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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 9:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ammy_ka_ashu

okay i just reread this part for the like 5th time...

can i tell you like everytime i get to this line:

"But what I realized was, that missing someone actually meant sitting right beside them and knowing you can't have them..."


i start like crying! it's so sweet and so powerful!
I can like totally see an entire ff revolved around this ONE LINE!

omg can i? like if you dont mind, can i like use this as the tag line for a mini/short ar ff? Obv. I'd tell everyone that it's your line :D i'd even give the link to your ff! please please pleasee pleaseeeeeeeeee

lol

anyways back to the part - woww again lol
i have like so many questions and such but im just going to wait for the next part :D ah cont super super super soon na pleaseeeeeeeeee



My entire FF is based on that line! LOL Kind of anyway! It was till now! Big smile

That's the line I had in mind ever since I thought of the story-line, and I was like it's perfect for when I tell Armaan's side of the story! Tongue Glad you liked it! 

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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 9:50am | IP Logged
amazingly written update..loved every word....
so andrea did play along to irritate ridz..how mean..
riddhima should surely teach armaan a lesson fr all dose time sdat he snogged that blonde...
 
loved armaan's POV...waiting fr d nxt part...eagerlyBig smile

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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 9:52am | IP Logged
OMG OMG OMG This was frikkin amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Embarrassed

I'm so high after reading it...I can't even word a comment ;P

I honestly want to make my comment longer but my thoughts are too scattered and I'm also working on the next part of Love Is... :)

xoxo
Aanya

P.S - I will comment again...when I'm less hyper :D

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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 9:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Dmg8594

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Hey Kashvi! Thank you so much for your feedback! Please do keep commenting in future as well! Smile

As for your doubt, he realized his love for Riddhima only AFTER Riddhima got mugged, when he saw her in that state, when he saw her getting hurt by those people, that's when he realized he was in love with her...

Before that, yes, he kind of had a hunch that he is crushing on her, and when he said all that to Nikki in the party, obviously he meant what he said...He was still confused about his feelings for Riddhima at that point of time, especially after he heard her say that there was nothing between the two of them...And yes, at that point of time, he liked Andrea as well, obviously, if he was dating her for so long! But yes, along with that, he was confused about Riddhima as well...


And like he said, he was going to defend Riddhima, and probably even tell her that he might feel something deeper than friendship for her, but before he could, he heard Riddhima arguing back and saying that she and Armaan were just best friends. And that, he thought, was enough to set his confusions straight, and so he backed out....

Obviously, he couldn't stand the distance from her, so he apologized to her on Christmas, and that's why he said that 'I can't lose either of them' because Riddhima would always remain his best friend no matter what, and well what would he tell Andrea, that I like you, but I can't be with you because I don't know what I feel for Riddhima yet?

But when he saw Riddhima getting hurt, and just seeing her in that state, made him realize that he is indeed in love with her! And so he even broke up with Andrea the very next day, but before he could tell Riddhima, she announced that she was now going out with Sid...
Basically, Armaan just turned out to be much more complicated than Riddhima ever was! LOL And Riddhima just turned out to be a daft-head! Big smile

Hope this solved your doubt! If you still have any concerning this, please do let me know! Smile
It did It definitely did.Thankyou SO much!I was actually confused,But now i think i get it!Armaan thought he was crushing on her,until that incident happened,and then he realized that he was madly in love with her,as stated by him himselfEmbarrassed.But like you said,Riddhima is definitely a daft-head,thats exactly why Armaan had to get back with Andrea even though he loved his munchkin...But since he said that he started going around with Andrea just because he could see signs of jealousy in Riddhima,I thought he was just pretending and hence whatever he said to nikki in the party didn't really make sense to me.But now it did..Poor guy was confused..and i can't  really blame him..It took her 3 freaking years to realise her love for him..not a joke,anyone would have given up,But then again hes Armaan MalikWink 
I am glad you aren't ending this ff sooon..or so i hope,Would love to see Munchkin-Peanuts as a couple,I love their moments..they are adorableeee.! 
And yeah i will definitely comment more often from now on..Im addicted to your ff manLOL
Can't wait to read further..Big smile

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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 9:58am | IP Logged
Honestly, Shru... while I loved how the story unfolded, and the confessions et all, I believe the best phase of the FF is now going to begin..
The confessions are out.. they both know how they feel about each other... so now the fun begins..
And while there is so much thats still left unsaid, by Armaan, which I am sure, Ridz will grill him on, theres also a lot of clarifying that Ridz needs to do!!!

The Game has just begun,  going by what Ridz stated last that Armaan Peanuts Malik needs to pay BigTime!!!
And I cant wait to read more!!!
Love the way you interweave humor in each situation!!! Thats the best part!!!

Love love love this FF!!!
Fantastic work Shru... Clap


Edited by armaania13 - 29 March 2011 at 10:01am

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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 10:57am | IP Logged
Updated my comment on page 118! :)

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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 11:46am | IP Logged
great part! it was my favourite part of this ff so far. i'm on riddhima's side for sure.  i think your a wonderful writer, creative, and talented. Clap


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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
Hey Shrutika :)
This is my actual comment...I'm more "sane" now :D


"It took you 3 years! 3 years!" He cupped my face and gazed into my confused eyes, whispering his words. "3 years, Munchkin! 3 whole freakin' years to make you realize that!" He held my face firmly, pulling me closer to himself.

"I'" I could feel my heart thumping against my chest. Whoever said coming clean would make you feel lighter? "Wait, what?" I spoke the 2 words I was able to manage.

"Of course I love you, you idiot!" He grinned down at me. "I love you!" He said softly, wiping away my tears with his thumb


Oh My God. You seriously made me shriek with happiness with this part! I could totally imagine it! The joy Armaan felt when he finally heard her confess, the confusion she went through when he said "I love you too."...it was all awesome :) Haha the next few lines were quite endearing! I love the way she says, "Wait, what?" Haha, that's so Riddhima. God, I cannot believe she was so daft. But I'll come to that later :D


"DON'T MUNCHKIN ME!" I yelled, losing my cool, and I saw his gaze turn to the floor. "You lied to me. All of this was a joke? A prank? Seriously Armaan? If there was one person, I had loved, I had trusted would never ever hurt me, it was YOU!" I felt my voice reverberate across the walls. "You broke my heart Armaan? My heart?" I asked him softly, and I saw him look up. I could see his moist eyes, but I couldn't bring myself to ease his pain when I was possibly going through the worst of it.


Aww I felt lousy for her. Honestly. Whatever she says in the above lines was kinda what I felt too! The fact that he went so far kinda made me angry on him. But, he's Armaan so I can't stay mad at him ;) We all know how neurotic he can be so I'm not holding it against him. Haha :D

I loved the lines from- "You broke my heart......." They're really, really, really well writen. Yeah I know they don't say much but it's beautifully written just the same :) They're both hurting right now even though they both know they love each other. I like how you didn't make it all hunky-dory all of a sudden, just because they confessed. People have a tendency to do that you know, and then even if the person has a lot to explain they make it all happy-happy which kind of mars the beauty of it. You kept it real :)


"You probably will never wanna see my face ever again after I tell you this, but I swear I'll make it up to you, even if it takes my entire life to do that. But I'm not gonna let you go away from me!" His grip on my hands grew ten-folds and I was slightly taken aback at how determined his voice sounded.


I loved this new, determined, strengthened-by-love Armaan :D Really. You wrote it really well. These few lines may not be the most important but I think they hold a lot of emotion. There's relief, that she finally loves him and she said it. Then there's determination, to get her back, to explain to her, to straighten things out. And I also think there's a tiny bit of worry? Maybe because she's so angry...I think he's worried he overstepped! Or maybe I'm reading too much into it? :)


And then it struck me! I had never told him the truth about that picture! Of course!


This got me wondering for a bit! What truth? Was it mentioned in the earlier parts? I think it was only mentioned he cheated on her? I thought Armaan knew about that. I dunno. Maybe it's my mistake, but just clear it out for me will you? :)


"But then, you just stopped reacting...You stopped showing that you were jealous, but you did start hating Andrea. Obviously I knew it had something to do with me dating her, but I just wanted to get a concrete reaction from you, and so....Well I went overboard, and before I knew it...Well, we kinda became an official couple..." He looked at me with frightened eyes and I just looked away. So it was all because he wanted to get a 'concrete reaction' huh? I would give him a concrete reaction. Probably smash his head against a concrete wall, I thought spitefully.

Armaan probably guessed my reaction as I felt his lips touch my hand and I gasped. It felt different this time. Probably because now I knew he too...You know...


Aww I felt bad for him here :( Poor guy! He went through quite a bit! And the end part where she wants to smash his head...haha I agree :D Boy, was he stupid! He kissed her hand *smiles* it's just so cute :D I love Munchkin and Peanuts. I really do :D


"But the first time I realized what you actually mean to me was after...after the party...." I felt my heart pick up pace at the thought of that night. Armaan still found it difficult to talk about it, and now that I thought about it, it was so obvious why he was so affected by that night. "When I saw you there, whimpering on the road, and those effing bas***ds hurting you, I wanted to just tear their eyes out, break every limb in their body...It was my worst nightmare Riddhima...And that's when I realized...That night was the night I realized that I'm madly in love with you..." Armaan said in a clear voice and unlike before, he didn't hesitate even once before saying that.


I have nothing to say here. It was just really well written :D And I love Armaan <3


He got up on his knees and stood up to my level. He lightly touched his forehead to mine and spoke softly. "Riddhima that moment when I realized what you meant to me, I swear it was the best moment of my life...I had never felt that happy before, because it was only you who could ever make me feel the way you do..." He gently placed a kiss on my forehead and pulled back. I was too dazed to respond and so chose to look away.


Shit. I was grinning like an idiot at the computer after reading this. *sigh* They're so perfect together! I like these small gestures you've put in throughout the part. They are not only cute but they also show their love for each other without words :)


The 3 years zoomed by, and not once did I let you know my feelings, although you definitely came close to figuring it out. You kept telling me about how you would notice my eyes changing meaning, but you never got to know what it actually was..." He said softly.


Ha! I KNEW it! :D Every time I read about his eyes [in previous parts] I'm like- Does he like her? As more than a friend? But then I'd think of Andrea and I'd be -Maybe not... :P


"And so, I just went with the flow. You were happy, close to me, and I was happy with that; at least for that time. But what I realized was, that missing someone actually meant sitting right beside them and knowing you can't have them..." I felt tears prick my eyes all over again as his words sunk in. That was exactly how I had felt all these days; Armaan had probably suffered more, he had endured the pain for 3 years....


This was very touching :) It pretty much summarizes your FF! And Armaan suffered for 3 years! :( But I'm glad they finally confessed. FINALLY. :)


"When you were drunk, you kind of mumbled things like 'I'm sorry, I made it too late...' I kind of figured what you were talking about..Then when I dropped you off in your suite, you started crying and refused to let me go. And I had to sit there while you cried saying you lost someone very precious to you. On an impulse, to get you to stop crying, I confessed that I was in love with you!" He shrugged and I groaned.


Haha I LOVED this. It was something that kept pestering me and now I know! OMG I almost hate Riddhima for forgetting :D Almost.


But now, it was my turn to play! I would surely not let Mr. Armaan Peanuts Mallik off the hook so easy! Oh no! He was gonna pay! Big time!

Smiling away, I grabbed his picture, hugged it tight, and looked forward to a dreamless sleep!


Yay!!! She's gonna make him pay! Haha I can't wait to read it!

I had questions about the ring and stuff but I read your replies to others so they're solved :)

There. Phew! I'm done. :) That was long, hai na? 

Continue SUPER soon! Hope your paper goes well <3

xoxo

Aanya


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Edited by Aanya_taanu4evr - 29 March 2011 at 1:43pm

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