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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
Simi lovely lines

thank yu sweety

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@ priya -- i know dear thats y i write only one FF...n when that gets finished ....then will stop....
it happens...when u read so many...u get inspired....n in one way or the other when u write .,...u remember the seq that u read in other FF....

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@priya
beautiful part. poor tie

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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
EIGHTH PART: Tongue

MAN was first to break eye contact…….(im thinking y)

Straighten himself n GEET (now back to reality)

G: sorry….woh

M: mein dekh ke nahi chal rahi thi

G: ji………all confuse

M: yah fir bina dekhe chal na meri bachpan ki adat hai………said sarcastically

G: listen MR….i said sorry…..now totally annoyed…….for the first time in her life she said sorry when she was nt at fault n instead of accepting her sorry………he dare to shout at her…….. shout at GEET…GEET HANDA

M: Aur hogaya……tum ladki ya ki ahe problem hai……jan bhojke galti karo phir sorry bolke chale javo

G: bade batameez insane ho AAP……….

M: kya kaha tumne……..main batameez hu……..very very anger……..how dare she call HIM batameez….

G: aur nahi toh kya….. bhale insaan keh ke bhale logo ki insult nahi karna chahti hu mein ……

M: how dare u talk to me like that…….no one has ever talked to me like tht before…….

G: there is always first time to everything……giving winning smile to maan

Maan was about to answer back……..when his saw his favorite tie completely bath in coffee

M: OMG……look what u have done………said pointing to tie

By now geet also saw tie state……n said…...poor tie(what else would have geet saidD'oh

i knew it that was Maan
awesome pls conttttttttttHug

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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
@ kate -- lovely poem dear...was waiting for it....
thank yu jyoti MUAH

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NINTH PART: Tongue

M: this was my favorite tie(it was given to him by his dadi)………n more important I have meeting to attend what will I do now…….u stupid girl……..complain to geetn giving her IWILLKILLU stareAngry

Geet felt bad she didn't know why……..she gather her shopping bags n her purse….walk to maan…..grab his wrist n drag him along her out of caf……ignoring all looks she got from people in caf n outside

M: hey what r u doing………where r u taking me……..leave me………..r u crazy………I said leave me……..maan was yelling her to stop but this was our sherni geet (kya ishne kabhi kisi ki suni hai toh ab maan ki sunegiD'oh)

Geet took maan to men section of near department store…….n move toward tie section

Start looking for ties……….maan was totally lost in her……….he didn't know y he is standing here…….his heart felt something different every time she try putting tie next to his collar……..geet tried few ties but they didn't match his attire………

G: perfect……scream excited (holding beautiful red tie)like she found something valuable( ofcouse its priceless it's going to be maan's tie n everything about maan is priceless) ……which brought him back from dreamland to reality…..he was about to say something……..when again geet grab his hand n drag him along to check out counter……..maan again lost himself to geet touch……… geet paid for tie……..n turn toward maan who was standing like statue………he look like greek godDay Dreaming…….omg he is so handsomeEmbarrassed………wait rewind said geet…….did I just say he is so handsome (geet u even called him greek god before thtWacko)………geet how can u even thing about OTHER man like thisShocked….n more imp….. don't forget he is sadu. ……who shout at u ………..when u said sorry to him……….akadu kahi ka……walk close to maan


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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
@ priya...getting excited to read furthur...jaldi continue kar...
love the scene...bechari tie..

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Posted: 10 March 2011 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jyoti_l

@ priya -- i know dear thats y i write only one FF...n when that gets finished ....then will stop....
it happens...when u read so many...u get inspired....n in one way or the other when u write .,...u remember the seq that u read in other FF....


YEAH.........n.........then they will feel bad about it........ thts why i dont bother putting it on IF Wink

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