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Next scene:- maaneet return from handa haveli , geet is silently cooking food when maan said geet.


Maan:- oh.. mein'.

Geet:- aap kab se mujhse aise baat karne  lage ho.

Maan:-oh jab se tum mujhe chor ke chali gayi thi.

Geet :- mein jana nehi chathi thi.

Maan:- I know all is my fault.I'm

Geet:-pls maan. I don't want to discuss those things .

Maan:- but I want to I want to know everything from u what happen to u ? where u went .I searched u all where but may be my effort is not ok.cause I'm deserve that punishment to stay here alone, lived the live with out u.

Geet turns and said maan, and they have small eye lock but geet's eyes r blank nothing in her eyes.

Maan closed his eyes and tears falls from there when he feels some one wipes his tears .He recognize her touch and just hugged geet and buried his head in her hair and crying there  silently.

Geet want to hug him but her hand is not raising.

Maan want to poured all the emotion which r increasing .

Maan freed geet when they heard mk called maan.Da'da..da..da

Maan turns to left when geet hold his hand and wipes his eyes and said pls wash ur face.

Maan nodded in no and said bahut dino baad kisine chua hain jo mere jaan hain uske feelings mein wash nehi karunga and then left the kitchen.

Geet stand there and thinking about the incident



Here in the room mk is pacing here to there and nanny is standing far away from her and fearing.

Maan enter there and said what happen sweet heart?

Mk:- da'da'da'da'e'is'.ou'r pics'

Geet:-we will hang them tomorrow.

MK:-ok bu't'wh'ere'is'my''I'wa..nt'to'play'wit..h'.da..d'a

Maan:- we will beta, but today without toys.


Maan sit in his knees and told nanny give him that cloths and then said to mk now bind my eyes.

Mk start crying and said'ko..da..rd'''

Maan :- nehi sweet heart.

Geet sit besides maan and said muskan , this is another game , me and ur dada played lots this,

Both looks at each other and understand the meaning.

Mk:-sac'c'hi, da..da..ko'da..rd'hua..toh'

Maan:-nehi hoga'. Then geet tie maan's eyes and both start the play after some time maan hold geet tightly and said sweet heart tum itna lambi kaise ho gaye?

Geet look at maan where mk and nanny giggling .

Maan understood something is wrong  and opne the blind and found geet on his arms.and look at the floor and then heard nanny and mk is giggling



Maan freed geet and said oh..mein.oh'actually.

Now mk laughing and said toh '.aab'ma'm..a. ka 'ey'.es b'in..d.ka'r'na ho'ga'

Maan look at geet and geet look at maan then geet said mujhe kaam hain.

Mk:- ma'ma.. do'n't lo've'mk'

Geet rolled her eyes and said bilkul aape gaye hain.

Then maan come to bind her eyes when geet said mein kar lungi.

Maan said but oh tight nehi hoga, agar tum dekhne lagi tab toh mein aur humara sweetheart pakre jayenge.

Geet looks at maan with wide eyes and then maan came close to her and said huskily sorry jaan and just close ur eyes. The bind geet's eyes.

After that geet is starting to search maan and mk .

Here mk is running from there and collide with some one.

Mk look at the person and then said aap'.

Here geet hold maan and said aap'..

Geet open her blind and looks at mk and said where is mk now.

Maan just look at geet and then slowly tuck one of the strand of hair behind the ear and said jaan , she is safe just went down stairs.

Geet want to go there when maan hold her and said pls stay here na.

Geet just look at him and then said mujhe kaam hain.

Maan:-pichle 7 saal se toh kaam kar rehi hon thora aab iha ruk jao.

Geet:- aapko bahut kaam hoga.

Maan:- tumse jada nehi.tum aur muskan is my life jaan, I know u don't trust me and I deserve it but trust me jaan I'll prove  it.I'll win ur trust again and I know still I'm staying in ur heart just to need those beats beat again in my tune and kissed her nose and said let's go.

Geet just listen all things and try to understand and trust this again but her brain give her fear signal  




Here in the down stair mk said that person''

Where dadi ma came there to meet maan and want to talk with him when she heard laughter and thinks after more than 7yrs here some one laughing freely.

Dadi ma look at mk and found her standing , talking style almost similar like maan but her face, hair,eyes r like geet. She is defo mixture of maaneet.she is naughty also. Just like maan.

Dadi ma bend down and said yes beta.aapke mama.dada kaha hain.

Mk:-oh..toh..h..u.m. sa..b kh..el..rehe the'.toh'sab..upar..hain'

When she heard aap iha kya kar rehe hain.

Dadi looks at maan and said hume aapse kuch baat karna hain.

Maan:- kya.

Dadi:-oh ekele mein

After hearing this , geet try leave when maan held her wrist and said iha boliye geet ke saamne,uar ha agr aap mere geet ke rist ke baarein mein soch rehe hain kuch bolenge toh I'm going.

Dadi ma:-oh mein'.

Precap:- maan met an accident.

Dadi ma want to help from GK


Next Part:

Dadi ma:-oh mein.

Suddenly geet's phone ring and she excused herself when maan said dadi ma .I respect but ols now give us some time I need to spend time with my family they need me more.then call muskan come here.

Mk runs to her dada and raised her hands to take her in his arms.

That day they eat their dinner with muskan's non stop chatting with maan.

Geet:- dono baap beti kitne bolte hain

Next day morning, maan :--geet, mujhe kuch kaam hainjana parega but I'll return soon. Daya fter tomorrow we will go to muskan's school.


Maan turns to leave then turns and kissed geet's forehead and said I'll be back soon jaan.

Geet look at maan and try to feel that kiss but again don't kwno what happen to her.

At the evening, geet get call from office that maan met an accident and rushed to hospital.

She entered the room when maan talking with doctor.

She just hugged him and said r u alright.

Maan look at her and find she is shaking and indicates doctor to leave them alone.

Maan hugged her back and said yes jaan, it's just minor cut in hand and forehead.

Geet came out from his embraced and said oh mein.

Maan :-jaan , u have full rights on me. Its' ok.don't hold ur self . now let's go .

Here dadi also heard the news and come to meet maan.

Here geet is talking to khan when dadi said where is my grand son .

Khan:- he is room no205 ,

Dadi :-ok but I want to meet gk who promised to save my grand son but I heard she is in leave to spend time with her hubby and daughter.

Khan shockingly  look at dadi to gk then said gk is here.

Dadi;- u promised us to save him and protect him but ..anyway I need ur help.

Gk turns and dadi said tuuummmmmmmmm.


Precap:- reason behind accident and who is the planner


Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 13 March 2011 at 2:51pm

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 4:30pm | IP Logged
very very sad update diiiii ab to maneeet ko milado ufffff dey r parted from very long now plzzz make dem together pooor geeet she is hurting so much anyways i loveeeee da mk-maan scenes awwww he cant get enough of mk awwwww jst loveeeee dem do continue sooon

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 5:37pm | IP Logged
when will the truth come out????
i can't wait it anymore!
continue soon!

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 5:39pm | IP Logged
awesome..... waiting for the day when they finally stop misunderstanding each other...
but i knw my wait will be fruitful....

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 6:32pm | IP Logged
good one ya

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 7:47pm | IP Logged
when will raj come to know abt his gudiya
what will happen in the engagement
wht will geets reaction
mk saying saying da da to maan in front of everyone
sameera behaving as if she is officially engaged to maan?
in one way maan was not letting go off sameeras hand from him but after seeing geet he spat her hand off ?
plse clear all the misunderstaning bet maaneet

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 8:06pm | IP Logged
Nice update......I want to write huge comment on this update so will comment later.......btw PLZ update Embarrassed

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