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Posted: 13 years ago
was feeling sad so wrote this mini..no.no..micro miniπŸ˜† scene...hope u like it...enjoy...

the night wind had something in it...like something special...like someone was near....someone special ...looking for her...
then suddenly the phone rang...
she began to wonder who will it be calling her at this time...
then she saw a pvt number flashing....
she instantly knew who it will be...
 she said-- now u remember me...
 he said -- sorry jaan...got busy...
 she said -- maan....aisa kab tak chalega...u r always busy...no time for me...
 maan -- my misti...mera har time to tumhara hai...
 misti -- ye to bas bolne ki baat hai...
 maan -- smiling -- accha bolo kya baat hai...mujhe yaad kar rahi thi..
 misti -- nahi padosi ko..
 maan -- geet...
 geet -- aur nahi to kya...aap to kabhi door hi nahi hote to kaise yaad karungi...
 maan -- knew what she was meaning to say but still he wanted to tease her -- matlab...
 geet -- ooff...hoo...babaji ab main inka kya karun....pyar ki baatein bhi nahi samajhte...
 maan -- babaji se baad me baat karna...pehle mere Q ka answer do..
geet - maan aap bhi naa...agar aap mere dil se door jaayenge tab hi to main aapko yaad karungi...
maan -- kya baat hai mrs khurana ...aaj bahut romantic ho rahin hai aap...
geet -- dhatt...aap bhi naa...waise aapko pata hai naa kal kya hai...
maan -- kal 4th april hai (this is the date when geet 1st aired)
geet -- wo to mujhe bhi pata hai...
maan -- kyun kuch aur bhi hai kya...
geet -- now getting angry  -- nahin kuch nahi hai...n she cut the call...
maan knew exactly what was the next day..
here geet cursing him -- babaji ye maan bhi naa.....kal hamari first anniversary hai....n inko yaad bhi nahin.....
jab inko kuch farak nahi padta....to phir main bhi kyun sochun...chaddo...
suddenly light were gone off of the whole house....
geet got scared...she was always scared of the dark...,
she decided to go n check downstairs...since every1 was fast asleep....it was nearly 12 in the night...
geet -- koi hai.....geet tu bhi kya bol rahi hai...apne hi ghar me puch rahi hai ki koi hai kya.....tu bhi naa jhalli hai...
suddenly a pair of hands gripped her...one her mouth n another her waist...n someone said in her ears...HAAPY ANNIVERSARY MY MISTI...
she couldnt believe it...maan was there....she immediately turned n hugged him...n said -- AAPKO BHI....
suddenly the whole living room was lit...n it was decorated with her fav red roses n all the family members were there saying happy anniversay....
sh ecouldnt believe it...
geet -- aapko yaad tha...
maan -- tumhe kya laga...ki main apni zindagi ka sabse khubsurat pal bhul jaaonga...never....not even death...
she closed his mouth n said nodded in a no...
family -- agar aapka romance ho gaya ho to cake to cut kar lijiye...
every1 was laughing n geet was trying hard not to blush...
they enjoed the rest of the night...πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 7thHeaven

Sorry guys . . . but I have to write this . . .

My love letter to the CVz . . .
CVz go to hell . . . wait don't go to hell . . . go to black hole . . . and let that hole suck you like a leech . . . The show has always been about Geet's struggle and how she overcame all the odds of life . . . yes the love story is a part of the chow but it is not the THEME of the show . . . Geet left her family, her life, her everything behind for the baby and you killed him . . . how could you . . . now MSK who never loses has lost the biggest battle . . . he couldn't save the baby . . . all that Geet sacrificed is for nothing . . . 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

I believe CVs have to really make upto this loss...
 
To my surprise many of the viewers have been dreaming of this MC and they are happy about it...how could they?...its cheap thinking going on in their mind that Maneet can have their peaceful SR...Such cheap thoughts...Maneet were soo happy and eagerly waiting for this baby. How can they lead a peaceful life when such a desaster has happened in their life...Now what next is a biig biig challenge and CVs have to make up to this in  a very hard way.
 
In real life MC hurts...I know as myself have experienced this...how easily some of these immeture viewers demanded MC and CVs have happily accepted it...God save GHSP
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

@jyoti grt, yes her writing skill is brilliant. give me other ff links also.
I'll read them tomorrow

 
DILIBADAT is great
read pinjar also
Maan potrays a minister
and Geet his wife (13 yrs age difference)
it aims to problems tha women face in their day to day life
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: smj1977

 
DILIBADAT is great
read pinjar also
Maan potrays a minister
and Geet his wife (13 yrs age difference)
it aims to problems tha women face in their day to day life


ok I'll read that also
thanks shruti for giving me the link
I loved already crime in passion 
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Posted: 13 years ago
https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1594230 RUHANIYAT

by the same writer...it has ended...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1


ok I'll read that also
thanks shruti for giving me the link
I loved already crime in passion 

 
then try Ruhaniyat (completed)
a different Geet who rules Maan
amazing with her Marlboro
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom

I believe CVs have to really make upto this loss...
 
To my surprise many of the viewers have been dreaming of this MC and they are happy about it...how could they?...its cheap thinking going on in their mind that Maneet can have their peaceful SR...Such cheap thoughts...Maneet were soo happy and eagerly waiting for this baby. How can they lead a peaceful life when such a desaster has happened in their life...Now what next is a biig biig challenge and CVs have to make up to this in  a very hard way.
 
In real life MC hurts...I know as myself have experienced this...how easily some of these immeture viewers demanded MC and CVs have happily accepted it...God save GHSP


really I don't understand that kind of people who and how thy  think after this devastation maaneet will have sr now or happy.
 they r dreaming about the baby and they lost it.
really some immature and child viewers only can demand of mc
sorry to hear it lakshmi πŸ€—

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Posted: 13 years ago
@jyoti beautiful . continue karo and post it on main TM thread.
thanks jyoti for the link
@shruti thanks dear ,I'll read both of them tomorrow.
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Posted: 13 years ago
was feeling sad so wrote this mini..no.no..micro miniπŸ˜† scene...hope u like it...enjoy...

the night wind had something in it...like something special...like someone was near....someone special ...looking for her...
then suddenly the phone rang...
she began to wonder who will it be calling her at this time...
then she saw a pvt number flashing....
she instantly knew who it will be...
 she said-- now u remember me...
 he said -- sorry jaan...got busy...
 she said -- maan....aisa kab tak chalega...u r always busy...no time for me...
 maan -- my misti...mera har time to tumhara hai...
 misti -- ye to bas bolne ki baat hai...
 maan -- smiling -- accha bolo kya baat hai...mujhe yaad kar rahi thi..
 misti -- nahi padosi ko..
 maan -- geet...
 geet -- aur nahi to kya...aap to kabhi door hi nahi hote to kaise yaad karungi...
 maan -- knew what she was meaning to say but still he wanted to tease her -- matlab...
 geet -- ooff...hoo...babaji ab main inka kya karun....pyar ki baatein bhi nahi samajhte...
 maan -- babaji se baad me baat karna...pehle mere Q ka answer do..
geet - maan aap bhi naa...agar aap mere dil se door jaayenge tab hi to main aapko yaad karungi...
maan -- kya baat hai mrs khurana ...aaj bahut romantic ho rahin hai aap...
geet -- dhatt...aap bhi naa...waise aapko pata hai naa kal kya hai...
maan -- kal 4th april hai (this is the date when geet 1st aired)
geet -- wo to mujhe bhi pata hai...
maan -- kyun kuch aur bhi hai kya...
geet -- now getting angry  -- nahin kuch nahi hai...n she cut the call...
maan knew exactly what was the next day..
here geet cursing him -- babaji ye maan bhi naa.....kal hamari first anniversary hai....n inko yaad bhi nahin.....
jab inko kuch farak nahi padta....to phir main bhi kyun sochun...chaddo...
suddenly light were gone off of the whole house....
geet got scared...she was always scared of the dark...,
she decided to go n check downstairs...since every1 was fast asleep....it was nearly 12 in the night...
geet -- koi hai.....geet tu bhi kya bol rahi hai...apne hi ghar me puch rahi hai ki koi hai kya.....tu bhi naa jhalli hai...
suddenly a pair of hands gripped her...one her mouth n another her waist...n someone said in her ears...HAAPY ANNIVERSARY MY MISTI...
she couldnt believe it...maan was there....she immediately turned n hugged him...n said -- AAPKO BHI....
suddenly the whole living room was lit...n it was decorated with her fav red roses n all the family members were there saying happy anniversay....
sh ecouldnt believe it...
geet -- aapko yaad tha...
maan -- tumhe kya laga...ki main apni zindagi ka sabse khubsurat pal bhul jaaonga...never....not even death...
she closed his mouth n said nodded in a no...
family -- agar aapka romance ho gaya ho to cake to cut kar lijiye...
every1 was laughing n geet was trying hard not to blush...
they enjoed the rest of the night...πŸ˜‰
 
 
super fantic my dear jyoti
MUAHβ€οΈπŸ€—
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: smj1977

 
then try Ruhaniyat (completed)
a different Geet who rules Maan
amazing with her Marlboro

Pls. Give me the link of dilibadat...