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nightstar

@nightstar

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

u know i was so mad at u 4not continuing the other ff...nut wah...what a compensation...

bt being the llalchi 4ffs that i am, plz cont that one.....plz.....

this os was a treat sri..i loved the entire story, esp whn arsh marriage gets fixedm they are sent off to shilpa's room...the line"aur pyaarwoh bhi ho jayega..ya shyad ho chuka hain.."it just made my day...

i dnno how many tymes i wl go on rereading it...do add it in the ff index.....

chal lambi comments de di..aab maat kehna kisi ne limbi comments nahin di to update nahin karungi....

woh wali bhi update karde na sri...plz....

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nyxx

@nyxx

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Lovely OS!!

It was so serene and beautiful, and very well-written!

Great job!!

You should definetely write more and thankss for the pm :)

Edited by Armaan-KSG - 13 years ago

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repercussion

@repercussion

Senior Member

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Awww....some dad,eh? How do such things end up in Shilpa's platter...Good lord! Awesome one-shot...although such stories always come along...this one stand out for it's simplicity, diction, decency and what not! Every word of the story was so gripping right from the beginning...the very first line made me scroll up and look at Armaan's picture looking at Shilpa...a real good choice for the banner! Also, I had actually ended up concluding that Armaan was not a delusion the second time...but you saved the girl from some embarrassment! It's so strange yet real how you can just adapt to this one person who you are marrying without giving it an actual though...the trust u put in as a reflex...that was portrayed very well with their hug and the little dialogue from the party night...."toh ab toh shaadi...." was so cute!Totally loved it....but ab apni ff ka bhi dhyaan karo lol....I'm eagerly w8ing to know ki what's the next development in their story! Have a nice day....and continue writing...either one shots or your ff...as long as we get such beautiful treats...thnx a ton fro the pm!

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39836

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Wow...........superb ! I loved the last para most.And the dialogues "Aur pyar " ....."Vo bhi ho jayega".........and my most favourite one "Shayad ho chukka hain" ☺️

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aisha_ranbir8

@aisha_ranbir8

Goldie

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

hey....it waz awesome..............loved it.........the OS waz beautifully written ........... it waz cute n sweet............loves arsh conversation n moments loved it................. thanks for pm...........take care..............love aish..................

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Srishti

@Swiftie

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

<3 i loved itttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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517780

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

srishhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

awesome. it was so cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Zeeshan

@-Zeeshan-

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee srish....itss superbbb😃😃😃
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Sri

@OkThanksBye

IF-Stunnerz

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Crazyy_Fan- Sakshi...thank you!😛

_Afrin_ - hey buddy...🤗....i am glad you liked it so much😳....aww...KaSh*sigh😍

dashingtusha13 - heyyy thanx dear!😳

shaaz_91 - thank you!😊

anjalip- thanx anjali....😳😛

MeetPremeer -thank you😊

AMMY12 -hey there!😛 Thank you so much! i will try to write more better than this!😆😳😛

AR_LOVER - thank you!😊

R.K.O - edit it fast!😈

glyn_dva - so finally you commented...:D and finally i am replying you...:))...awwhh...I miss KaSh too!!! ..Thank you Glynis...i am glad you like the story!🤗...love u too...😳😛

angelina_angel -thank you😊

Riddss -Thanks Riddss!😛

Klutszy_KaShian -Jinszyyy!!!! thanx budy.🤗 😛

krazzy4armaan -Thank you! 😛

Love-KaSh - aww..hope you get Him!...:) Thanx!😊

anumeha_rajat - Thanxxxx Anu!😛

ARMAANKSGFAN -Thank you!😊

kashndsel4eva -Thank you Sanya!😛🤗

kriyaarsh -Thank you! 😛

Oo_SuKaSh_oO - aw.....i see many of you liked that particular line...Thanx!😳😊

Armaan-KSG -Thank you dear!😛😳

Prinnia - thanx buddy!😛

sammy4u -thank you!😊

hinalshah -Thank you!😊

armaanlover_7 - Rajiiii🤗..well first of all..I miss talking to you...::..........secondly...Thank you for the compliment!😳😛

aisha_ranbir8 -hey! Thanx....😊😛

kash.is.bk4ever -Thank you!😛

kashfull -Thank you!😛😳

-Zeeshan- -will be waiting!😳😛

ana_kash -Thank you!😛

princessrashida- Thank you dear!😊

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Sri

@OkThanksBye

IF-Stunnerz

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: pixie_n
hey shrish🤗
hey nisha..🤗
aww loved ur os.....
it ws jus awesome
againa cute writing Thank you!😳
did i tell u i jus love ur writings?? yes i do
ohh yeah...u just told! thank you!😛
loved d title d most "my stranger" haaye😍hayee.......thanku ji!
dat shayad ho chuka h ws dam romantic n cheesy..loved wen shilpa asked hugging him or pyaar?? heheaaaawwwwwww😆😳
loved ur line shockingly embaressed n embaressingly shocked..🤣I know iknow...it was worth ROFLing!🤣
loved d concept of a known strangerThank you!😛
clap clap clap.....Thank you!Thank you!Thank you!😳
love❤️Love ya too!😛

Edited by -KaShti- - 13 years ago

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