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Sr Os-When A Heart Breaks(Part 4:Pg.12) (Page 4)

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 6:34pm | IP Logged
wonderful startHug
continue soon..

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 8:59pm | IP Logged
Unhappy
rote kaiko hummm rote kaiko hum...rulate kaiko humko?!?! [:S]

lmao jk continue soon!
it is simply amazing to seet he many ways this story cudda gone...

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 9:15pm | IP Logged
heyyyyyy pragzie

nyc start yar

pls add me 2 ur pm list

Veena

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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 12:02am | IP Logged

PragzuuHugHug

So good to see that u started a new OS
its AwesomeEmbarrassed
 
SiddCry i can so feels his painCry
 
FARZ!!!Angry
thanks to that Maiya i hate this word even moreeAngryAngryAngryAngry
 
well i know that u like sad stories so i guess there will be sad ending here alsoLOL
 
anyways little pragzuu continue soon and do pm meEmbarrassed

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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 4:11am | IP Logged
OMG Sid's pain made me cry yaar. That Riddhima she is a fool. According to me if a girl can't love a guy like Sid then she don't even know the actual meaning of love. Sid and Armaan no comparison yaar. Sid loves Riddhima bt Armaan's love is not love it is LUST. CVs r crazy they have made a fun of pure relation like marrige. Coming to ur OS the start is very I hope Riddhima realise her mistake. Continue soon. Do PM me next time

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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 10:19pm | IP Logged
PRAGZIE !! How come you didn't tell me about this one ? Ouch  Ouch 

Seriously, this is so amazing !! Its amazingly sad, but you've captured Sid's pain so, so, well, like you always do. I always say that you write so sensitively, its amazing. I love you, your story, and your Sid. And Riddhima. I cannot believe she STILL has the guts to walk in that house and hold that photograph. I feel like punching her, but then I always do. My favorite line, "To get away from you and my brother". That just said EVERYTHING. All the pain, all the hurt, all the anger. Honestly, this is AWESOME !! Update real soon !! Hug   Hug

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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 11:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nikita_88

Reserved! 

*unreserved* 

Pragzie I love your writing, hate your cliffhanger! LOL

Hmm...interesting start I can't wait to see how you take it forward, at least in this one I am yet to hate Riddhima LOL (so it is your job that I don't! Tongue

Can't wait to see you have planned! 

Do PM me! 

Cont soon! Big smile

BTW *Happy dance* exams are over for you! LOL
ThanksEmbarrassed
*Joins in the happy dance *PartyLOL
and about Riddhima we shall see LOL

Originally posted by prejudiced

Love the way youve potrayed  Sid''s emotions - hurt, agony, pain
and   the way the "Farz" word almost killed  him!
 
It did falsify everything SR shared .......
 
Also quite like the way youve started the OS.
Awaiting the next update!
Thanks Embarrassed
it really did faslify everythingOuch

Originally posted by sr-medha

Awesome start, pragzie,
 
I HATE that RIDDHIMa. SHe sucks!!
 
And sid's pain,....
 
Continue soon.
and PLz PM me
ThanksEmbarrassed
she does suck ,doesnt she ?LOL
will definitely PM you Big smile

Originally posted by ssdtvgojan

Awesome and wonnderful start pragz...........Do PM me and update soon...........Cos i know yr exams r over........LOL
ThanksEmbarrassed
yes will update soonLOL

Originally posted by innocenteyez92

wow 
its awesome.....Clap
very nice.
plz add me to ur pm list.
ThanksEmbarrassed

Originally posted by sidma_love

My li'll Pragzuuuu HugHug

This is freaking Awesome Embarrassed

Ahhhhh Sid Ouch
I can so feel his pain Cry 
He gave his world to Ridz but what she gave him in return only PAINAngryAngry

FARZ grrrr AngryAngryAngry
I hate dis word AngryAngryAngry

And whenever I think abt dis I HATE dat Maiya even more AngryAngryAngry

But just like Zeenzie I also feel dat eventually she'll realise dat Haraam is a selfish , obsessive PAGAL AngryAngryAngry & Sid is her soulmate Embarrassed


Seeing at d past records I am expecting a sad ending in dis OS also LOL

Anyways can't wait 4 d next part
Continue soon....
Thank You so much EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
i hate that word too . Angry i hate R maiyya and P maiyya foreverLOL
Sitaraman is selfish,obsessive and pagal and riddhima will eventually realize that . 

Originally posted by jasangel

wonderful startHug
continue soon..
ThanksEmbarrassed

Originally posted by malluangel

Unhappy
rote kaiko hummm rote kaiko hum...rulate kaiko humko?!?! [:S]

lmao jk continue soon! 
it is simply amazing to seet he many ways this story cudda gone...
LOL 
ThanksEmbarrassed

Originally posted by veena_rocks

heyyyyyy pragzie

nyc start yar

pls add me 2 ur pm list

Veena
ThanksEmbarrassed

Originally posted by Moumi363

PragzuuHugHug

So good to see that u started a new OS
its AwesomeEmbarrassed
 
SiddCry i can so feels his painCry
 
FARZ!!!Angry
thanks to that Maiya i hate this word even moreeAngry
 
well i know that u like sad stories so i guess there will be sad ending here alsoLOL
 
anyways little pragzuu continue soon and do pm meEmbarrassed
Thanks Big smileEmbarrassed i know i just cant stand the word Farz nowOuch
will pm you soon Embarrassed

Originally posted by sonia1000

OMG Sid's pain made me cry yaar. That Riddhima she is a fool. According to me if a girl can't love a guy like Sid then she don't even know the actual meaning of love. Sid and Armaan no comparison yaar. Sid loves Riddhima bt Armaan's love is not love it is LUST. CVs r crazy they have made a fun of pure relation like marrige. Coming to ur OS the start is very I hope Riddhima realise her mistake. Continue soon. Do PM me next time
Aww sorry for making you cry Ouch Exactly she is a fool . Armaan's love is lust . And cvs they are just well insensitive, immoral people.
ThanksEmbarrassed 

Originally posted by StarshineHues

PRAGZIE !! How come you didn't tell me about this one ? Ouch  Ouch  

Seriously, this is so amazing !! Its amazingly sad, but you've captured Sid's pain so, so, well, like you always do. I always say that you write so sensitively, its amazing. I love you, your story, and your Sid. And Riddhima. I cannot believe she STILL has the guts to walk in that house and hold that photograph. I feel like punching her, but then I always do. My favorite line, "To get away from you and my brother". That just said EVERYTHING. All the pain, all the hurt, all the anger. Honestly, this is AWESOME !! Update real soon !! Hug   Hug

I am so sorry Ouch its just that one moment i had an idea and in another i posted itOuch 
ThanksEmbarrassed i love you too but you already know that LOL Same here i wish i could give her a black eye but then it wouldnt be fair to JWLOL thanks for always encouraging me 

Thank You all so much HugHug




Edited by Pragzie - 12 March 2011 at 11:55pm

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 12:18am | IP Logged
first of all i m so so sorry for doing late comment................Ouch
i hope you will forgive ur nikkami naughty Monty di...........Confused
now back to ur OS....bachha u r awesome in  writing.....i m really amazed .....u had described sid 's pain wonderful. that maiyya's line hurt me so much.....Angry

i know sweetie u like sad ending......LOL but plzzzzzzzzzz make sad ending for maiyaa.......not my siddy. he deserve to be happy........LOL

love you dear.

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