Destiny's Play-Pt LXV,LXVI,LXVII-126,133,138-19/3 - Page 60

hey

part 58
very lovely part.................so Adi and Pinky are in the family way.........only Maan and Geet are left.................good news over the celebration..............the kite scene was cute...............

part 59
whoa Sameera's life has never been in this picture this deep................wonder what happened in her life till date and happening.................who is that new boss of hers and her dad? loved Maan Geet scenes.................

cont soon................

I love the smooth flow of your fiction, how you connect the incidents.

Two contrasting updates..that is what I like best about you, Opti..you never cease to surprise..nothing predictable about your writing😊

Thank You for this great ff....

hey great fanfic
plz add me in pm list
n pm me next part whenever u update

Opti, Sameera is a close friend of Maan's and Geet's and there was a stage in Maaneet's life's when both of them felt like they had let sameera down. Her happiness will be paramount to them and it will be really nice to see how she gets it. I think you should share her track as well. But if you are a little concerned about acceptance of it, try to see if you can make it parallel. As in, give us a parallel world of what is happening in Sameera's life and Maaneet's life simultaneously in some updates. I hope you understoof what I mean 😳

Nice part bt seems like sameera s role play will increase in coming parts.. Wondering who is her boss, may be dev or may be arjun, bt i would go with dev part. Anyway who is playing amrita here, helps in imagining better.

great part

Originally posted by: dia_ditz

wonderful..........love it!!
A complete package...........gr8 update!!

Thanks dia