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Sr Os-When A Heart Breaks(Part 4:Pg.12) (Page 8)

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 11:46am | IP Logged
OMG Pragzie. You broke my heart. Broken Heart  Broken Heart  Those quotes. Sid's pain. So, so much of it. I was sobbing. Somebody needs to take his hurt away. And that woman. She wants to be friends ? After walking all over his heart ? After calling him a farz ? I don't think she can possibly hurt him more. The way you captured his pain, and her desperation, it was so raw, so beautiful. I'm so glad he's not letting her see him break down, she isn't worthy of it. Lovely, lovely update, you have to write more SOON.

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
Praggu i m speechless!!!

I seriously don't know wat and how to start with....I literally cried reading both the parts of ur OS Cry  Broken Heart Stern Smile  All i can say is Please Riddhima Please Atleast Spare Sid now....Stern Smile U have destroyed and ruined an innocent person's life who only gave u hope smiles n happiness and in return u have given him only Miseries for Whole of his Life....Stern Smile STOP IT and LEAVE HIM ALONE PLEASE I BEG OF U Pinch Unhappy JUST GO AWAY Stern Smile Broken Heart

Waiting for the next part cont soon......


Edited by kritishah3 - 14 March 2011 at 12:16pm

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 1:39pm | IP Logged
OMG Pragzie, the end was just killing - I loved how he packed her red suitcase (had to bring it in? LOL)
The pictures, their room really well done!

But wow, I have to say I don't hate this Riddhima she tried, to stop Sid, Which is a big task in itself.

I can't wait to see what happens next - the middle of their story is still remaining.

Cont soon!

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 3:38pm | IP Logged
Hiii pragzie......
the way u describes sid's pain....m crying 4 him.......loved d dialougs u hav used.....ridhima really deserved it after wat she did with sid....now wat she wants frm sid does she has nt any shame....that farz is over thn y she came to sid......& the quteos r very beautiful.......

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 12:00am | IP Logged
Pragzie Hug
 
WONDERFULL START!!ClapClapClapClapClap
 
Broken HeartU made cry CryCryCryCry  hate Ridz maiyaOuchOuch
After whole fiasco for what she is at Penthouse?ConfusedConfusedConfusedConfusedAngry
 
 
Tumne mereko pyaar ka matlab sikhaya"

"Ab yeh rishta hi meri sacchai hai Tumhi mere sachchai ho,mujhe farak padta hai "

"Iss baar hum apni maarzi se shaadi kar rahein hai "

"Mein sirf tumhare saath rehna chahti hoon "

Sab jhooth.......AngryfarzAngryliarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr........hate her and his so called lover for what they did with SIDAngryAngryAngryCryCryCryStill want SR to be togetherLOLWink
As much as i hate A----------------------R more than that i love SiddhimaEmbarrassedHoping for SR reunionOuchcoz u r not like talli cvsAngryLOL
anyways u wrote it wonderfullyEmbarrassed
Love quotes...Big smile
 
Update sooon....................Embarrassed
 
thanks for pm...;)
 
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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 5:58am | IP Logged
Awesome Pragzie!! Beautifully written.... I feel like am reading a novel....

Great job dear!!!!

Thanks for the lovely update!!! Do pm me please!!!
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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 2:22pm | IP Logged
Pragzieeeee.......Clap

Super duperrrrrr update.......loved it....

do PM me next time u update......
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 4:32am | IP Logged
 
Pragzie Hug
 
Thanks for WONDERFUL OSClapClapClapClapClap
 
After whole drama why she came back to PenthouseCryConfusedConfusedConfusedConfusedAngry

Broken HeartU made us cry CryCryCryCry  hate Ridhhima when our sid cry for herAngry

whenevr u update ur OS plzzzzzzzzz PM me

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