I HATE YOU COZ I LOVE YOU-SAJAN OS - Page 3

Posted: 13 years ago
mindblowing marvelous superb wonderful cute os....love it sooo much.....sajan were sooo adorable...lovely os
Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by RadhikaBhushan



Hey frnds once again Radhi here... well this time nt
with new ss or os this time with new os... yes  i wrote
os... my first os.. i knw m nt gud at os.. i only can
write ss n ff... bt i tried my best... well this os
is by me.. ambika rqsted me to write for her one OS..
she wanted me to write abt samrat as boss n gunjan as
his PA.. so i wrote simple OS... hope you like it..
if u dont like it.. then plzzz tell me...
i will nt write any os again..... this os is on reqest....
well m nt good os writer like others... jst wrote it
in simple way....
luvd the concept......truly amazing.....plzzzzzz write more OS yaar.....tere OS likhne ka style sachme bonot accha h.....πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘




       .....I HATE YOU COZ I LOVE YOU......

we can see A huge building in middle of city big city
of Mumbai... people were in hurry to reach their
destination...we could see a girl was running ..
bt wait where is she goig?? omg she is entering in
shergill company...  she went to her floor...
as soon as she reached there.. every1 were staring at her
she knw she is late as usual.... poor gunjan....
Anni?(one of her frnd):gunjan fir se late.....?? aaj to
tu gayi.. sir 10 baar tere bare me puch chuke haii...
yup she is noother then our gunjan.... wearing salwar
suit n spects.... she bit her tongue... sooooooooooooooo cutttttteeeeeeee.....
😳
G:sry yaar bas nahi mil rahi thi...
A:ye to tuje sir ko bolna padega.... kyunki wo tera boss
haii aur tu  uski PA.
G(in mind):ab firse us khadus shergill ki daant padegii..
ha uska name na samrat shergill se jyada khadus shergill
lagta haii.. chal gunjan jaldi jaa... apne cabin me..
she went to her cabin.. n sat on chair.. n took out a
file frm her bag...πŸ€£πŸ˜†....very enjoyable.....
G:pehle ise check kar leti hu..kyunki sabse pehle us sadu
ko yahi file deni haii... she opened the file.. n a pic
fell frm it... n gunjan picked it up...
n we can see its our sammy's pic... she smiled seeing
his pic....😳😳
she started to talking with herself...
G:samrat matlab raja (king) mere dil ka raja..
pata haii tume dekhte hi tumme kho jati hu... mein tumse
itna pyar karti hu ki tum ho ki jab dekho tab muje daant
te rehte ho..par fir bhi mein tumse bahut pyar karti hu.
I LOVE YOU.. frm the day i saw u first time.. actually
love at first sight...bt I HATE U COZ I ONLY LOVE U SADU.
samrat shergill.. mera samrat... par itna khadus haii
ki kya bolu... par us khadus ke name ka matlab abhi
tak meine pura nahi kiya....oye hoye! kya likha tha yaar.....i was dancing.....luvd it.....❀️
she took a paper n wtote on it...
S for sadu
A for arrogant
M for monkey
R for rude
A for again  arrogant
T for... main hamesha T par hi kyu atak jaati hu.. mere
office ke pehle din se ise bana ne ki koshi kar rahi hu
par nahi ban raha haiii....chooooooooooooooooo chweeeeeeeeeetttttttttttt & cutttttttttttteeeeeeeee.....cnt imagine gunjan can do it......πŸ˜†πŸ€£
T for T for...she was thinking.....
just then out handsum hero samrat came to her cabin..
with angry face... n saw her lost in thoughts...
n saying T For t for....πŸ˜•πŸ˜•....bechari confused......
S:T for TIME PASS....lolzzzzzzzzz......πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
G:nahi yaar wo na khud time paas karta haii na kisi ko
karne deta haii.... she just said witout looking at
person...(having a pen in her mouth)....lolzzzzzzzzz....πŸ˜†....ROFLING.....🀣
S:miss gunjannnnnn... he shouted n gunjan looked at him
omg omg her boss samrat shergill....she scared n stood
immidetly..n hid his pic in her bag...
S:aap yaha time paas karne aayi haii...???😑😑😑....angry young man.....
G:nahi sir wo...😲😲
S:just shut up... aaj bhi aap late haii kaha thi aap..??
aaj bhi bus nahi mil rahi thi..??? ya fir aap ki tabiyat
kharab ho gayi thi...??aur file to complite ki nahi
hogi aapne...
G:nahi sir file complite kardi haii...
S:wow dats gr88 aap ne file complite kardi.... muje to
iske badle me party deni chahiye kyu?? said angrily..
G:nahi sir isme party kyu karenge kham kha kharcha
badh jayega.... said calmly....this was soooooooo funny....i fell down laughing..
πŸ˜†...πŸ˜†...🀣
n samrat hit file on her head...
S:dekho i dont want to argue with. u.. bt u r late
today so u have to work today till late...
G:ji sir..
S:dats good... n samrat left ...
gunjan sat on her chair..
G:tufan ki taraf aata haii aur tufan ki tarah chala
jata haii...aur muje sur se paav tak hila deta haii...
khadus khadus khadus... ye teen baar khadus kyu??
tu daily soap ki heroin haii?? chal ab kaam pe lag
warna samrat sher aayega aur tuje kha jayega...
heha heah aheah.. said in horror voice....πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
then she was busy in her work.. bt after every 5 minute
she took out his pic n saw him n smi
le..seeing  him...😳😳

At lunch break
gunjan n her frnd annie were eating lunch...
G:pata haii annie aaj bhi wo samrat ka meaning pura nahi
hua...πŸ˜”
A:oh god gunjan tu abhi tak us name ke piche padi haii
chhod na yaar...
G:nahi let me think...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

S for sadu
A for arrogant
M for monkey
R for rude
A for again  arrogant
T for... tring tring......

G:ab ye tring tring kya haii???πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
A:tere mobile ki ring.. gunjan took her cell n saw
my sweetu (samrat) calling.....😳😳....choooooooooooooooooooooooo chweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetttttttttttttttttt........!!!!!!
G:jab bhi me kuch gehri soch me hoti hu ye khadus bich
me aata haii...😳😳
she picked it ..
G:hello..
S:come to my cabin right nw...😑
G:par sir..
S:right nw...
n cut the call...gunjan made sad face..πŸ˜”
G:sadu khane bhi nahi deta.. ryt nw kahi ka...πŸ˜†
pata nahi mera number use kisne diya....
A:samrat shergill ki PA ne...πŸ˜†
G:ha ha pata  haii pata haii wo main hoo...🀣
have to go bbye khadus calling me...🀣
n she went to his cabin.. she knocke the door..
G:may i come in sir...
S:come... agnrily....😑
as gunjan came in he throw file at her...
gunjan scred.... seeing samrat so much angry...
S:wat the hell is gunjan ... meine tumhe file complite
karne ko di thi aur tumne... dekho us file ko... tum'
chashme lagati ho fir bhi nahi dekh raha haii tume..???
muje pata nahi meine tume is company me rakha kyu haii??
sabse bada idiot hi me jo meine tume apni company me
job di.. ise to accha hota ki mein ye company hi bandh
kard deta... USELESS ho tum... USELESS.....😑😑...((i hated samrat 4 a moment......))
ne gunjan is hurt she was crying hearing samrat's words...😭😭
kisi bhi chij ke layak nahi ho tum... idiot ho tum
idiot...sach me u r good for  nthing...
n saw her crying badly...😭😭
yah samrat daily scolding her bt today its too much...
his words hurts her... samrat saw her crying...
she slowly took the file n left his cabin....πŸ˜”πŸ˜”...kya hua ye...?? jo hua ye....dil ne jo chaha vo nahi ye....😭😭
S:gunjan ruko.. bt its too late she has already left..
S:oh god meine ye kya kar diya use hurt kar diya use
rula diya.. use USELESS or IDIOT or pata nahi kya kya
kaha... pata nahi main apni gusse par kyu control nahi'
kar paa raha hu... he sat on his chair.. i always do
dat to her... bt today it was too much... bt i hate her..
ya i hate her.. yup i hate u gunjan..
I HATE YOU GUNJAN COZ I LOVE YOU.....πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ....ye padhke i was doing balle-balle.....samrat also loves her....oye shava shava
frm the day i saw u i love u.. i dont knw y...
the words enoching in his cabin... n two tears droped
frm his eyes.....

At gunjan's cabin...
she was crying badly.. n compliting file....😭😭
G:samajta kya haii apne aap ko useless hu mein?..
ha gunjan agar usne kaha haii to tu useless hi haii.
boss is always right...n he called me idiot ryt he is ryt
coz i love him like an idiot.. n wiped her tears..
bt again she cried.. n yahh kya bola tha wo m good for
nthing...yah samrat shergilll u r ryt.. bt enogh is
enough ab me tumhari aakho me  mein mere liye itni nafrat
nahi dekh sakti.. mein nahi dekh sakti ki tum meri wajase
paresan ho is liye main tumse dur chali jaungi bahut
dur fir tume mujse koi problem nahi hoga...
mein aaj hi resign kar dungi..poor gunjan...!!!😭😭

n gunjan did all her word as she decided to finished
everything today.. as she will resign.....
on other side samrat coildnt consentrate on his work
as his mind is on gunjan...😳😳


Nw its 11 PM...
every1 has left .... bt sajan were still in office...
samrat saw clock...😳
S:its too late have to go..
n locked his cabin.. n saw light of gunjan's cabin..
S:ye iske cabin ki light kyu on haii..πŸ˜•πŸ˜•
he went near her cabin n saw her in her cabin..
she is working....
S:ye ab tak yaha kya kar rahi haii...
samrat opened the door.. n saw her still crying....
his heart pinched...πŸ‘
S:gunjan... gunjan looked up n saw samrat...
she again busy in her work..
S:gunjan tum ab tak yaha kya kar rahi ho???
G:apna kaam kar rahi hu.. then finished her work...
G:ye saari files haii jo aap ne muje work ke liye di
thi wo sab meine complete kardi haii...
S:itni sari file ek hi din mein.. ???
G:haa aur ye lijiye ise accept kar lijiye...
n gv him ab envelope....
S:ye kya haii??
gunjan remained silent.. samrat opened it n read
resignation letter... samrat was totally socked....😲😲
he looked at gunjan....
she packed everything...
S:tum kahi nahi jaa rahi ho??? main ye accept nahi karta...mazzzza aa gaya....πŸ˜ƒ
G:par ab main yaha nahi reh sakti...
n abt to go.. samrat held her hand...
G:mera hath chhod dijiye.... muje jaana haii...😭
n tried to free her hand.. n freed hersefl n abt to go
then samrat again held her hand n pulled her n pined her
again wall.... n gunjan saw he was really angry.....😲😲
both were so close... both were looking in each other's
eyes..😳
S:tum kahi nahi jaaogi yahi rahogi... samji.....πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ...kya attitude h....this was awesummmmmmmmmmmmmmm.....
said angrily n ordered her... n made his grip very tight
on her hand....😲
G:chhodiye muje dard ho raha haii.... n samrat freed her.
samrat was silent all the time..........
G:kyu rahu main yaha??? kyu???har roj aap ki daant sunni
padti haii... main manti hu ki har baar meri galti bhi
hoti haii...par main sry bhi to bolti hu... aap kehte
haii koi bhi kaam main thik se nahi kar sakti.... to aaj
maine aap ka saara kaam thik se kar diya....aur waise
bhi me useless hu mera ab yaha koi kaam nahi haiii..
kyunki mein to idiot hu na... n gunjan walked some steped
frm there... aur muj jaisi idiot ka yaha kya kaam haii..
n yah m also gud for nthing to aap muje kyu rok rahe haii
aap ise accpt kar lijiye aur muje jaane dejiye....😭😭....sooooooooooooo emotional....bechari gunjan.....😭

samrat slowly went to her... n finally he vroke the
silence...
S:sry.... gunjan was surprised....
G:nahi sir aap sry kyu bol rahe haii ... sry to muje
bolna chahiye .. jab se office me aayi hu aap ko paresan
kar rahi hu.. kabhi apke cabin me flowers rakh kar to
kabhi aap ke cabin me cards rakh kar..kabhi aap ke liye
gajar ka halwa laa kar to kabhi aap ke cabin me ko
arrange kar ke.... main har baar aap ko irritate karti
hu... par ab nahi karungi sir kyunki main aap ki life
se dur jaa rahi hu bahut dur taaki meri parchayi bhi
aap par na pade... ab aap ko har roj mera ye chehra
dekhna bhi nahi padega......how chweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet & cute this was.......😍
she again wiped her tears... both were facing each other.
n was abt to go... samrat held her hand...
S:plzzz mat jaao.... with broken voice....
gunjan turned n saw his white face....
G:main naa jaau???  aap to mujse hate karte haii na...
bahut nafrat karte haii na aap muje ... fir kyu????😭😭
nw samrat beacame angty...........😑😑
S:ha  ha mein nafrat karta hu mein tumse.. bahut nafrat
karta hu main tumse.... I HATE YOU DAMN IT
I JUST HATE YOU...nw she calmedn tears were on his
cheek... I HATE YOU COZ I LOVE YOU.............((this was the best moment 4 me in this OS....luvd it....πŸ˜ƒ))
gunjan was stunned.... hearing samrat 's words...
words were enoching on whole cabin....

I HATE YOU COZ I LOVE YOU...

I HATE YOU COZ I LOVE YOU...

I HATE YOU COZ I LOVE YOU...((tu bhi koi serial ki heroine h kya....teen teen baar???!!!πŸ˜†))

ha pyar karta hu main bahut pyar karta hu.. aaj se nahi
kal se nahi us din se jabse maine tume pehli baar dekha
tha... is liye main tumse nafrat karta hu kyunki main
sirf aur sirf tumse pyar karta hu.... is liye maine
tumse nafrat karna shuru kar diya kyunki main janta tha
main tumse pyar karne laga tha... is liye tumse hamesha
gussa rehta tha... hamesha apne gusse me apni nafrat me
apne pyar ko chupata tha.... par janti ho jab tum time
par office nahi aati to main tume dekhne le liye taras
jata hu... kyunki tum meri aakho ke samne nahi hoti...
is liye mein saara gussa tum par nikal ta hu... par
kabhi ye nahi puch paata ki tum kaha reh gayi thi aaj
late kyu aayi?? jab bhi tum mere cabin me flowers rakhti
thi ..to uski khooshboo mera din bana deti thi.. muje
khush rakhti thi.. aur har khushboo tumhare hone ka
ehsas dilati thi... jo mein nahi chahta tha... kyunki
uski wajase tum muje aur yaad aati thi aur jyada main
tumse pyar karne lagta tha... aur jab tum cards rakhti
thi wo saare words is dimag me is dil me print ho jaate
the jab bhi kuch likhne jaata tha.. wo saare words likhne
lagta tha.. dats y i hate it.. coz i dont want it...
bt still i love it... n love u...aur tumhara halwa khane
ke bad main tumse bahut nafrat karta tha.. kyunki halwa
khane ke bad muje duniya ka koi bhi khana accha nahi
lagta tha... main nahi kha paata tha.. kyunki jab bhi'
kuch khane ki koshish karta tha tumhare halwe ka test'
yaad aajata tha... aur tum kehti ho ki jab mein tumhara
chehra dekhta hu to main irritate ho jaata hu???? nahi
gunjan jab bhi main tumhe dekhta tha.. bas sirf tumhe dekhta
rehta tha.. n i hate to stare at u.. bt i cant control.
jab bhi tum mere paas aatti thi to mann karta tha apni
baahon me amet lu.. aur kabhi khud se door na jane du..
is liye mein tumse irritate ho jata tha coz i always
wanted u nthing else...n jab tum muje touch karti thi to
meri dhadkan meri saans sab kuch tham jaati thi...dats
y i hate you.. aur jab tum hasti thi to mein apne saare
gham bhul jata tha..jab tum hoti ho to mein apne aapko
akela mehsoos nahi karta tha... kya karu agar mera jeena
marna hasna rona sab kuch tumse haii to kya karu mein
n dats y i hate u/... I HATE YOU COZ I LOVE YOU..like
a mad crazily..... bt new u hate me.......((....hayye samrat main tujpe vaari jaava....mere sweetu.....😳))

n samrat was totally broken... n gunjan's happiness has
no bounds no one can desribe hw she feel nw... her love
loves her .. god.. wt a miracle... she stillcouldnt belive
dat samrat also loves her...bt his eyes says everything...((i can imagine it.....hayyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeeee.....😍))

G:yah i hate u ... I HATE YOU TOO COZ I LOVE YOU TOO..
both were freezed.... both confessed their.. love...((best moment of this OS...))
frm the day i saw u i love u... n u said dat i hate u..
jab bhi tum mujpe gussa hote the mein tumse nafrat karna
chahti thi bt i cant as i love you... dats y i hate u..
coz i only love u nt hate you.. pata haii mein office
har roj late kyu aati hu.. kyunki har roj raat ko sapne
me tum aate ho.. agar main apni aakhe kholti to tum
mere sapne se chale jaate... is liye mein har roj late
ho jaati hu... kuch bhi sochti hu to tumhara khayal
pehle aata haiii... har pal tumhari tasveer ko dekhti
rehti hu ki is tasveer ki tarah kab tum muje dekhke ya
mere liye smile karoge...sirf tumhare face hi smile dekhne
ke liye me saare kaam uslte sidhe karti hu.. par tum
hamesha daant dete ho.... n made face.. n seeing her
face samrat smiled ...((kya confession tha yaar.....truly mind-blowing...πŸ€— ))
G:aur ab mujpe hass bhi rahe ho...
as samrat was as much happy as gunjan .. as finally he
knew gunjan also loves him.....
without wasting any second samrat wrapped her in his arms
n hugged her tighly.. so nw no wrds to say anything..
thier hug said everying... n tears of joy were streaming
frm both's eys..... finally broke the hug....😳😳
n smiled seeing each other... as was nt able to speak
anything.. both were jst smiling on seeing each other..
finally gunjan spoke...
G:chalo na beithte haii..
samrat nodded... n samrat sat on sofa.. n gunjan was
about to sit on beside him.. samrat held her hand n
made her sit over his lap... having arms around her
waist...n gunjan pur her arms around his neck...😳...oyehoye....just luvd it....☺️
both were just staring at each other n  smiling constantly..
they got their love thier life...they were convaying
their messages through silence...n finally both laughed.
G:kitne stupid haii na hum... ek dusre ko is loiye hate
karte haii kyunki hum  ek dusre se pyar karte haii....
n started their talk.. n both were so engrossed in
each other.... samrat was telling her each n everything..
abt his life .. his nature.. his love everything...
n gunjan too...πŸ˜‰
G:aur pata haii meine tumhara name bhi banayahaii???
S:kaisa name jara main bhi to sunu???
G:abhi bata ti hu.... pata haii samrat ka matlab kya
hota haii....
S:kya???
G:
S for sadu
A for arrogant
M for monkey
R for rude
A for again  arrogant
T for... pata nahi kya wo abhi socha nahi haii...
S:kya tum muje saru arrogant.. monkey rude ye sab
bulati ho,..????😲.....((it was choooooooooooooo cutttttteeeeeee luvd his reaction....))
G:aur wo again arrogant to tum bhul gaye???πŸ˜†πŸ€£
n saw his angry face...😑
G:ab sry mere sweetoo par tum the hi aise.... plzz fir se
gussa mat hona???😳
samrat smiled...  n gunjan too smiled...😊
S:sweetu??/πŸ˜•πŸ˜³
G:haa tum mere sweetu ho .. mere phone main bhi yahi
tumhara name haii...πŸ‘....((perfect name 4 my samrat....😳))
S:accha?? pata haiii meine kya rakha haii???
G:kya???
S:Chashmish...😳
G:kya??? chashmish kyu?? with sock n sad face...πŸ˜•πŸ˜”
S:kyunki tum chashme pahen ti ho...
G:maine na tumhara name bulkul sahi rakha tha...
khadus...
S:khadus...???
G:haa kyunki tum khadus ho...
S:par abhi to sweetu tha...((double standars waali gunjan hmmm....))
G:abhi bhi par par thode khadus bhi... par abhi tak
tumhara wo name pura nahi hua..
T for.. T for.. she was thinking...
S:chashmish tum... bt gunjan said in exitement...
G:yaad aaya T for Tapori........ kaisa laga...πŸ˜•
n saw samrat was looking at her angrily...😑
gunjan made face..
G:nahi accha laga???
S:tume kya mein tapori lagta hu??? said in fake anger..
bt gunjan scared...((i totally agree with sweetoo....TAPORI???))
G: sry sir wo...
samrat laughed...πŸ˜†
S:chashmish tum bhi na... mein majak kar raha tha..
tum kitna darti ho mujse...
gunjan hit him playfully.... n hugged him.. 😳
G: waise ab jo mera samrat haii na wo us wale samrat
se bilkul alag haii...((hayye mai sadke jaawa...))
S:accha to wo kaisa haii??
G:
S for smart
A for awesum
M for mindblowing
R for Rapchik..
A for again awesum
T for ...((...awesum.....mind-blowing....samrat ka real defination....😳))
S:chashmish tum hamesha T par kyu atak jaati ho???
G:kyunki muje T nahi coffee acchi lagti haii...πŸ˜†πŸ€£
S:ye joke tha???
G:haa to...
S:i dont like joke...
G:i dont like u...((kuch kuch hota hai ki yaad aa gayi, by god...😍))
S:bt i love you....
G:me too...
n again stared each other...
S:i want to taste my taste.....
n samrat sloely pulled her closer by her waist...
both were so close... even air couldnt pass... both were
feeling wach others warm breath on each other's face..
n this warm breath make mad them.. n they were feeling
like they were on fire... n they wanted nthing then
just wanted to feel each other.. nthing else... just
wanted to taste world's sweetest taste... n gunjan finally
closed her eyes.. n put her arm around him tightly...
just allowing him to taste her.... actually she also
wanted to taste him... both didnt when they lips met...
they were just tasting each other... so sofltly..
they were brushing their lips with each other's...
n nw they started to pull each other so close to each
other... n making thier grip very tight on each other..
n soon it tunred into passionate oner... as they tasted
each other for the first time... they were just wanted'
this taste nw nting else... bt with great difficulty
they broke the kiss.. still both wanted to kiss each
other ... they were breathing heavily...((gosh! this scene.....made me blush realy hard....so passionate...so romantic......just awesummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm......☺️☺️☺️))
both were smiling..
S:my taste is world's best taste.. n dis taste is also...😳
n carred her lips with fingure... n again droped a soft
kiss on her lips... n saw her blushing......☺️
they hugged.... they broke the hug...n staring at each
other.. n gunjan slowly went near him n whispered in
his ear..
G: 'T' For Tasty..... n saw samrat was really smiling
widely... n gunjan blushed so she again hide herself..
on his chest....((oye hoye.....i dnt blive gunjan ne ye bola....naughty....😳))
S: I LOVE YOU.. jaan
G: I LOVE YOU.. Too mere tasty sweetu...😳

SAJAN's love lives for eternity.......
((....claps 2 u 4 this line....it was just mind-blowing....))

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Radhi...πŸ˜‰

radhika.....luvd it???!!! mera β€οΈ aa gaya h is OS pe...........
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz write more yaar........u've done a fabulous job.......
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HATS OFF.........πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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awesummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.............
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz write more.................
its my req..................plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.......
luv u........................wonderfullllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll OS.........
πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
luv, 
EKTA......😊
Edited by ekta_monaya - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
@ Ekta thnks for ur lovely cmmnt.........
yahh i will write another..
actually i have concept...
bt will turn it into OS very soon.....
n Ekta i really loved ur comment...
tuje bhi meri ka rog lag gaya..
puri story chhap ne ka.............lollzzzzzzzzzzzzz
bt really awesum cmmnt....................
Posted: 13 years ago
updated my comment on pg 3 Radhu!! Edited by Anjali_12 - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
Welcome back gosh πŸ€—
Fantastic,awesome  OS....................... Radhi
Cooooooooooooooooooooooool ...............too gud
loved d cncpt..............loved d whole part ..........fabbb job
write more !
luv
Muskaan
Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Radhi do write more OS it was superb ......
Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Radhi 1st of all Congrats 4 writing Ur 1st Os.....I must say The Os was cute and adorable....Each  scene n dialogue was Nice...

Samrat-The Boss,Gunjan - PA,boss Love at 1st sight N Both love one another But pretend they hate 2 hide their love,then confession of love,Gun in Sam LAP and Sajan intimate kiss
OMG! when I read this whole story I felt as if I was reading Full romantic MILLS & BOON Type storyπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰.............In M&B also boss n PA fell n love n pretend 2 hate n then unite in loveπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...Wow!! what a Story Radhii...Good work.....Samrat name Full Meaning- S 4 SADU etc was also niceπŸ˜‰.....Nice OS............................

Wasey RADHII Tumney MEREY SAMRAT KO KHADOOS Kaha😑😲 ........Pheley Joseph Neh SAM ko Khadoos kaha and Now U also.😲😲...AND Yeh Sam Bhi Thoda Khadoos Thoda Joseph Ke SAM Jasa Hai
.......πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†..........By the way πŸ˜‰Samrat Khadoos Nahi hai Sam is Excellent πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜ƒ..............

But really Radhii Story was Awesome ...
πŸ‘.........Do write more Os dear n Pm me whenever u write one....Thanks 4 PmπŸ€—...........................

Love Gunjan😊😊......................
Edited by 1gunjan7 - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
hey radhi
awesome os
loved it
beautiful concept
do cont soon
n thanks for the pm
Posted: 13 years ago
OMG!!!!!!!!!
radhika m fainting yar.
haye
T for tasty.
oh god
it ws so so so so romantic.
superb yar,awsw.
plz plz do rite mre os.
luv u
vritika

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