Destiny's Play-Pt LXV,LXVI,LXVII-126,133,138-19/3 - Page 107

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey

gr8 part..
cont.sooon

Thanks janu. Posted the next update in a new thread.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes

omg this is not good

she should have just told him in the morning
hope they can get through this fight too.. 
con't soon


Yes, it is not. She couldn't tell him in the morning seeing his foul mood. If she did he could have blown his fuse then and there.  She never expected that he'll get to know so soon.  
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maangeetams

Whom can you blame? Geet tried her best to tell Maan but couldn't. Maan was understandably mad, couldn't expect less from him! Just smiling co-relating the parallel in the show. In both Maan is jealous,disturbed and ready to explode!

You really cant blame anyone here but circumstances.  Yes, there seems to be a parallel to the show but I resolve the misunderstandings I create in my fics, pretty quickly.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: simi91

wow the four parts

a maverlous oh what
creepy is arjun still
spying & i'm sure
his behind that man
singing  with geet
in the video i hope
they sort out there
problem without any
fuss poor dev i real
feel sorry for him
pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn

Simi, I think my next update will set your mind at rest.  Your other doubts will be clarified in the forthcoming updates.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PurplePetal

WOW...


So much has happened between Maneet's relationship...

Geet so desperately wants a baby i can understand that but hunny if you chase it will not come after like a butterfly but when you sit quietly and patiently it will come to you....
And they went on there Honeymoon...By God. Maan so romantic...Everything he did for his wife including the sightseeing and the his tactic to seduce his all to willing wife.....
At least Geet didnt think about the baby for a little while...

And this Kunal guy seriously needs to go get a life..Touching our Geet who loves Maan..but what angers me more is that Geet was so distant and than when she finally decides to confess somethings that isnt even her fault..Maan is ASLEEP...okay maybe he was tired but i just dont like..I wanted him to listen...

And What Geet did in the morning was justified...Seeing him lash out on a simple touch a kiss would make all hell break loose..but stupid Arjun..


You stopped at such an awful spot....I dont even know what is going to happen but Maan get did tell you but you were asleep..

Anyways...those were fabulous updates..Truly...AMAZING

Yes, wanting something too much can be counter productive. Maan can be romantic if he wants to and since he wanted Geet to forget about getting pregnant, he went full throttle and achieved what he set for. Kunal is a flirt. It is unfortunate that Geet confessed but Maan slept through it. Now that Maan has seen the video, he is understandably angry.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -shamima-

Ergh arjun is sure one low inhuman jerk I mean just so he could make maans life he'll he decided to use his sister in such a cheap way and poor geet she wanted to tell him the truth but circumstances didn't allow so and now she's unaware that her own brother showed that video of her to her husband in such a demeaning way anyways great updates can't wait to read more 😊

Arjun is the lowest of lives. He cares for no one but him. Posted the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 67
oh opti u had me to lose my temper early morning itself......................am so tensed about the next part....................that creep Arjun and Bansal i just wanna make their lives hell.........................ohho Geet took the courage to tell Maan everything but the guy slept.................and just for mere touching he reacted like that now dunno what hes gonna do...................cont soon now plz...................

I think my next update should have brought the smile back in your face, Deepa.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: swan20

oh the Mauritius trip was lovely.....glad they got some much needed time for themselves...😳

Arjun is a sicko...🤢.....he is destroying his own sister's life in his pursuit to get even with Maan.....🤔

hope Maan understands Geet & the MU doesn't last too long...

great parts.....waiting to know what happens next....😊


Thanks swan. Arjun is a really sadistic and sick man. My next update would have answered your hopes.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Link to Thread 5 with the latest update (pt 68):

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/40468670



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Posted: 13 years ago
Part LXII- LXIII
Geet is trying hard for a baby..
but poor gal being in stree  won't help her...
It would be cute to hav twins...
I am curious about this man.
I guess its Dev

Part LXIV
how could geet forget her 1st yr anniversary.
luved the fruit comparison jackfruit n mango
wow maan bought new car..
tats cool. but nth can b like bike ride..
tuely feels sorry for ani

Part LXV
Really feel sad for dev's life. his life in mess
But he is paying for wat he put geet's life in mess earlier
glad sam gav him another chance considering he was in drunk situation
I luved sam n dev's track. vry interesting.
tat arjun is such a jerk.
he is making fun of his own wife.

Part LXVI
wow honeymoon in Mauritius.. yummy yummy
maan made her forget her worries in a vry sensuous way.

Part LXVII
unexpected twist. hope geet isnt in trouble.
she told him when he was asleep.. poor gal.
hope she will manage to convince him.
ooh arjun. how could he go so cheap.
tat his sista;s life.