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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 3:22pm | IP Logged
Chapter 22 COMPLETED on Page 84!

REQUEST:-
I need BIG COMMENTS, like BIG BIG BIG COMMENTS, on this one at least, because I've put in my level best in it, and it's by far the most important scene of this story! Please leave BIG COMMENTS! With analysis, criticisms and praises! Whatever! Just tell me if this part lived up to your expectations/ didn't live up to your expectations! Thanks! Embarrassed


Edited by Dmg8594 - 27 March 2011 at 3:24pm

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 3:26pm | IP Logged

just read the complete part!

as expected ridz has finally blurt it out, properly!
luved the part! i am so happy for ridz, she has finally let all her emotions out to the person she should let it out to! now she doesn't need to hide anymore!
 
overall, i luved the whole part!
finally, the much awaited part is next!
continue soon if you manage to get time!
 


Edited by dashingtusha13 - 27 March 2011 at 3:27pm

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 3:30pm | IP Logged
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Atlast she confessed!!!!!!! YIpeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!
plzzzzzzzzzzz update da next part soon!!!

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 3:30pm | IP Logged
comment edited on page 92 =D

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 3:35pm | IP Logged
Hey....
 
Finally, I caught up with your complete FF...
You must be wondering why wasn't I commenting, but I hadn't read the entire thing, I wanted to read everything before i comment... I had read parts here and there but not the whole thing from the start....
Anyway, the last whole of RIdhima's depression was killing me... I just could'nt take it but now, it finally seems like its over...
And somehow, I just know that Armaan's engagement with Andrea is just an act... He's probably doing this to make Ridhima jealous and confess...
However, Im damn curious to know what happened when Ridhima was drunk... I think she confessed but doesn't remember....
And I love the whole cupcakes thing with PMS... That was really really cute...
And girl, you cant end the way you ended... You should have put in the entire confession together... That would have been better, I guess...
I hope you put in one more installment about the complete confession and end it...
This just looks incomplete...
It'll just make the part better...
But thats only my opinion....
 
Love,
-A

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 3:40pm | IP Logged
Hey I'm not good with writing words but all I can say is that it was amazing
U jus made my day
Please update fast

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 3:49pm | IP Logged
wow.....its just simply wow.....i cnt wait for the next part.......amazing writin......simply love ur fanfic

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