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A Walk On The Beach-AR#2[Link to New Thread: P156] (Page 94)

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 4:02pm | IP Logged
omggggggggggg did she confessed her love to him or  m i dreaming .............................Shocked

wow wow last installment was like amazing one of most imp part of this ff ClapBig smileStar
the way she pent down her frustration in starting in those lines like 

"You can't be with her!"

"You can't be with ANYONE ELSE!"

"You can't be with someone else Armaan!

"Because I love you!" I said in a single breath. "I love you!"

n than finally ended it with three magical words which i was dieing to read kab se

i must say what a unique confession Star

loved itBig smile

awesome piece of workClap
plzzzzzzzz continue very very very soon bcoz i m very much curious as well as excited 4 the next part Smile
will be waiting
Day Dreaming





Edited by anushkajain - 27 March 2011 at 4:07pm

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 4:08pm | IP Logged
OH         EMM       GEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Lovely lovely update... n even though I know that at the end of the story it will always be Riddhima and Armaan together forever...YET!! I cant believe you stopped where you did in this chapter of yours!!! You stopped at Riddhima's confession?? Why??? What abt Armaan?.... isnt he part of the story??... yes his POV can come later.... but a simple positive inclination wouldnt hurt!?!? n then you have said at the end of the update that the next one is not gonna be anytime next week.... that makes a hell lot of wait!!!! I know you'll make the next one for an interesting read but well I am a sucker for good sweet untangled reads... cliffhangers make me comment :( :D
I am sad-happy coz I know the big confession is coming soon... but I also know that this part will be followed by the next one only after another week or so... I am desparate to read the next one... you are an amazing writer to put in mildly :)
I love the way your thought flows... wishing you many more stories in future!! :)
 
 

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 4:19pm | IP Logged
omg...wow!!!! finally she'd said it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Dancing

awesome part....can't wait 4 Armaan's reaction to dat now!!!! hope he tells her dat he also loves her!!!!

oh  bt atleast one confess,it's superb nw waiting 4 Armaan's POV!
cont very very very very soon.........................Smile

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 4:21pm | IP Logged
Hey My comments for 2nd installment is EDITED on pg 86
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1635191&PID=40755765&#40755765

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 4:23pm | IP Logged
Guys I have a lot of replying to d, but mainly all of you'll asked me why I didn't include Armaan's confessions in this chapter itself, well it was because Armaan doesn't have A confession...he has several other confessions and explanations to make and his PoV is gonna be one LONG chapter in itself! And I'm not gonna out the next part up in instalments because the entire chapter is gonna be in the form of a single dialogue, so it has to have flow...the next part only has Armaan's PoV with certain flashbacks as well, si it would've been impossible for me to include it in this chapter itself...+ I ned to think it out first, every line has to be planned , so yes, it is gonna take some time! But I'll try my level best anyway! I'll reply to all ur comments tomorrow in detail because I can't type so much through my phone! Lol! Thanks a tonne! Tomorrow! x x

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 4:38pm | IP Logged
Jus out of curiosity wen will there be an update
I'm dying to read

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 5:00pm | IP Logged
Ooooooomg woooohoooo party wow this part was the best it's the hihglight of this ff loved it.....I don't no y but Iwas sooo nrevous while reading this and when she said it I was at ease love you ur awesome I would give you like the biggest hug right Now if u were in front of me :) ur the best and now I can't w8 for the next part makeit good like this one :) awesooome loved it :)

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 5:25pm | IP Logged
OH MY GOOOOOOOD!!!! I'm screaming right now well not actially cuz I would wake d whole neighbour hood then. But aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!! (screaming in my pillow). THAT was mindblowing, mind numbing uh Any more adjectives that I can use...!!!!!! WOW! it was sad when armaan said tht he has no value in her life. The lull b4 d storm *eeeeee*

One BIG part is done Now THE MOST AWAITED PART EVER to come!!!!!!!

Awesome. Again!

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