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Destiny's Play-Pt LXV,LXVI,LXVII-126,133,138-19/3 (Page 107)

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 9:05am | IP Logged
part 61
wow so this Sameera's part..............wonder who that HE is and who the other HE Geet saw in the Terminal....................are they the SAME HE? cont soon..............

thanks for the link dear and i would like a balance or more of Maaneet..............

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 9:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shalve

Wow...superb update....
Thanks Shalve
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 9:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by seemamary

Nice update, do continue soon.
Thanks Seema
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 9:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Viji79

Well, since I have read the original, I would like to say that Sameera's track be retained. But I would leave it to you as you would know better as the author.
I'm retaining the track but shortening the length of it.
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 9:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bhanu_rekhag

AWESOME N AMAZING UPDATE
Thanks bhanu
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 9:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mrk_1

wow that was an awsome one yaar ..i guess its dev ???
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 10:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PaintedSky

I want Maaneet more... summary about samira will do.
Will try to balance both the tracks although the tilt will be more in favour of Maaneet scenes.
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 10:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by serialwatcher16


Opti,

1. I liked Sameera's story. I don't mind all the details of the background and it is good for variety.

2. Personal POV - I wish the boss had allowed her to drive the scooty even when he was well. When she acted beyond the call of duty and so extraordinarily when he was in a helpless state, then why could he not sit pillion with her driving when he was okay. I would have liked him to sit at the back as an acknowledgement of her presence of mind and as a salute to her independent spirit.

3. I have to re-read to see if you have given a name to the boss because i don't remember it.

4. Was it arjun whom they, Maan/Geet saw in the airport? I wonder who it was.



Point 1.  Thank you.

Point 2. Good point. Maybe he felt embarrassed being driven around by a woman. Not many men like to be driven by women.  But he is not a typical MCP either.  He does admire and appreciate her spirit. You'll see that in the next update.

Point 3:  Not yet but the next update will give you the answer indirectly if you have not guessed by now.

Point 4: You'll have to wait for the answer to it.


Edited by Opti - 17 March 2011 at 10:51am

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