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Destiny's Play-Pt LXV,LXVI,LXVII-126,133,138-19/3 (Page 105)

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 12:48am | IP Logged

Opti,

1. I liked Sameera's story. I don't mind all the details of the background and it is good for variety.

2. Personal POV - I wish the boss had allowed her to drive the scooty even when he was well. When she acted beyond the call of duty and so extraordinarily when he was in a helpless state, then why could he not sit pillion with her driving when he was okay. I would have liked him to sit at the back as an acknowledgement of her presence of mind and as a salute to her independent spirit.

3. I have to re-read to see if you have given a name to the boss because i don't remember it.

4. Was it arjun whom they, Maan/Geet saw in the airport? I wonder who it was.

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 1:11am | IP Logged
I realy feel bad for sameera she is facing bad time ...airport pe kaun tha ? please update soon ..love to read ab sameera along with maan geet

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Edited by monikaseth - 17 March 2011 at 1:14am
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 1:12am | IP Logged
Okay...read two updates together..and both of them dealing with taking care of an invalid..I, for one, would love to know more about Sameera although Maan and Geet are the star attractions..don't know how you will be able to maintain a balance though..sorely missed Maan and Geet in  the second update..of course you gave us a bit towards the very end..am presuming the guy they saw at the airport is Dev..nice little bait that..waiting more the secrets to come tumbling out..Smile
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 1:40am | IP Logged
definitely want maneet more!
prathyusmiling Senior Member
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 1:52am | IP Logged
fabulous update........
RageOfAnAngel IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 3:11am | IP Logged

Sameera's part was very interesting ... but I would like you to continue it as a Maneet fic mainly with Sameera's life events interspaced  with them . 

Looks like Sameera's boss is Dev  Angry

Loved the update ...  Thumbs Up
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 3:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Opti

Originally posted by dia_ditz


how many FF of urs is live now???

could u plz send me the link'

i would like to read ur other works too,

as i have 1 week holiday!!!

dia


Apart from this one, there is only one other, "Maaneet scenes",  which is live but  I have put on temporary hold till I find the time to pen something. Here is the link to all my Maaneet fics including the completed ones

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1601740


thank u...........

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 3:28am | IP Logged

ur sam is really a super woman.

u r portraying her beautifully..........love it!!!!

gr8 update!!!! 

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