Destiny's Play-Pt LXV,LXVI,LXVII-126,133,138-19/3 - Page 63

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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey

gr8 part..
cont.sooon

Thanks janu.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: spvd

part 58
very lovely part.................so Adi and Pinky are in the family way.........only Maan and Geet are left.................good news over the celebration..............the kite scene was cute...............

part 59
whoa Sameera's life has never been in this picture this deep................wonder what happened in her life till date and happening.................who is that new boss of hers and her dad? loved Maan Geet scenes.................

cont soon................

Yes, Adi-Pinky are becoming parents before Maaneet.  Sam's life is slowly unfold.
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Posted: 13 years ago
no more updates today?

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Posted: 13 years ago
Will update tomorrow morning. Too tired.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update; the valentine's day contest portion was sweet.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awe good to see maan doing well with his hotel and baba getting better and awe the valentines day contest the answers maan and geet gave were awesome loved them truly showed their love for each other and ooh wonder what cause sameeras mum to be like that as she said that if she remembered about her dad then all the progress made would go down the drain hmm and wonder who sameera is working for anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
I read the last 7 updates in one go! Awesome!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: Opti

Thanks.  I've used the net to learn about the festivals and pen them down in the fic. Yes, Maan and Geet are made for each other, an ideal couple.



ooh u net it. I tot u might celebrate hav been celebrating it as u did explained it vry well.
Esp d ponggal parts.. thou I dont really like sweet stuff.. but d way u explained made me crave for ponggal.. πŸ˜† I even asked my mom if she can cook one for me.. My mom gav me a look of.. wats wrong wif u..
πŸ˜”

Part LXI
their competition part was good. luved d way 'ey explained each other.
Ur FF gives pleasant feeling to b read. No big scary twist.. which might gives heart attached..πŸ˜†
Its its tiny miny ones... n also ends well.. good good i like dis way..πŸ˜‰


who is dis new boss of sameera.. am vry curious now..
Is tat her father.. "monty".. d name is so cute.. "monty Monty" i like..πŸ˜‰
Glad there is some role for Sameera.. she is so sweet n good by heart person.
well wat happen to anwesha's character.. Hope u could make out some plot for her too..
Pity gal suffering from child lost n Arjun. I got doubt if he her really feeling sad for his baby.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: maangeetams

I love the smooth flow of your fiction, how you connect the incidents.

Another mystery angle in the strory! Interesting!

Thanks. Yes, a mystery which will unravel slowly as the story progresses.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: janvis70

Two contrasting updates..that is what I like best about you, Opti..you never cease to surprise..nothing predictable about your writing😊

  I thought I was fairly predictable.  Thanks, janvis, for thinking I am not!