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Sr Os-When A Heart Breaks(Part 4:Pg.12) (Page 3)

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 10:13am | IP Logged
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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 10:15am | IP Logged
WOW
Awesome os
Please add me to ur pm list

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 10:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lennie

Pragz - you know i love quotes same as you and i loved the Dear John quotes, they are so for SR
 
Great start, and you are right Silence hurts more then words
 
I cant believe Sid still called him - brother.......
 
Farz is the one word that is going to haunt him forever, it hurts more then anything - very hard to love again not only that but to trust and have faith in someone else again
yup i do know that. I agree Dear John quotes are so SREmbarrassed
ThanksEmbarrassed i dont feel bad she left him i feel bad she called her feelings towards him "farz"
Originally posted by bells_10

PragzieHug
that's a nice surprise!
ahh...i love your writing..... keep up the good work!
waiting for the next part eagerlyEmbarrassed

Thank you so muchEmbarrassed

Originally posted by 144128

beautifulClap
ThanksEmbarrassed

Originally posted by Ovi_Tanni

Pragzzz
awesome start.....u described sid's pain very well......& abt tat farzy maya.....though i hv same questions in my mind bt again thank god i did not watch after second marriage....so for me ridz is always sid's & they r soulmates.....anyways continue soon & do pm me.....
Thank You Embarrassed you are lucky yo did not watch after Second remarriage

Originally posted by indian_beauty

Pragzuuuuuu Hug

Cry

My Siddy Widdy and his pain CryCry
tht farzy maiyaAngryAngry
why is she here again...I hate tht womanAngryAngry

the part where Sid broke down CryCryCry
and I love this part....it really shows Sid's feelings Cry

He was fine with the fact that she didn't love him . But why did she make him believe that she loved him. Why did she make him believe they could be together ? If she never made him believe that she loved him it would have hurt less 


and I know ur a nikammis who loves sad endings but I'm not expecting a sad ending hereTongue

anyways continue soon n don' forget to PM me warnaAngryLOL
Thank YouEmbarrassed i hate her tooAngry won't forget to pm youLOL

Originally posted by zeenia

'sigh'
 
Ok before I comment Pragzie Im expecting a sad ending in your OS cos I know you love them!LOL
 
Now coming to the update  everytime I think about that disgusting 'farz' word and how it must have stabbed Sids heart to hear it, I feel like killing Ridhimma. All he gave her was love, protection, and security. And all he got in return was pain and heartache!
 
But....but....but, I think I always hope that Ridhimma eventually realises that sitaraman was nothing and it was Sid who was  always her soulmate.
 
I can hope right!Embarrassed
 
Cant wait for the next part Pragzie!
 
ThanksEmbarrassed
true he gave her the world but only got pain in exchangeOuchi know she will realize who is right for her and who is wrong. We can always hope. Hope is what SRians do Cool

Originally posted by Liashna

PragzieHug....... Awesome.... This is the best!! Wow, you portrayed Sid's pain so well yaar!!

Feel sad for him..... N riddhima too... Wink

Continue soon n do pm me dear!!!

Thanks a bunch
ThanksEmbarrassed will definitely pm you =)

Originally posted by subia-17

pragziiieeee Hug

Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry

sid's pain ahhhh!!!!!Cry

how much i hate dat farzyy maiyaaa

n y she here again 4 what Angry Angry Angry

u love sad ending i hope its nt one f dose LOL but after what she dont deseve sidAngry

amazing partClap

waiting 4 next....
ThanksEmbarrassed i hate her too Angry
Originally posted by jacobharry10011

WOW
Awesome os
Please add me to ur pm list
Thanks Embarrassed

Originally posted by loveSR

nice start
update soon.......Smile
ThanksEmbarrassed


Thank You all for commenting means a lotHug
and as for the ending . It depends on your perception . For some it may be sad, for some it may be bitter sweet and for some it will be a happy endingEmbarrassed




Edited by Pragzie - 11 March 2011 at 10:22am

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 10:27am | IP Logged
Love the way youve potrayed  Sid''s emotions - hurt, agony, pain
and   the way the "Farz" word almost killed  him!
 
It did falsify everything SR shared .......
 
Also quite like the way youve started the OS.
Awaiting the next update!

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 10:40am | IP Logged
Awesome start, pragzie,
 
I HATE that RIDDHIMa. SHe sucks!!
 
And sid's pain,....
 
Continue soon.
and PLz PM me

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 10:44am | IP Logged
Awesome and wonnderful start pragz...........Do PM me and update soon...........Cos i know yr exams r over........LOL

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wow
its awesome.....Clap
very nice.
plz add me to ur pm list.


Edited by innocenteyez92 - 11 March 2011 at 11:17am

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 11:40am | IP Logged
My li'll Pragzuuuu HugHug

This is freaking Awesome Embarrassed

Ahhhhh Sid Ouch
I can so feel his pain Cry
He gave his world to Ridz but what she gave him in return only PAINAngryAngry

FARZ grrrr AngryAngryAngry
I hate dis word AngryAngryAngry

And whenever I think abt dis I HATE dat Maiya even more AngryAngryAngry

But just like Zeenzie I also feel dat eventually she'll realise dat Haraam is a selfish , obsessive PAGAL AngryAngryAngry & Sid is her soulmate Embarrassed


Seeing at d past records I am expecting a sad ending in dis OS also LOL

Anyways can't wait 4 d next part
Continue soon....

Edited by sidma_love - 11 March 2011 at 11:44am

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