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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 10:43am | IP Logged
For some reason I feel the story is not progressing in this one.. :( how come Maan cannot see any clues around him e.g he saw the name plate when it was wrong but never glanced out again, or did  not question why Geet was asking about Davis?..all I read is pain..sorry Muskaan u r a great writer but the pain which u depict really well is very difficult to read atm...

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 11:28am | IP Logged
What anger does to the lives is really something we need to learn from this ff....Anger, ego and lack of communication breaks even the strongest of the relations.......Cry

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 11:52am | IP Logged
lovely... :)

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 1:00pm | IP Logged

I am in love with TRULY MAGICAL, and even I don't know how much!!!

have loved every aspect of this ff...even the sad parts even though I don't want to accept...but they are a part of maaneet's journey,bringing them closer each time...with each new challenge.......
              the reason i joined IF was TM!!!
can never appreciate it well enough....
Sadly, i am neither a writer, nor a poetCry
but, still, want to write something for this beautiful fan fic which has made inroads into my life so deeply.........
 
Truly Magical....what made me fall in love with this story....this journey so badly????
Is there an answer...yes there is....but it can't be put to words......
there aren't enough words, or should i say words good enough to describe it......
 
Love their magical love.......
Loved the way it all began.....
she barged into his car and his heart sank.....
she smiled and chatted all the while,
while he just stared and accepted it was MAGICAL.....
cupid struck him, it was love at first sight,
dreaming about her through the day, and thinking sleeplessly through the night!
fate had conspired to get them together,
getting her to the party which was in his honour!!!
bacchan she called him, never bothered to know the real name,
he helped her sneak out, fate and its game.....
a dress change in the car, and a surprised maan,
forgetting his watch with her, while she ran on.......
the alarm at 5:30, and the first call,
loads of teasing, chatting....sighhh...the endless call!!!
talking at 5:30......talking through his exercise....sleeping, only to be woken up by his call....
going to college still on call......sitting through lectures/meetings and still on callShocked
calls became a habit, the person an obssession......
in due course of time, love blossomed.....
the karva chauth on the very 2nd meeting......
the beautiful night and the ring.....
the coffee meets at taj, the golf sessions on the grass.....
the roothna, the manaana.....
going to mumbai making him her deewaana!!
the sports meet...Geet Impressed by MSK...
but,still maintaining her loyalty to her bachhan, the real MSK!!
the petty fight turning serious.....
Maan leaving for camping very furious!!
her following him, lying to her parents.....
and getting stuck in the jungle after fighting with the terrorists!!!
the sensous and akward moments and the gunshot,
Finding out finally that he is a BIGSHOT!!!
The unlimited support for the army interview......
the painful tiff n going out of each other's view!!!
the pain of seperation, n the joy of union.....
all coz geet's dream was abandoned.....
it was the love that mattered,it was the love that she cared for.....
it was just his company, that she craved for!
The sudden wedding, the love behind rushing....
the non-acceptance.....the fake denial.....
the sweet and subconcious acceptance making his heart swell!!!
the big surprise.....the great birthday,
the day and venice and geet getting tipsy.......
the fight some time later....ahhh...the painful period...
don't even want to think about it as my heart just shattered!!
The closeness, the control......
the gestures....loved them all!
Coming back to india.....the pain of being away,
the sleepless nights, the lonely days.....!!!
The trip to London....the misunderstandings....
Geet understanding it all,
her love was unconditional!!!
the misunderstanding, which made them oneEmbarrassed
life becoming a blissful one.....
the problems again.....the hurtful words....
The realisation.....but far she was.....
SEVEN YEARS OF PAIN......SEVEN YEARS OF SEPERATION......
SEVEN YEARS OF HOPE....SEVEN YEARS OF LONGING......
SEVEN YEARS OF REGRET......SEVEN YEARS OF LOVE......
SEVEN YEARS OF HURT.......SEVEN YEARS OF HARDENING.....
SEVEN YEARS OF WAITING.......SEVEN YEARS OF FAITH....
SEVEN YEARS OF LOVE......SEVEN YEARS OF JR. MK.....
meeting after seven years, with pain in eyes.....
seven years of hope......seven years of lies.....
a wish to apologise....
a wish to be loved, to be safe in his eyes.....
misunderstanding....love for mk......
love in her heart...geet becoming gk.....
 
 
 
MONTHS OF LOVING THIS JOURNEY.....
PAIN TO SEE THEM AWAY......
WAITING FOR MSK AND GK TO BECOME MAANEET.......
THIS IS WHAT WE ALL PRAY!!!
 
 
PHEW!!!
I know its veryyyy long....and not too well written either...but i am posting it nevertheless!!!
it shows my DEEWANGI for TRULY MAGICAL, as I go crazy in the KASHISH  and MADHOSHI and drown in their PYAAR KA EHSAAS!!!
 love you muski di....Hug
thanks for giving us these amazing ffs which are now a beautiful part of my life!!
Love
Swati


Edited by princess163 - 13 March 2011 at 1:01pm

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
such a short update muski.........loved it........both of dem r in pain.........unless things r cleared they will suffer.........i want maan to say geet is his wife is something comes up..........its not dat geet needs anybody bt he has to do whts right........she needs him n he needs her.......mk in lenhga.........wow........maan will go crazy to c his princess like dat............

loved d update...........


Edited by maanmeet1 - 13 March 2011 at 1:06pm

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
loved it n i hope bcoz of sam there doesnt be a misunderstanding again

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 1:46pm | IP Logged
uuuuffffff !!!!!!!!!!!1 so much pain ... Cry ... stupid no no he is a coward! 

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
Haaaye more n more confusionOuch poor Maan n bechari Geet .. as if they havent suffered enough till now Ouch

seems like their MK is the only one who knows how to comfort them when they r in pain n the one who knows when they r in pain



Edited by Sia89 - 13 March 2011 at 2:00pm

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