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 1:33pm | IP Logged

Part 87

"god! You guys! Tia and the girls should disown you all! You uncouth Neanderthals!" tia growled and hit ranveer and sid on the arms.

Ranveer and sid shared a look. "what does uncouth mean?" asked sid.

"ill tell you if you tell me what a Neanderthal is.." answered ranveer.

Sheetal and vrinda burst out laughing as tia hit them again.

"that's it! We are leaving.. you learn to be civil or live alone for the rest of your life.."

"but dee… you love them too much to do that.." giggled sheetal

"and life would be boring without us." Ranveer said with a snigger as she had his arms around her.

"oh lord! Look at those two!"  sheetal pointed towards the dance floor.

The gang turned and at once smiled in awe.

"those two…" smiled vrinda

"are idiots!" tia shook her head.

"should we just kick their ass?" smirked sid

"language kabeer!" interrupted vrinda. "uh.. sid.. sid?? Then wheres kabeer?"

"doesn't seem to be around.." ranveer looked around.

"and where is sany?" asked sheetal.

"can we just not do this now? Tia doesn't care where kabeer is and she certainly doesn't give a damn is sany has turned invisible too. Tia guesses we all have to go on the dance floor to make it feel normal for ashi and yuvi.. its just not okay for us to stare at them from here.."

The others agreed and they stepped towards the floor.


His hands were low on her hips and hers around his neck. He held her securely as they swayed to the slow music. She looked up at his dark brown eyes, "here we are" she said. "seriously?!?!"

He smiled and held her even closer "your right… you are actually dancing.. with.. with me.."

"and that's why you deserve to be called a psycho.. you know how much I hate such slow songs. You know how much they bore me to death. And the stares… they kill me! "

"oh come on wacko! You know its not that bad. We have done this so many times.. and did get through too.. come closer and close your eyes. You wont see the stares then.."

Ashi looked at him with widened eyes without blinking.

"i.. I mean.. that's okay.. we are friends right.. we can do that.. come on wacko.. trust me.. close your eyes."

Ashi didn't know what wrong was at that moment. Sh rested her head against his chest and closed her eyes. She listened to the strong and steady rhythm of his heart and let him lead her through the dance. His warm and sweet smell was all around her and his hands were in control but gentle. He kissed her on the top of her head and moved her with grace. She couldn't believe it, but she still chose to leave her eyes closed.

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Meeko IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 1:40pm | IP Logged

heyy guys

now i dnt know.. i think we should patch them both up.. there is a lot of heat between the two right now, and it even seems to be a good time.. let me know wtt u two think?
like after how many parts?
am liking writing kaber sanys angle right now.. theres much more to explore from that end.. ashiyuvi have been through a lot, and now if they are not together, id just murder the two. lol
not you two... those two.. hehe! daro matt
so, leme knw wht u gys think..
and am not going next.. not until i get like 2-2 parts from u each!
love ya!

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_SnowFlake_ IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 11:57pm | IP Logged
liz, it was a superb updt...luv u:)
the gang is too funny n AY was jst awsum bt the eye closing was sumthing like ashi's farewell dance:P

Edited by _trish_ - 24 October 2011 at 12:00am

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Posted: 24 October 2011 at 8:47am | IP Logged
lizzie ... yaar ... phirse chutku sa update Ouch but I loved it Tongue  Tia and gang are impossible ..LOLWink
AY was too good Tongue they are sooo adorable Tongue
me too think that ab bechare logon ka patch up karwa dena chahiye ... ...Tongue

@ trishu : u go next okay ... after that I am going ...Smile

_SnowFlake_ IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 October 2011 at 10:12am | IP Logged
okay i'll go next if possible then today if no then tmrw pakka
me too think that now we should patch them up so lets see wat can i doWink
_SnowFlake_ IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 October 2011 at 10:07am | IP Logged
Ashi's eyes were still close and Yuvi was lost in the moment to having her too close to him. Others also started dancing on the floor. Tia was staring at them dancing with Ranbeer n smiling "Oh Tia's god Tia can't believe that they both can look so cute together" she wiped fake tears from her own eyes as a proud sister

"Tia, agar aap aise unko stare karengi toh vo zyada der tak cute nahi lagenge"


"don't forget, they are ASHI YUVI not normal human beings" Ranbeer replied

"pahlease camel, do mean ZOO ANIMELS?"

"NO Jurassic park ke dinosaurs, if from somewhere Ashi will come to know what we are trying to do she will kill you first"

"she can't"


"tum jo ho"

"so what? humein apne body parts Ashi se nahi tudwane"

"oh shut your mouth up n continue dancing, Tia can't handle more stress, Tia will get old very sooner"

"OLD IS GOLD don't you know?"

"aarrrggg" Tia was giving red signal to him


Other hand, Sid and Vrinda was dancing together. Vrinda was shying front of him and Sid too

"I can't understand" Vrinda broke the silence

"hah, what?"

"I mean, I can't understand why are you shying?"

"you also shying" Sid replied back

"yah, m a girl so it's obvious but why you?"

Sid wanted to turn the topic bcoz he thought he isn't ready for the moment "actually I just wanted to know k sharmana kaisa lagta hai, that's all"


"stop questions n lets dance" Sid replied slowly n narrowed his eyes


Ashi's eyes were still closed. The times she had spend with Yuvi, the memories were flashing back in her closing eyes. When they met first time, when first they felt for eachother, when they got close first time, when they fall in love''everything was coming back in her mind at the moment. One part of her heart was saying to push him away but another part was saying to let it be, leave herself in his arms, he is the right person for her life. Yuvi was quite happy and worried too. He knew that Ashi is still upset with him, didn't forget him. But Ashi was busy with her thoughts closing eyes. They both were moving slowly.

"Ashi" he called over "are listening at me?"

Ashi opened her eyes n then faced Yuvi looking in his eyes "Yuvi, why are you doing this?" said softly

Yuvi blinked "I guess you know the reason"

Ashi narrowed her eyes then again in his eyes "YUVI" painfully said and quickly moved her hands from his shoulders and ran away. She was too much emotional at the time and confuse also.

"ASHI!!!" Yuvi also went following her

Everyone saw that, Tia was going to see what happened but Ranveer stopped her "Tia what are you doing?"

"Tia wants to know what happened with Ashi, why she ran away, ache se dance kar rahi thi so hua kya?"

"let her go, Yuvi bana gaye hai unke pichhe so don't worry. They need some time alone"

"That why Tia is worried, Yuvi gaya hai n agar usne Ashi ko aisa kuch kahe diya jisse Ashi or bhi hurt ho"

"whatever we are doing is for Yuvi, so that he can get Ashi back in his life so let HIM to talk to her, he can manage"

"Okay, Tia think camel is right"


Other side, Sany was standing alone in a corner. Kabir thought lets have some fun with the girl. He took two glasses of orange juice, but added alcohol in one of them n starts walking towards Sany.

"take it" gently offered her the glass

"No thanx" she snapped "I don't need anything from you, god knows poison hua toh"

"do you really think I can do such thing?"

"maybe"  started thinking, then she accepted "fine" then Kabir passed the glass to her hand. She took a sip, felt something odd "is it really orange juice?"

"yah, why the question? Is anything wrong with it?"

"nothing special but it test odd"

"oh! It's a new brand n new test, don't you like it? I do"

"no it's different and quite nice"

"so finish it"

She finished it in one go n gave the glass back to Kabir "I WANT MORE, IT'S VERY TESTY" Kabir blinked

Edited by _trish_ - 31 October 2011 at 11:01pm

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