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Fanfiction: Nivi Leaves (Page 6)

Sofna IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 23 October 2009
Posts: 24632

Posted: 16 March 2011 at 5:43am | IP Logged
Priya u wrote in the posts above this part that  yr a bit of a perfectionist ..i hav to tell u yr writing speaks for itself.....ClapClapClap...from the first OS u posted it was very obvious.
I love the way yr writing flows..n u capture the essence of each scene beautifully.  
The part u hv posted  i LOVED it.... I found NivRen interaction as per their character....n even if they r diff from the serial slightly even then it's fine as this is yr story n yr doing MORe justice than those CV'zAngry....
The Cv'z hav mde a mess of the story since the stalker revelation..thats y they r throwing random,  pathetic tracks at us that hav no semblance of order or senseOuchOuch...
But i wud really like to see a separation between the both, as everytime circumstances hav brought them togthr....first SidYa marriage, then reforming VirenOuchOuch.....I wud love to read or see a track where they come toghthr out of their own will to be with each other......they need teh time to realise the importance n value they hold in the other's life!!! Hope that mde sense..or was of any help.LOLLOL

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Shayafan Goldie

Joined: 29 November 2010
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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 6:55pm | IP Logged
Wow this was again a gr8 writing by you Priya. Absolutely loved it... The scene was so good. Was imagining the scene throughout while reading it... Yesterday u were not clear abt Nivi's intentions for leaving the house, i guess after watching today's episodes some of them are clearWink

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Scintillating IF-Dazzler

Joined: 02 December 2010
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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 8:59pm | IP Logged
Priya!!! Hug Sweets, I loved the one-shot. Really did!! Smile I think we always are so critical of our own work, especially that is very true about writers/authors and that explains why you were not sure about this short write-up. But I honestly think it was really well written and flowed through very well. True, you were deviating from Nivedita's character a tad bit but I kind of liked it. Something different than the show and your character change was still not that far fetched, so honestly I liked it. I would really encourage you to continue writing these one-shots. Smile

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doot IF-Dazzler

Joined: 24 April 2010
Posts: 4073

Posted: 16 March 2011 at 9:02pm | IP Logged
Its so touching..........its filled with so much love n u expressed it i think more beauifully......then Nivi herself cud.

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