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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 7:55pm | IP Logged
cant wait for more!

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 9:12pm | IP Logged
sorry 4 commenting late

well i feel bad 4 riddhima 4 the condition she is going through right now........well cant blame anyone hereUnhappy

but i doubt abt armaan.......i m too confused regarding his action  some times i feel he loves her but sometime i feel he doesn't .......well u manipulating it pretty well good jobStar

or maybe that can be the point that they r sailing in a same boat by which i mean that he has also not realize his feeling towards riddhima yet but they r buried deep inside his heart...........just need a reality check thats all Confused...mein kuch jaida hi dedective mode mein chali gayi hoon nahi LOL........

well u have done superb job in describing riddhima's feelingStar
in all part was awesomeClap
loved it
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continue soonSmile

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 2:25am | IP Logged
hey dear
awesome ff dearClap
i luved dis ff so much
each n every parts r awesome, fantasticStarClap
i just say u r superb writerSmile

u write ridz feeling vry well
i feel bad for herUnhappy
i doubt about armaan feeling sumtym its likes he loves ridz but its like he doesn'tConfused
waiting for nxt part
plz add me in ur pm
list n do pm me when u update
plz update soonBig smile
Shilpa


Edited by shilpI007 - 15 March 2011 at 2:37am

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 2:42am | IP Logged

hey shruthika....

sorry for the late reply!!
n thnx soo much fr d PM'z
n now i'll start ranting
and sadly for u
u gotta bear it......so here i go!!LOL

i really really really pity ridz a lot
i juzt feel so sick
tht she is kinda trapped in btw
not knowing wht she feels first
n nw dat she knw'z she cnt do nythng abt it yet!

and stupid stupid stupid ANGREZ
i knw she'z ur charecter shru
but i swear me and rhea plan to kill her ASAP!Angry
and jahan dekho wahan
exactly wrong tym mein tapak padti hain.....
aaarghhh....kamini!! AngryAngryAngry

lolzLOL everybody in the world
knwz ridz luv'z ammy
xcpt d only one who should really knw!
kyaaaa baat hain????! *tsk!tsk!*

poor gal has to b a part of sumone's happy union
wen her heart's shattering to peices.....Cry

I saw Andrea giving Armaan nasty looks, and I at once stood in the gap between them to block her sight. awwww....she stood btw dem! how sweet she luv'z him crazy!!

"So all you guys went?" Andrea said angrily, while the boys looked down.

"Andrea, they're boys! Big deal! If they don't go to a strip club, where do you expect them to go? Toy shops?" thiz totally had me gasping for breath after laughing uncontrolably!! I said in their defence while the other girls looked at me with 'betrayal' written all over their faces. The boys just sent me grateful glances.

and wht the freakin hell is wrrong wid armaan??

he'z acting so insensitive towards ridz and her feelings
he'z leeting her break down and is more
intrested in useless angrez???? i juz dnt get it?
ok mayb juz mayb u dnt luv ridz!! (not poss doh he so luv's her)
but dude she'z ur BFF, atleast on that count
u gotta b der forn herr???!!!! kaha gaya gthe gr8 friendship?Angry

"Why do you want to be the responsible one! Especially when you're the one who's going through the worst heartbreak!" Anjie
i soo fully agreed to wht angie said...go on gal! show 'em!

it was really pitiable wen she went on to blame herself
and she'z comitment phobic? hmm mayb!!Confused
she'z messed up sooo bad and den cum'z
mr.mallik askin fr his "fiance" W*H !! ughhhh

well, movin on mr.mallik if u're armaan
n she cnt hide thngs frm u! den why r'nt u gttn wht she has to say?
well, itz kinda tym ridz opened her mouth abt it tooo
bolo nah ridzi....go for it!!!

UH-OH!! we all knw wht hapn'z wen
ridzi is DRUNKKKK!!
awwww....she juz wanted his attention back!
i juz luv the whole drunken part......

esp the lines

. I smiled through that one tear which had escaped my eye. And then, all of a sudden, as if the world had drowned, I saw his eyes change...Overcome with happiness of some kind, as if I had found that hidden depth in his eyes

i sooo hope tht the two nutters
realise their immense lovvvee fr each other!!
i juz cant wait for the NEXT UPDATE.....
do update soooooonnnnnn!!
u juz leave us wanting for more every tym u write
loved it......

GREEDY reader
-KINBig smile



Edited by kangel - 15 March 2011 at 2:43am

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 3:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by krazzy4armaan

i dint lyk dis part at all 
Hate Armaan soo much! 
Gosh! y cant dis guy just realize dat shez in luv wid him??!! Angry
n if he noez it den y da hell doesnt he say anything?!!!!! Angry
 
 
 
You know i was wondering the same thing..y cant armaan just confess if he loves her? He has to take a step forward na if he really loves her..I juz dont understand what is he waiting for?
 
I really thought that armaan loved riddhima especially in the beginning wen he brought ridz back to the house instead of allowing her to stay in her apartment...bt was really disheartening to know that he did not support her and supported andrea...
 
dyin to knw wts really goin on...my brain cells have stopped working nw..dun knw wats in store for the further parts..

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 3:35am | IP Logged
I might update today! Big smile

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 3:52am | IP Logged
Loved the update ! 
But yet again theres so much left that we dont know ,from the start the story has been more of Riddhima's point of view and since its Armaan and Riddhima's story I think its time we see Armaans pov because unless that happens it aint really their story at all LOL ,its more of Riddhima;s story and the hurt and pain she is going through !
Hope you dont mind me saying that,but the mystery thats attached to Armaans character makes it tough to see it from the point of view of both .
But am sure that Armaan does have a justification for all of this ,am sure he aint the one to hurt or use anyone to get what he wants .

P.S - I had to add that its the strength in the way you write that makes us go so deep into the story ,you have a way with words and a way ti make us get intrigued and think about it so much LOL


Edited by Ankita.M - 15 March 2011 at 3:54am

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 3:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ankita.M

Loved the update ! 
But yet again theres so much left that we dont know ,from the start the story has been more of Riddhima's point of view and since its Armaan and Riddhima's story I think its time we see Armaans pov because unless that happens it aint really their story at all LOL ,its more of Riddhima;s story and the hurt and pain she is going through !
Hope you dont mind me saying that,but the mystery thats attached to Armaans character makes it tough to see it from the point of view of both .
But am sure that Armaan does have a justification for all of this ,am sure he aint the one to hurt or use anyone to get what he wants .

That's the whole point...The story's about Riddhima...It's her 'walk on the beach' like she says in the first chapter! How she finds her best friend, her dreams, and then finally love...And then how her walk on the beach becomes their - Armaan and Riddhima's - A walk on the beach...

The whole point of keeping Riddhima as a narrator and keeping the story from her PoV was so that I tell HER story, of what happened to her....The whole flashback is from her diary, and yes, I've sometimes put in stuff from Armaan's PoV in the middle, but then again, that's always been in the flashback parts, so Riddhima always knew about all that that happened at the time...

That's the whole point...More than an AR story, it's a Riddhima story, and how her story and life gets linked to Armaan's....In fact, that's the realization she's undergoing right now, in the story...That it's not just her life anymore, now her life's dependant on Armaan's as well...Realization's finally struck her! 

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