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Destiny's Play-Pt LXV,LXVI,LXVII-126,133,138-19/3 (Page 12)

Opti IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 8:46am | IP Logged

Part L

The next day Sameera returned from Bangalore after nearly one and a half months. She dropped in at Maan's place to say hello. Maan was about to leave for work. Seeing her, he sat down with her for a few minutes and asked her how her mother was doing and why did she not turn up by mid-November when she was supposed to. Assuring him that her mother was fine, she explained that when she was about to leave for Mumbai she received a call from her company asking her to stay back and take care of a few things in their Bangalore branch as the manager of the branch had absconded without giving them any notice.  Things were in a mess and some urgent consignments had to be shipped to Singapore.  So she stayed back to straighten things out and ensure that the consignment reached Chennai as per schedule so that it can be shipped to its final destination. Having finished her task she was back again.  She then enquired what the news was back here in the chawl.  Giving her a cup of tea, Geet smiled and said that a lot had happened in her absence, both good and bad. 


Maan and Geet then gave her a brief rundown of how Maan became a partner in Garodia Hotel. Sameera was elated to hear this and gave Maan a bear hug. Asked when he will treat her, he assured her that he will do so soon enough. They then recounted how Anwesha lost her baby. Sameera was deeply saddened to hear this and enquired how she was doing.  They assured her that she was feeling much better now, especially after she saw her baba out of his coma. Sameera's eyes widened in surprise. Geet then held her hand and took her into the bedroom where Khuranaji was still sleeping. Sameera sat next to him and took his hand in hers. He slowly opened his eyes and tried to get up. Sameera gently pushed him back and asked him to relax. He asked with his eyes how she was. She said that she was doing well and was very happy to see him conscious. Maan in the meantime excused himself as he has getting late for work and quickly took Baba's blessing before he left.  Geet followed him to the door and kissed him goodbye, voicing her hope that at least the bank he was to visit that day will consider his application favourably, for which he smiled ruefully. The previous day did not bring much luck as that bank had rejected his application outright. Maan was slowly losing hope of ever securing the loan he so desperately needed. There were two to three banks left. If he is unable to get the loan from one of them he will sink along with his hotel. The thought made him shudder as he shook his head and proceeded to the bank.


Sameera spent a few more minutes with Baba before she too left as she had to report back for duty.  Geet later wheeled Baba to Pinky's house yet again before leaving for her mysterious outing. Pinky was aware of where she was going but was sworn into secrecy. 

That night Anwesha called Maan and asked him if Baba can stay with her for a few weeks. She missed him very much and wanted to spend more time with him. Although Maan was initially reluctant to let go of his baba, he realised that it was not fair to hold on to him when he himself was not able to devote more time for him. Moreover, Baba's presence will help her emotionally heal faster. He asked Geet whether she was OK with the arrangement. Geet nodded her head. So he agreed to drop him at Handa House before he left for work the next morning. Anwesha was glad to hear this.


Two days later

It was Christmas eve. Maan set out that morning, holding on to the last vestiges of hope. This was the last bank he will be visiting for his loan. If this one too declines to give him the loan, he will have to inform Mr.Garodia so that he can arrange to dispose off his property before any further erosion of value.  He wondered whether he made the worst mistake of his life by accepting Mr.Garodia's offer. At least earlier he had a regular job. If not in the Garodia Hotel, he could have found another job in another hotel, especially with his experience. It would have been easier to have followed the beaten path. Instead he chose the path riddled with stones and thorns, hoping that it will lead him to riches which would help him buy all the comforts his wife so deserves. Now there was the danger that instead of acquiring riches they may be reduced to rags.  While he did not fear facing poverty, he could not bear to thrust his wife in it. No, if he did not get the loan, he will have to eat humble pie and admit to Mr.Garodia his inability to rise up to his challenge. He hated it because he knew that the hotel had potential. He was convinced that if he gets the money in time he can repay it in less than six months as he had full faith in his own abilities. It was only a question of having timely liquidity to revive the hotel.


At the bank, he was asked to wait for a few minutes before he can meet the manager. The minutes soon turned to more than an hour. Maan was getting impatient and he finally got up to leave when he was called in by the manager, Mr.Kanwar.

"Mr.Khurana. I have gone through your application and your business proposition. I must admit that I am very impressed. For someone who has been in this field for only a short time, you seem to understand what ails your hotel and how to set it right.  The precision with which you have chalked out your strategy for its revival is amazing.  I have no hesitation in sanctioning the loan, for I know you will make good use of the funds and repay it in time."

Although Maan was extremely happy to hear this, he was still a little apprehensive.

He hesitatingly said, "I do not have any funds to place as margin money. You may have to give me the loan solely based on my credibility."

"No problems Mr.Khurana.  We will release the funds in a couple of days."  With that Mr.Kanwar got up and shook his hands warmly.

On his way to his hotel, Maan called up Geet to inform her the good news. He could barely contain his excitement as he stuttered and stammered out that he finally managed to secure the loan. Geet was overjoyed to hear this and assured him that now all their problems will soon melt away.  He agreed that they will and it is all because he had his lucky charm, his beloved wife by his side, making Geet blush. He then asked her to bring Sameera along for the Christmas eve party at the hotel that evening.  She agreed to do so and left for her appointment.

That evening, the guests of the hotel gathered in the banquet hall for the party.  Geet was wearing a beautiful indigo blue Mysore crepe silk saree which Sameera had bought for her from Bangalore. Sameera too was wearing a similar saree in wine red colour. Maan who was dressed up as Santa Claus could not take his eyes off his wife. His eyes kept following her wherever she went. Sameera came up from behind him and twisting his ears, she teased him about it.

"What a lecherous Santa you are! Instead of taking care of the kids, you are drooling over a pretty dame?"


Maan reddened but soon recovered to retort back, "Santa is human after all.  He cannot help himself when the woman in question is criminally hawttt." He emphasised the last word.

Soon the band played the carol 'Jingle bells' and Maan Santa went to his seat to entertain the kids who came up to him and sat on his lap one after another. He kissed them and gave them the bars of chocolates he had in his large red sack.  One of the little boys wanted to test whether his beard was real and tried pulling it. Maan was quick to anticipate his action and averted his stretched hand. He gently whacked his bottom as he put him down, making the boy giggle.


Geet then joined the band in singing a couple of carols including 'Joy to the world' and 'Deck the hall with boughs of holly'.  As the kids had to go to bed, the Christmas cake was cut by the youngest kid.  After the kids and their parents left, the party continued till mid night although Maan excused himself and left with his wife and Sameera by 10.00 p.m. as he had planned to report for duty on Christmas day too.

They left Sameera at her house and returned home.  After they showered and changed into their night clothes, Geet asked Maan to wear the Santa mask and cap. Although he was puzzled he did as she asked him to.  She then sat on his lap, held his neck and whispered into his ear that her Santa had so far fulfilled all her needs.  For a change she wanted to give her Santa what he desires. She then gently bit his ear, pulled his mask off and bent to enfold his lips in hers in a deep kiss.  Maan's eyes widened first in surprise and then in happiness. Holding her face between his palms he returned the kiss, measure for measure and gently pushed her down on the bed. When they finally came up for air, both of them were panting. Linking her arms around his neck and looking deeply into his eyes, Geet then proceeded to demonstrate her love and desire for her Santa, pleasantly surprising him with her zest. It was a merry Christmas indeed for the young Khuranas.

Continued here

Edited by Opti - 12 March 2011 at 2:37am

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swan20 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 8:47am | IP Logged
congrats on your new thread...Big smile

so happy Maan's dad is recovering. I love how you are showing the reality of a lower middle class family....managing a home in a restricted budget is really tough. Kudos to Geet that despite her affluent upbringing she's adjusted to middle class life so well...Clap....Wonder what the call is it someone who is going to finance Maan's business?

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Opti IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 8:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swan20

congrats on your new thread...Big smile

so happy Maan's dad is recovering. I love how you are showing the reality of a lower middle class family....managing a home in a restricted budget is really tough. Kudos to Geet that despite her affluent upbringing she's adjusted to middle class life so well...Clap....Wonder what the call is it someone who is going to finance Maan's business?
Thanks swan. The mystery behind that call will come out later. I'm afraid that track may not be as realistic as the rest of the fic.  Posted the next update.

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 8:52am | IP Logged

Thank God Maan got some happy news for Christmas..I hope Geet was his Guardian Angel...Embarrassed
shivangi783 Goldie

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 8:56am | IP Logged
Maan got the loan. Yay!!!Smile
Christmas brought the good news to Maan and GeetSmile
The mystery about the call is still intact.
Geet's been going everyday for her appointment. Has she started working besides the painting lessons she was giving to the Sahoo girl? She has a talent for singing. Is it related to it?  May be she's started working as a playback singer or some other profession. Geet is very talented. May be she has some more hidden talents. Since you mentioned that it'l bring a change in their lives it must be related to finance. Baby is also another option. But Maan needs to succeed first then go the family way. I am too confused and curious. So many possibilities. 

Edited by shivangi783 - 11 March 2011 at 9:43am
febinyusuff IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 8:57am | IP Logged
loved it loved it loved it dear..

btw, where is Geet is going..?????

hope it won't bring misunderstandings between Maneet

swan20 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 8:59am | IP Logged
lovely Santa's wish also came true on Christmas...LOLEmbarrassed

glad that Maan got the he can concentrate on his business without any financial worries.

hope you are going to reveal the mystery behind the call soon....the curiosity is killing me....LOL
Shalve IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 9:00am | IP Logged
awesome update...

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