💔U made us cry 😭😭😭😭 hate Ridhhima when our sid cry for her😡
💔U made us cry 😭😭😭😭 hate Ridhhima when our sid cry for her😡
Originally posted by: veena_rocksheyyyyyyyyy pragati
jst luvd d way u described siddhima's pain n d quotes were nyc
Riddhima heart broke . She wished she could tell that she wanted to be with him ,but she herself didn't know what she want . She didn't want to hurt him further .
dis confused me, does she really wanna live wid Sid n nt tht psycho
pls cont soon
Veena
Originally posted by: sidma_lovePragzuuuu 🤗🤗
Super Awesome part ..
Siddy 😭 😭 😭
I can so feel his pain
Loved d dialogues & quotes u ve used
They were so apt for d situation 😊
OSCAR 🤣🤣🤣
It was like a FATAK on Ridz's face 😈
She deserves every bit of it 😈😈
I hate her & dat so called ' brother ' 😡😡😡
😡😡😡
But I love Sid's love for her 😳
Awwwww Sid still took the pic as a memory 😭
Why do I feel dat its still not OVER ?? 😉
Continue superrrrrrr soon....
Originally posted by: subia-17pragzieeeee🤗
fabulous part👏 👏 👏😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭awww my siddy widdy i soo wanted sid 2 say all this dat women deserves all this bt i can imagine how much pain n how much he hated himself 4 saying this 2 ridhimma 'coz he loved her n still loves her soo much😭 😭 😭i so hate her for giving sid all d pain 😡 😡 😡 n her boyfriend who doesnt deserve 2 be called a brother🤢 😡i like d way u described sid's n even ridz pain even thou i hate her bt she is d one sid loved 😛😆he still takes her picture with himOSCAR😆 😆 😆 I FEEL EVEN DAT IS LESS 4 HER🤣is it gonna be sad ending 4 me😕 i dont think son its still nt over i feel n hope😆the quotes u used are juss amazing 😳n so apt 4 d situation👏 👏 👏looking 4 d next part
Originally posted by: loveSRfabulous part😛😛
Originally posted by: 144128i dont have words to describe
it was fantastic
yes riddhimaz fault is unforgivable
thanx for the PM
Originally posted by: monty22Pragzie 🤗
yayyyyyyyy u forgive me.........amazing update.....my siddy..😭 it hurts me to watch him in pain...maiyya......... does she have amnesia problem? 🤪 oops how can i forget that she has.......🤣she deserve OSCAR.......................🤣 🤣love all the quotes ......😳looking for next part....😛
Originally posted by: LennieAgain i love the quotes you have used and i love NS's quotes
Funny how she said friendship isnt broken, is she right in the head, everything is broken, they never started as friends and all thatShame on her and how she is as a woman, what does she expect Sid to say and feel, Sid is emotionless now and that word fraz will forever haunt him and its killed each emotion and memory
Originally posted by: indian_beautyPragzuuuuuuu 🤗
bacha ur an amazing writer yaar 👏and this update 😭😭😭😭my Sid man I can't see him in so much pain 😭😭😭man he still loves her but 😭😭😭he still takes their picutre with himand tht woman bloody farzy maiya 😡😡😡can she go die somewhere😡😡but still it wud hurt Sid cuz he loves her so much 😭I hate tht so called brother 😡😡I wish I can just strangle him or sometthing😡😡😡she deserves an Oscar 😆😆😆Oscars ke itne bure din nahi aaye hai😆and I'm sure this is not the end there's stil more to it😉continue soonnnnnnnnnoh n ya I loved all the quotes u used😳perfect for the situation😳
Originally posted by: jasangel😭
Originally posted by: zeeniaPragzie!! You made me cry!! Sids pain was unbearable!!
But Ridhimma deserves every bit of his anger after what she did to him!!Wonderful wonderful update but now that you've given the ending away to Reets I wont be able to read anymore cos you know I hate sad endings!!😔I guess Ridzy and her farz deserves it!!P.S Is there anyone else out there besides me and Nami who still like SR??😆😆
Originally posted by: ...Noorya...awesome Pragzz😛
it was soo sad and i love the dialogueswhy Sid was trying to control his anger i wanted him to become Sexyface at Maya😡"Will you call me"!!! is she serious😡😡😡😡grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr im starting to hate her again now😆😆😆whatever the end will be im sure its gonna be wonderful as u are such a great writer😃ooh and the quotes are just beautiful
Originally posted by: sonia1000It was nice PLZ make happy ending for SR PLZ PLZ PLZ. I really want them together
Originally posted by: neet06I couldn't agree more with all that everyone else has written..
This is such a fabulous piece of work dear... I'm moved to tears... Seriously.. All that pain, sorrow and angst in Sid... N you portray it so beautifully well..I love the quotes that you use in between... They are just so apt to the situation..I really don't have words dear.. This is such a heart touching, soul stirring piece of work...Keep up the good work dear..Love n hugsNeet
Originally posted by: StarshineHuesOMG Pragzie. You broke my heart. 🥺 🥺 Those quotes. Sid's pain. So, so much of it. I was sobbing. Somebody needs to take his hurt away. And that woman. She wants to be friends ? After walking all over his heart ? After calling him a farz ? I don't think she can possibly hurt him more. The way you captured his pain, and her desperation, it was so raw, so beautiful. I'm so glad he's not letting her see him break down, she isn't worthy of it. Lovely, lovely update, you have to write more SOON.
Originally posted by: kritishah3Praggu i m speechless!!!
I seriously don't know wat and how to start with....I literally cried reading both the parts of ur OS 😭 🥺 😳 All i can say is Please Riddhima Please Atleast Spare Sid now....😳 U have destroyed and ruined an innocent person's life who only gave u hope smiles n happiness and in return u have given him only Miseries for Whole of his Life....😳 STOP IT and LEAVE HIM ALONE PLEASE I BEG OF U 😵 😔 JUST GO AWAY 😳 💔
Waiting for the next part cont soon......
Originally posted by: nikita_88OMG Pragzie, the end was just killing - I loved how he packed her red suitcase (had to bring it in? 😆)
The pictures, their room really well done!
But wow, I have to say I don't hate this Riddhima she tried, to stop Sid, Which is a big task in itself.
I can't wait to see what happens next - the middle of their story is still remaining.
Cont soon!
Originally posted by: Ovi_TanniHiii pragzie......
the way u describes sid's pain....m crying 4 him.......loved d dialougs u hav used.....ridhima really deserved it after wat she did with sid....now wat she wants frm sid does she has nt any shame....that farz is over thn y she came to sid......& the quteos r very beautiful.......
Originally posted by: JERAN_rocks
Pragzie 🤗WONDERFULL START!!👏👏👏👏👏💔U made cry 😭😭😭😭 hate Ridz maiyaAfter whole fiasco for what she is at Penthouse?😕😕😕😕😡Tumne mereko pyaar ka matlab sikhaya""Ab yeh rishta hi meri sacchai hai Tumhi mere sachchai ho,mujhe farak padta hai "
"Iss baar hum apni maarzi se shaadi kar rahein hai "
"Mein sirf tumhare saath rehna chahti hoon "
Sab jhooth.......😡farz😡liarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr........hate her and his so called lover for what they did with SID😡😡😡😭😭😭Still want SR to be together😆😉As much as i hate A----------------------R more than that i love Siddhima😳Hoping for SR reunioncoz u r not like talli cvs😡😆anyways u wrote it wonderfully😳Love quotes...😃Update sooon....................😳thanks for pm...;)❤️
Originally posted by: LiashnaAwesome Pragzie!! Beautifully written.... I feel like am reading a novel....
Great job dear!!!!
Thanks for the lovely update!!! Do pm me please!!!
Originally posted by: jyoti_31390Pragzieeeee.......👏
Super duperrrrrr update.......loved it....do PM me next time u update......
Originally posted by: ANNU30
Pragzie 🤗Thanks for WONDERFUL OS👏👏👏👏👏After whole drama why she came back to Penthouse😭😕😕😕😕😡💔U made us cry 😭😭😭😭 hate Ridhhima when our sid cry for her😡
whenevr u update ur OS plzzzzzzzzz PM me
Originally posted by: jacobharry10011WOW
Wat an update madamji😊
Loved Sid's anger ,cried for Sid's pain😭 n kind of Happy that Riddhima is sad
Riddhima " Sid .."
Sid's anger had ebbed away so in small voice he said " hmm "
Riddhima was shocked she had expected anger or another bout of harsh words she hadn't expected that. She hadn't expected to hear his defeated tone which spoke of the pain he was going through . Riddhima bit her lip and closed her eyes as she felt tears forming in her eyes . She had already given him enough pain . Infront of him she didn't have any reason to cry .
"Sid I want to say I am Sorry "
"It's all right Riddhima I forgive you " he said in the same disinterested tone
Some how this just made Riddhima feel worse. She didn't want him to forgive him she wanted him to yell at her .
Finally all their belongings were in their respective suit cases. Riddhima suddenly noticed Sid's feet . His soles covered in blood . Bits of broken glasses were cutting deeper into his sole with each step he took but he didn't seem to be in pain . He was about to take a step when Riddhima stopped him
She took out the first aid from the cupboard and was about to take out it's contents when Sid said "Stop Riddhima just stop showing your fake concern and just stop.Please"
Not wanting to argue with him Riddhima reluctantly put the first aid box back.
They left the bedroom while memories filled their heart and mind . This room was the witness of the love Riddhima had never felt or maybe refused to feel . This room was the witness of Sid's undying love for Riddhima .
"Riddhima before I go I just want to say I m sorry for the harsh words I said "
Sidhant didn't want to end things with Riddhima bitterly . There was too much of love . Too many memories .
Riddhima looked at Sid completely bewildered. Not knowing what to say she just stuttered "N..o . Noo. Need to say sorry. I deserved it "
Sidhant just smiled a sad smile " No Riddhima you didn't . As a wife you were very good . Farz nibhane mein kaafi acchi thi "
Riddhima flinched . Sid mentally kicked himself for saying some thing bitter again .
"I didn't meant it like that . I just meant that you were a good wife "
he gave her a bright smile . She smiled back. She felt that his smile was incomplete . The usual mischievous glint in his eyes was missing and his smile didn't quite reach his eyes
After a very pregnant pause Sid said " Bye riddhima "
"Bye Sid "
Funny isn't it? Some times people are perfect for each other . But their consequences actions and their words drive a wedge between them. Some times people love each other but some times they still stay away from each for reasons unknown even to them . Some times people hate to hurt each other but they still do because of the circumstances. People often don't recognize the effect their words can have on a person.Some times it breaks your heart to say good bye to a person but you still do . In anger ,in frustration or in sadness they say words that they never meant to . Those words haunt them for the rest of their lives. Choose your actions and words wisely . As Dumbledore were wisely said in Prisoner of Azkaban "The consequences of our actions are so complicated, so diverse, that predicting the future is a very difficult business indeed." Our actions and words make up our destiny and fate
Saying good bye to a loved one is always painful . Sid and Riddhima smiled at each other . Their eyes shining with tears . Their face contorted with pain . Finally Sid turned to go but at exact that moment'..
I know its a bit short😆 but promise next part will be long :)
Oh god I want to cry!!!! I want to stop them!! I want to hit Riddhima on her head and make her realize Sid's love for her!! I just want to do something to ease the pain and the angst!!!
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