~~~Critics Corner #8~~~ - Page 31

Originally posted by: Just.Shanak

@ simi, I have read you as a silent reader and loved your views, perspectives and opinions.
loved your poetry, SS and FF and also several threads including 'serious issues not RBO forte'

over all I love your POVs

But I beg to differ here. Just because a person is confused about his career and future, we can not tell him that anyways you are not doing much, so why not parent a kid.
he is not working presently because nothing seems to motivate him.
He was motivated for textile industry project by Khanak and he did it, he was motivated to prove himself in the rock on track, just because of his 'zid', and he did that, he was also motivated for reopening the factory in Dhulwadi to prove himself as a sincere person to Khanak, and he did it once again.

He is not doing anything right now, doesn't mean he will not do anything ever and doesn't want to do

he simply said that "Main pahle zindagi mein kuch banna chahta huu"
and I don't think that it is a lame excuse

sorry if I offended someone

Originally posted by: -SYS-

Why does holi have to have a song

Personally I would LOVE to hear the Odhani song on them at holi.

While Shaan drapes a rang smeared odhani around her

After he has drenched her head to foot😆

Acha no but seriously

Lots of nok-jhok, lots of cuteness, lots of them being their kiddy selves is what Holi should be about

Originally posted by: simiv

Hey thanks girl!! No offence at all!!

thanks dear, I knew that you would not take offence as there are very few people who have clarity of thought and concepts and can afford a healthy discussion - that is what made me quote and comment.

 

Of course, I didn't mean that at all!! Just becoz he's not working doesn't mean that he shud become a dad, of course not!! His first responsibility is to show that h can support a familyi.e., his wife and child on his own!!

Though he has very noble intentions..he hasn't really seemed to take any solid steps..

He seems to get motivated several times..but it doesn't last long!!

I would blame the CVs for it...why did they come back from Dhulwadi and start this preg track instead of showing Shaan interested in doing some real work..doesn't have to be successful right away but at least a serious attempt will be enough!! :)

Exactly my views, a hurried pregnancy track and messed up Boo pregnancy with Shaan losing out on the motivation is yet another blunder by CVs

 

P.S: Thanks a lot for reading:)

MY pleasure dear, you are one of the few writers on the forum who are a real treat to read

 PS : Write -ups in this forum made me become active from silent, you are one of them, apart from saaaz and manita ( I am quoting few of my favourites only, though we have several brilliant writers here)